Unit7Writing作文课件2021-2022学年人教版九年级英语全册
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Dogs’ bark may make too much noise.
Too much noise may be made by dog’s bark. Dogs bite people, especially children.
Some people, especially the children, may be bitten by dogs.
In my opinion, I believe dogs should be walked by their owners. It is said that other communities in our city have a safe place for people to walk their dogs. And their communities are clean and beautiful. So should our community!
Dogs pee and poop，and it cause bad influence on the environment. Besides, it is not only dirty, but also produces awful smells.
Dogs’ bark may make too much noise. As a result, it influence people’s rest.
What’s more, all dogs bite. Some people, especially the
children, may be bitten by dogs.
谈谈自己的看法（结尾）：观点+理由
As for me, I’m afraid of dogs, so I hate people walking dogs in the community. I think dogs need their own parks. If so, dogs will have a safe place to play and exercise.
The community is a public place for everyone to relax and have fun.
主体部分解读
Key words
Pee/poop
bark bite
reasons
1. bad for the environment 2. Not clean 3. Produce bad smells
对比说明
整合成文
Today my class had a discussion about whether walking dogs should be allowed in the community or not. Here is our group’s opinion.
We don’t think walking dogs should be allowed in the community. The community is a public place for everyone to relax and have fun. If dogs pee and poop, that may be bad for the environment. Too much noise may be made by dog’s bark. What’s more, all dogs bite. Some people, especially the children, may be bitten by dogs.
标题
Should walking dogs be allowed in the community?
文章开头
主体部分
意见+理由
Pee 撒尿 Poop 拉屎 Bark 狗吠声 Bite 咬
你们小组的成员对此持反对意见+理由。
We don’t think walking dogs should be allowed in the community.
Writing
点击此处输入副标题
审题
题材： 议论点 • 2. 论据： • A. 理论依据 • B. 事实依据 • 3. 论证：理论的方法：例证法、概括法、
对比法、类比法。
写作构思
• 1. 是否拟标题？ • 2. 文章开头？ • 3. 主体部分？ • 4. 恰当的结尾？ • 5. 注意语法、拼写和书写 • 6. 文采
1.make too much noise 2.Influence people’s rest
Dangerous for people, especially old people and children
自己的看法： as for me; in my opinion; as far as I know; It is believed/said/reported that…
Dogs bite people, especially old people and children.
连词成句: 使用情态动词的被动语态，不少于两处。 Dogs pee and poop，and it cause bad influence on the environment.
If dogs pee and poop, that may be bad for the environment.
As for me, I’m afraid of dogs, so I hate people walking dogs in the community. I think dogs need their own parks. If so, dogs will have a safe place to play and exercise. Only in this way will everyone be happy.
文采斐然
• 替换词汇 • 增加过渡词、句 • 变换句型：（感叹句，宾语从句，一般疑问句，
Too much noise may be made by dog’s bark. Dogs bite people, especially children.
Some people, especially the children, may be bitten by dogs.
In my opinion, I believe dogs should be walked by their owners. It is said that other communities in our city have a safe place for people to walk their dogs. And their communities are clean and beautiful. So should our community!
Dogs pee and poop，and it cause bad influence on the environment. Besides, it is not only dirty, but also produces awful smells.
Dogs’ bark may make too much noise. As a result, it influence people’s rest.
What’s more, all dogs bite. Some people, especially the
children, may be bitten by dogs.
谈谈自己的看法（结尾）：观点+理由
As for me, I’m afraid of dogs, so I hate people walking dogs in the community. I think dogs need their own parks. If so, dogs will have a safe place to play and exercise.
The community is a public place for everyone to relax and have fun.
主体部分解读
Key words
Pee/poop
bark bite
reasons
1. bad for the environment 2. Not clean 3. Produce bad smells
对比说明
整合成文
Today my class had a discussion about whether walking dogs should be allowed in the community or not. Here is our group’s opinion.
We don’t think walking dogs should be allowed in the community. The community is a public place for everyone to relax and have fun. If dogs pee and poop, that may be bad for the environment. Too much noise may be made by dog’s bark. What’s more, all dogs bite. Some people, especially the children, may be bitten by dogs.
标题
Should walking dogs be allowed in the community?
文章开头
主体部分
意见+理由
Pee 撒尿 Poop 拉屎 Bark 狗吠声 Bite 咬
你们小组的成员对此持反对意见+理由。
We don’t think walking dogs should be allowed in the community.
Writing
点击此处输入副标题
审题
题材： 议论点 • 2. 论据： • A. 理论依据 • B. 事实依据 • 3. 论证：理论的方法：例证法、概括法、
对比法、类比法。
写作构思
• 1. 是否拟标题？ • 2. 文章开头？ • 3. 主体部分？ • 4. 恰当的结尾？ • 5. 注意语法、拼写和书写 • 6. 文采
1.make too much noise 2.Influence people’s rest
Dangerous for people, especially old people and children
自己的看法： as for me; in my opinion; as far as I know; It is believed/said/reported that…
Dogs bite people, especially old people and children.
连词成句: 使用情态动词的被动语态，不少于两处。 Dogs pee and poop，and it cause bad influence on the environment.
If dogs pee and poop, that may be bad for the environment.
As for me, I’m afraid of dogs, so I hate people walking dogs in the community. I think dogs need their own parks. If so, dogs will have a safe place to play and exercise. Only in this way will everyone be happy.
文采斐然
• 替换词汇 • 增加过渡词、句 • 变换句型：（感叹句，宾语从句，一般疑问句，