中考英语书面写作话题7 经历与感受

⑫m__a_d_e__c_a_re_l_e_ss__m_i_s_ta_k__es__h_im__s_e_lf_(他自己会犯粗心的错误). They got her a new wallet and asked her to be more careful. “I will always ⑬ ___r_e_m_e_m__b_e_r_t_o_s_h_a_r_e_m__y__p_r_o_b_le_m(记s 住分享我的问题) in the future！” Laura says.
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开头句 1. 劳拉曾经丢了钱包，担心了好几天。 Laura once_lo_s_t__her wallet， and _w_o_r_r_i_e_d__for days. 2. 在我六年级的时候，我参加了一个钢琴比赛。 When I was in the sixth grade， I_jo_i_n_e_d_ __a___ __p_ia_n_o___competition __________.
⑤_w__it_h_o_u_t_a_n_y__m__is_t_a_k_e_s_(没有任何错误). Then I ⑥____w_a_i_te_d__f_o_r__ (等候) them to call out the winner. When I heard my name, ⑦ ___m__y_h__ea_r_t__b_e_a_t _so__q_u_i_c_k_ly(我的心跳得如此快). I thought I would ⑧ ________st_o_p__b_r_e_a_th_i_n_g____(停止呼吸). I couldn’t believe it. I won! It was the happiest day of my life!
the card， “I love you， my dear mother！” I put it on 等，讲述了事情的经过。 her pillow， then we cleaned the room. We felt very ③结尾用感叹句表达 我 和 tired，but we were very happy. My mother got home. We said， “Happy Birthday！” My mother smiled. We 家人的感受。
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②In the morning，my father and I went shopping
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and bought a very nice cake. Then we went to the market and bought some food. When we got home，
my father cooked some nice food in the kitchen. I went ②第二段用一般过去时， to my room to make a birthday card. I wanted to tell my mother that I loved her very much. Then I wrote in 时间状语从句和宾语从句
5. 第二天，彼得带着勇气而不是恐惧去参加足球训练。 The next day， Peter went to soccer practice with courage__r_a_t_h_e_r_ __t_h_a_n____fear in his heart. 6. 她很担心，因为她让父母失望了。 She was worried_b_e_c_a_u_s_e_she disappointed her parents.
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1 命题探索
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2 背词汇
3 写句子
4 写段落
5 成篇章
6 写作练兵
命题探索
分析云南近6年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“经历与感受”这 一话题共涉及过6次， 2017省卷“A Special Day”、 2019昆明“On my parent’s birthday”、 2018昆明“A small thing”、 2017昆明A“One day in my childhood”、 2015昆明A“The good old days”、 2014昆明A“A happy time” ， 全国近年中考真题针对自己或者他人的经历和感受 也 进行了考查。
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语段训练1：自己的经历与感受 When I was in the sixth grade, I joined a piano competition. I ①
___p_r_a_c_ti_c_e_d_f_o_r_f_o_u_r__h_o_u_r(s练习四个小时) every day and my piano teacher came ②_t_h_r_e_e_t_im__e_s_a__w_e_e_k_(一周三次) to help me. Then the big day finally arrived. I was so nervous when they ③_c_a_l_le_d__m_y__n_a_m__e (叫我的名字). I ④____s_to_o_d__u_p______(站了起来)and started to play. While I was playing, everyone sat still and listened. I played the song
10. 我的女儿更理解我，尽管她也为要舍弃某些玩具而感到难过。 My daughter was more understanding，_a_lt_h_o_u_g_h_ she also felt sad to _p_a_r_t____ ___w_i_th___ certain toys. 11. 他非常想念他的父母，并且他经常感到孤独和不快乐。 He_m__is_s_e_d__ ___h__is___ __p_a_r_e_n_ts_ so much and he often felt lonely and unhappy.
had supper together. My mother said， “Thank you，
my daughter！”
③How happy we were！
写作练兵
My Happiness 提示：幸福是什么？幸福可能是同学间互相帮助的感动，幸福
也可能是老师赞扬时内心的激动，幸福也可能是父母一 个微小的举动。请你以“My Happiness”为题，叙述一件 发生在你生活中令你感到幸福的事。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
感受 7. 我和爷爷一起喂鸡。真是太有趣了。 I___f_e_d___ ___th__e__ _c_h_ic_k_e_n_s_with my grandpa. It was so much fun. 8. 一切都是关于机器人的，我对此不感兴趣。 Everything was about robots and I’m not__in_t_e_r_e_st_e_d_ ____in____that. 9. 我真的很累，因为我昨晚学习到半夜。 I’m really tired because I _s_t_u_d_i_e_d_ ___u_n_t_il__ _m_i_d_n_i_g_h_t last night.
My Happiness ______E_v_e_r_y_o_n_e_h_a_s__h_is__o_r_h_e_r_o_w__n_h_a_p_p__y_t_h_in__g_. _S_o_d_o__I_. ___________ ______It__w__a_s__a__su__n_n_y__d_a_y_.__A_f_te_r__h_a_v_i_n_g__f_o_u_r__c_la_s_s_e_s_, _I__f_e_lt__v_e_r_y h__u_n_g_r_y_. _S_o_I__d_e_c_id_e_d__t_o_b__u_y_s_o_m__e_th_i_n_g__to__e_a_t_i_n__th_e__m_a_r_k_e_t_._W__h_e_n__I w__a_it_e_d__in__l_in_e_,_I__su__d_d_e_n_ly__f_o_u_n_d__th_a_t__I_f_o_r_g_o_t _t_a_k_in_g__a_n_y__m_o_n_e_y__w_i_t_h m__e_._T__h_e_n__I_h_a_d__t_o__g_o__b_a_c_k__t_o_m__y__c_la_s_s_r_o_o_m__w__it_h__h_u_n_g_e_r_._A__ft_e_r__a w__h_i_le_,_I__s_a_w__a_m__a_n__c_o_m__in_g__i_n_to__m__y__cl_a_s_s_ro_o_m__._T__h_a_t _w__a_s _m__y__fa_t_h_e_r w__h_o__c_a_r_ri_e_d__a__b_o_x_i_n__h_i_s_l_e_ft__h_a_n_d_._H__e__ca_m__e__to__m__e__a_n_d__sa_i_d_,_“_Y__o_u must be hungry,
结尾句 12. 这对我来说是非常有用的一课。 This was a very __u_s_e_f_u_l __ __le_s_s_o_n__for me. 13. 这食物尝起来很好，因为我太饿了。 The food___ta_s_t_e_d__ ___g_r_e_a_t _because I was so hungry. 14. 我真的很喜欢在镇上到处走走。 I really enjoyed _w__a_lk__in_g_ __a_r_o_u_n_d_ the town.
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作文：(2019昆明)
On my parent’s birthday 某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母”为主题的征 文活动，请你用英文以 “On my parent’s birthday”为题目写一篇记叙 文投稿，内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
中间句 经历
3. 米奇像一个普通人，但他总是试图面对任何危险。 Mickey was like a common man， but he always___t_r_ie_d_ ____t_o__ ___fa_c_e__any danger. 4. 从那以后，我是如此害怕以至于我几乎不能清晰地思考。 I was____so____scared___th__a_t __I could hardly think clearly after that.
语段训练2：他人的经历与感受 Laura once lost her wallet， and worried for days. She ⑨
___w_a_s__a_fr_a_i_d_t_o__te_l_l _h_e_r_p_a_r_e_n_t_s_a_b_o_u_t(很it 害怕把这件事告诉她的父母). She even walked three miles to school each day ⑩____b_e_c_a_u(因se 为) she didn’t have any money. She just kept thinking， “If I tell my parents， they’ll be angry！”⑪__________In(最th后e e)，ndshe talked to her parents and they were really understanding. Her dad said he sometimes
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分
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On my parent’s birthday ①August 8th was my mother’s birthday. My ①文章采用“总—分—总 father and I wanted to give her surprising birthday ”的结构展开叙述。 presents.