高考英语写作复习公开课PPT学习教案
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2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身
穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with
short brown hair and a white jacket.
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3)借助介词短语做状语
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
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高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 。
语 句 子 ” 。 其实， “ 规范 的英语 句子” 就 是 我们经 常讲的 三种 句子：
some difficult idioms. 第11页/共44页 ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
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写作中复合句常见的错 误
1.只有从句，没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm. → The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.
do with me.
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Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：
1)借助名词短语做同位语
如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生； 籍贯：广东。
Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.
3) 状语从句
如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动 。I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
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学
用一句话表达
会
运 用
① Kate is a new student.
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4.过多地使用并列句组合信息
① It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.
→ It is a beautiful day with the sun
shining
②
and a breeze blowing. We were driving out into
hecontraryinsteadonehandonotherhandjustlike表示因果关系sohereforebecauseowing三学会使用恰当的连接词第37页共44页表示时间顺序关系shortafterwardsnextheendeventually表示递进强调关系besidesfurthermore此外whatsmoreadditionmoreover而且worsestillmakemattersworse表示解释说明关系namel也就是actuallyotherwordsruthaccordingyouknowhewholeconclusioninally三学会使用恰当的连接词第38页共44页注意表达的高级化一使用较高级的词汇doesntmatterwhethercollegedoesntmakeanydifferencewhether80studentshold80studentshold80studentswhohold80studentsholding非谓语定语从句同位语从句二巧用精彩句式第40页共44页分析原因注意一句分析原因注意一句severalseveralfactorsfactorscontributechanges
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2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子
① The hall is different from all other buildings , iwt hisicmhaisdemoafdgelaosfsg. lass.
② The old man thought of his son, tweiatrhstceaamrse comdionwgndforwomn fhroismfahcies. face.
bus.
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请看范例
My English Learning
① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as 从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英
=When he heard the news, he was happy.
B) Compound sentenceA: He gave me a book but I forgot to
bring it back home.
C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to
English and Chinese at the same time. ③ This will affect their Chinese study.
That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.
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第三步：合并句子 ① Not everyone is good at learning E②ngClihsihld. ren from primary school start to
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III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复 合句： 1) 名词性从句
如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。 That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry. 2) 定语从句
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如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点： 地大物博、人口众多、资源丰富。 China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.
语
② Children from primary school learn English
动
and Chinese at the same time.
词
③ This will affect their Chinese study.
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第三步：合并句子 ① Not everyone is good at learning E②ngClihsihld. ren from primary school start to learn
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较 复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能 力。
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经典案例：广东08高考 句子表达有何亮点？
① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
复 ② She comes from a northern
合 province.
句 和
③ She speaks a dialedieva,fhialniaencnrceded,tws.tipostetuauhnkdadseernardtsdtfiartaonolmedcu.tanwndhoierctrhhsewtraennd
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II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句： 如：他给我钱，我不要。 He gave me a lot money but I refused. 如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。 I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.
高考英语写作复习公开课
会计学
1
平均分： 约15分
峰值： 17~19分 最吃亏学生群： 中等左右学
生 书面表达是提分最大的 潜力股
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高考满分作文
I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.
the
country,
and
we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,
→ Aansdwtehwe ebruesdwraivsicnrgoowudteidn.to the country, we
saw our English teacher riding in a crowded
动
词
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学
不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时
会
学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。
运
第一步：拆分成几个简单句
用 复 合
①不是人人都能学好英语。 ②小学生同时学汉语和英语。
句
③这会影响汉语学习。
和
第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句
非 谓
① Not everyone is good at learning English.
With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.
4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。
They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.
2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身
穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with
short brown hair and a white jacket.
第14页/共44页
3)借助介词短语做状语
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
第5页/共44页
高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 。
语 句 子 ” 。 其实， “ 规范 的英语 句子” 就 是 我们经 常讲的 三种 句子：
some difficult idioms. 第11页/共44页 ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
第7页/共44页
写作中复合句常见的错 误
1.只有从句，没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm. → The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.
do with me.
第12页/共44页
Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：
1)借助名词短语做同位语
如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生； 籍贯：广东。
Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.
3) 状语从句
如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动 。I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
第18页/共44页
学
用一句话表达
会
运 用
① Kate is a new student.
第9页/共44页
4.过多地使用并列句组合信息
① It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.
→ It is a beautiful day with the sun
shining
②
and a breeze blowing. We were driving out into
hecontraryinsteadonehandonotherhandjustlike表示因果关系sohereforebecauseowing三学会使用恰当的连接词第37页共44页表示时间顺序关系shortafterwardsnextheendeventually表示递进强调关系besidesfurthermore此外whatsmoreadditionmoreover而且worsestillmakemattersworse表示解释说明关系namel也就是actuallyotherwordsruthaccordingyouknowhewholeconclusioninally三学会使用恰当的连接词第38页共44页注意表达的高级化一使用较高级的词汇doesntmatterwhethercollegedoesntmakeanydifferencewhether80studentshold80studentshold80studentswhohold80studentsholding非谓语定语从句同位语从句二巧用精彩句式第40页共44页分析原因注意一句分析原因注意一句severalseveralfactorsfactorscontributechanges
第8页/共44页
2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子
① The hall is different from all other buildings , iwt hisicmhaisdemoafdgelaosfsg. lass.
② The old man thought of his son, tweiatrhstceaamrse comdionwgndforwomn fhroismfahcies. face.
bus.
第10页/共44页
请看范例
My English Learning
① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as 从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英
=When he heard the news, he was happy.
B) Compound sentenceA: He gave me a book but I forgot to
bring it back home.
C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to
English and Chinese at the same time. ③ This will affect their Chinese study.
That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.
第21页/共44页
第三步：合并句子 ① Not everyone is good at learning E②ngClihsihld. ren from primary school start to
第16页/共44页
III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复 合句： 1) 名词性从句
如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。 That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry. 2) 定语从句
第17页/共44页
如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点： 地大物博、人口众多、资源丰富。 China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.
语
② Children from primary school learn English
动
and Chinese at the same time.
词
③ This will affect their Chinese study.
第20页/共44页
第三步：合并句子 ① Not everyone is good at learning E②ngClihsihld. ren from primary school start to learn
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较 复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能 力。
第6页/共44页
经典案例：广东08高考 句子表达有何亮点？
① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
复 ② She comes from a northern
合 province.
句 和
③ She speaks a dialedieva,fhialniaencnrceded,tws.tipostetuauhnkdadseernardtsdtfiartaonolmedcu.tanwndhoierctrhhsewtraennd
第15页/共44页
II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句： 如：他给我钱，我不要。 He gave me a lot money but I refused. 如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。 I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.
高考英语写作复习公开课
会计学
1
平均分： 约15分
峰值： 17~19分 最吃亏学生群： 中等左右学
生 书面表达是提分最大的 潜力股
第1页/共44页
第2页/共44页
第3页/共44页
第4页/共44页
高考满分作文
I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.
the
country,
and
we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,
→ Aansdwtehwe ebruesdwraivsicnrgoowudteidn.to the country, we
saw our English teacher riding in a crowded
动
词
第19页/共44页
学
不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时
会
学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。
运
第一步：拆分成几个简单句
用 复 合
①不是人人都能学好英语。 ②小学生同时学汉语和英语。
句
③这会影响汉语学习。
和
第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句
非 谓
① Not everyone is good at learning English.
With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.
4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。
They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.