B3Unit-4-writing解决问题类作文

__t_h_e_s_p_ace.
5. 因此食物可以被放在试管里，从而我就能更容易地
吮吸它。
①被放在
b__e_p_u_t_i_n_
②能，能够
_b_e _a_b_l_e _t_o_
③更容易地
_m_o_r_e_e_a_s_i_ly_
④把本句翻译成一个含有and的并列句:
_S_o__it_c_o_u_l_d__b_e_p_u_t__in__a_t_u_b_e_a_n__d_t_h_e_n_I__w_o_u_l_d_b__e_a_b_l_e_t_o
On the earth, it is easy for us to eat and drink. But in the space, the gravity is so weak that the food will float around. I would have to take all my food with me if I went to the moon. So it could be put in a tube and then I would be able to suck it more easily. Perhaps I
①在太空上
i_n__th_e__sp__a_ce__
②到处漂浮
_fl_o_a_t _a_r_o_u_n_d_
③用so. . . that. . . 结构翻译成一个含有结果状语从句的句
子: But in the space, the gravity is so weak that the food will __________________________________________________ float around. ___________
⑤用虚拟语气翻译此句:如果我参观月球，将会有一个
我可能将要面对的问题: 怎样(在月球上)吃喝。 I_f _I_v_i_si_t_e_d_t_h_e_s_p_a_c_e_,_t_h_e_re__w_o_u_l_d__b_e_a__p_r_o_b_le_m__I__m_i_g_h_t_be f_a_ce_d__w_i_t_h_:_h_o_w__t_o_e_a_t_a_n_d__d_r_in__k_. ____
9. 终究我会尝试一下。 ①尝试 _h_a_v_e_a__tr_y_ ②终究 _i_n_t_im__e ③翻译此句: _I_w__il_l_h_a_v_e__a_t_r_y_i_n_t_im__e_.
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Step 3 润色组篇(注意使用关联词if; but; so; perhaps等 )
If I visited the space, there would be a problem I might be faced with: how to eat and drink.
(3)得出结论 ①In a/one word/To sum up, we should form the habit of using mobile phones properly. ②With the help of teachers/parents, we can manage to solve the problem/overcome/pull through these difficulties.
_s_u_c_k__it_m__o_r_e easily .
6. 或许我将用吸管吸食食物。 ①或许 _p_e_r_h_a_p_s_/m__a_y_b_e_ ②将用 _w_o_u_l_d_/_w_i_ll_u_s_e ③把本句翻译成一个含有to do 的句子: _P__er_h_a_p__s _I_w__o_u_ld__u_s_e_a__st_r_a_w__t_o_d_o__it_.
Unit 4 Astronomy: the science of the stars
Writing 解决问题类作文
【文体感知】 1. 文体特点 (1)解决问题类作文对某些问题提出解决的建议、措施 和方法。 (2)理清写作主题, 解决问题的办法应该是文章的重点。 语言要简明扼要, 目的明确、具有合理性和说服力; 语 气要委婉。 (3)明确文章结构: 开篇, 提出问题; 主体, 分析和解决问 题; 总结, 对提出问题的解决方法进行简要的评价。
7. 这样就可以阻止食物飘走。 ①阻止……干某事 __p_r_e_v_e_n_t_/k_e_e_p_/_s_to_p__. _. _. _f_ro_m___d_o_in_g__s_th. ②用情态动词翻译此句: _I_t_c_a_n__p_r_e_v_e_n_t_t_h_e_f_o_o_d_f_r_o_m__f_lo_a_t_in__g_a_w__a_y.
(2)提出解决问题的办法 ①Only in this way can we keep our campus clean. ②To solve these problems, we should/must/had better make strict rules. ③We can solve the problem by taking effective measures.
Personally/As for me/As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion, I believe that_______(我的解决办法). . .或 To sum up/In conclusion/In short, only in this way can we solve the problem.
floating away. Only in this way will the problem be solved. I will
have a try in time.
尾段: 总结
太空旅游 第一人称
Step 2遣词造句
1. 如果我参观月球，将会有一个我可能将要面对的问
题: 怎样(在月球上)吃喝。
①参观月球
_v_is_i_t_t_h_e_s_p_a_c_e_
②将会有
t_h_e_r_e_w__o_u_ld__b_e_
③面临，面对 ④怎样吃喝
__fa_c_e__w_it_h h_o_w__t_o__ea_t__a_n_d_d_r_i_n_k_
3. 写作模板 These days, we/people have to face the problem
that_______(提出问题), which is becoming more and more serious. First, _______(说明现状). Second, _______(举例进一步说明). Facing/Faced with_______, we should take effective measures to cope with/deal with the situation/problem. For one thing, _______(办 法一). . . For another thing_______(办法二). . . Finally, _______(办法三). . .
2. 在地球上，对我们而言吃喝比较容易。
①在地球上
_o_n__th_e__e_a_rt_h_
②用it作形式主语翻译此句:
___O__n_t_h_e_e_a_r_t_h_,_it__is_e_a_s_y__fo_r__u_s_t_o_e_a_t_a_n_d__d_r_i_nk.
3. 但是在太空上，引力是如此弱以至于食物将会到处漂浮。
2. 亮点句式 (1)提出问题&分析原因 ①In fact, drinking in space is really a big problem(that we have to face). ②One of the difficulties/challenges is how to prevent air pollution. ③It is difficult/hard/tough to stop students from taking mobile phones to classrooms.
④It is of great importance for us to save energy. ⑤Unless we take effective measures, it is likely that many students abandon themselves to computer games. ⑥…has become the biggest concern of modern society. ① The following three factors contribute to ... First of all, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly, ... ② There is no doubt that the reason why ... is that ...
【典题演练】 随着科学技术的发展, 人类太空旅游将不再是遥远
的梦想。假设你是李华, 对太空探索极感兴趣, 现在请 你写一篇英语短文, 设想在今年暑假去太空旅游, 如何 克服失重条件下吃饭和喝水的问题。词数: 100个左右。
【审题谋篇】
体裁
解决问题类文章
话题
时态
一般现在时
人称
首段: 提出失重条件下吃饭和喝水的问题 结 构 中段: 分析和解决吃饭和喝水的问题
8. 只有用这种方式，这个问题才可以被解决。 ①用这种方式 _in__th__is_w__a_y_/w__it_h__th_e__m_e_t_h_o_d_
②解决问题
_s_o_lv_e_t_h_e__p_r_o_b_le_m__
③用“only+介词短语放于句首”翻译此句: _O_n_l_y_i_n_t_h_i_s_w_a_y__w_i_ll__th_e__p_r_o_b_le_m__b__e_s_o_lv_e_d_._
4. 如果我去月球，我将会带着所有食物。
①去月球
_g_o__to__t_h_e_s_p_a_c_e
②不得不
__h_a_v_e_t_o
③带着所有食物 _t_a_k_e_a_l_l_t_h_e_f_o_o_d
④用虚拟语气翻译此句:
__I_w__o_u_ld__h_a_v_e__to__ta_k_e__a_ll_m__y__fo_o_d__w_i_t_h_m__e_i_f_I_w__e_n_t _t_o_