(完整版)浙江英语新高考读后续写导练2学案

读后续写导练 2 教案
“ Will you come with us, Susan?” cried several girls to a schoolmateWere. going to the woods;“ do come,
too.”
’ t “ I should like to go with you very much,” replied Susan, with a sigh,finish the task grandmother“butIcan
set me to do.”
“ How tiresome it must be to sty at home to work on a holiday!Rose,”saidone of the girls, shaking her head.
“ Susan ’grandmothers is too strict.”
Susan heard the remark, and, as she bent her head, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant afternoon the girls would spend gathering wild flowers in the woods.
Soon she said to herself,What harm“ can there be in moving the mark grandmother put in the stocking? The
woods must be very beautiful today, and how I should like to be in them!”
“ Grandmother, said” she, a few minutes afterwards, “ I ’readym now. ”“ What,so soon, Susan? ”Her grandmother took the work, and looked at it very closely.
“ True, Susan,” said she, laying great stress on each word,ount twenty turns“true,fromI thec mark; and, as
you have never cheated me, you may go and amuse yourself as you like the rest of the day.”
Susan ’ s cheeks wered, and she did not say “ Thank you. ” As she left the cottage, she walked slowly away, not singing as usual.
“ Why, here is Susan! ” the girls cried, wheninedshetheirjo company; “but what is the matter? Why have
you left your dear, old gra ndmother? ” they asked.
“ There is nothing the matter.”repeatedAsSusanthese words, she felt that she was trying to cheat herself.
She had acted a lie. At the same time she remembered her grandmother’ s words,“ You havecheatedneverme.”
“ Yes, I havecheated her, ” said she to herself.“ If she knew all, she would never trust me again.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的重点词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
4.续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。

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Paragraph2: “Now, Susan,”said Rose, “Put on the crown of flowers, for you are to be our queen.”
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导学 1：原文内容纲要
情节 1:
Susan was invited to the woods full of flowers but couldn ’tgo, not finish the work of grandmother
情节 2:
Susan moved the mark in the stocking, cheated her
grandmother 情节 3:
Susan was allowed to go, with red cheeks, feeling guilty
导学 2：续写情节推理
Paragraph1:
可能的情节发展
从上文情节 1 和 3 可推知： other girls enjoy themselves, Susan not happy
从Paragraph2 的段首语可知： they made a crown, the crown was for Susan
合理的细节增添：the reason why the crown was for Susan
可用词汇及篇章技巧
1.可用的重点词：
flowers, Rose
2.其余可用的词语：
enjoy oneself, but (Susan 和她的伙伴们的心情对照)
Paragraph2:
可能的情节发展
从情节 3 和 Paragraph2 的段首语可推出：
Susan would refuse to wear the crown and explain the
reason go back home and apologize
能够详尽描绘的情节：
Susan 拒绝佩带花冠的情节及感情表现
可用词汇及篇章技巧
1.可用的重点词：
cheated, tears, grandmother, home
2.其余的可用词语：
not deserve, place on the head, apologize
3.在描绘 Susan 的错误时，能够引用原文中的有关语句：
remove the mark grandmother put in the stocking
导学 3：续写微作文
1. 她的伙伴们都在各处跑着，自我娱乐，可Susan 却单独坐在草坪上，希望现在她能在家中，和奶
奶诉说自己的过失。

（用 wishing 作陪伴状语，注意后来用虚构语气）
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2.当大家说着这些话的时候①，花冠戴到了Susan的头上。

Susan马上摘下了花冠，扔到了地上，说：
“不要给我花冠，我不配！我欺诈了我的奶奶。

”当她说这些的时候，泪水滑过了她的面颊②。

（①顶用被动语态；②顶用 flow down 或 run down, 注意 down 要用介词）
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导学 4：依据前方的指导，达成读后续写
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参照答案：
Ⅲ . 续写微作文
1.Her companions were running about enjoying themselves, but Susan sat alone on the grass, wishing
she were at home this moment telling her fault to her grandmother.
2.As these words were spoken, the crown was placed on her head. In a moment Susan took it off, and threw it
on the ground, saying, “No crown for me; I do not deserve it! I have cheated my grandmother. ” While she was saying, tears were flowing down her cheeks.
Ⅳ . 依据前方的指导，达成读后续写
Paragraph1:
When the little party had reached an open space in the woods,her companions ran about enjoying themselves, but Susan sat on the grass, wishing she were at home admitting her fault. After a while Rose cried out, “Let us make a crown of flowers, and put it on the head of the best girl here. ”Soon the crown was finished. All the girls agreed Susan was the best girl both in school and at home, so they decided she was to wear it.
Paragraph2:
“Now, Susan, ”said Rose, “Put on the crown of flowers, for you are to be our queen.”As these words were spoken, the crown was placed on her head. In a moment she took it off, and threw it on the ground, saying, “No crown for me; I do not deserve it. ”The girls looked at her with surprise. “I have cheated my grandmother,”said she, while tears flowed down her cheeks. Quickly Susan left the other girls, went back home and apologized to her grandmother. “Susan,”said her grandmother, “I am so happy you have realized your fault, and you are still my own little girl! ”。