中考英语书面表达试题和答案经典

中考英语书面表达试题和答案经典
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1．书面表达
在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。

大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。

请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we hav e held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.
Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.
Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.
A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.
I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。

而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave
school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。

你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！
要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。

2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。

100 词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.
Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。

而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。

而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容
经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。

假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here ar e the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not
allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。

表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。

平时注意多多积累句型、短语。

细心检查避免疏漏。

以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then 等。

可以适当使用高分句子。

本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。

China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。

5．近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。

你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。

假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;
4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming 【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。

通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。

文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。

如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。

为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。

首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。

文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。

这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。

语法规范、准确，用词得体。

文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。

文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

6．书面表达
根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．
【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。

而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。

Change for a better China
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more
healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。

写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。

内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【点睛】
本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。

2. 句式丰富。

表述灵活。

衔接自然，顺畅。

文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

8．书面表达
假设你将代表你校2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：
回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。

注意：1. 90词左右。

发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。

9．书面表达
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。

食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。

虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。

熟悉英语的表达方式。

避免汉语式英语。

句型不要都用简单句。

另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。

写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。

对于城市A 的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。

对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可
以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。

在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。

在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。

本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。

10．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。

请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。

要点：
注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
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At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homew ork. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
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