牛津英语九年级上册 Unit话题写作
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话题写作
About me
Qingcheng Junior High School
reading shopping Wechat
Let’s discuss
Discussion: Find out what you can do on WeChat according to pictures and what you know.
I really hope these can help you know more about Wechat.
Jack
Strategy Use outline to improve our writing
A reply
Beginning
Your opinion
I think; In my opinion….
send photos
share something on moment
发送 买东西 照片
与朋友 谈话
收发红包
发朋 友圈
玩游戏
订机票
打车
Let’s practice
What can people use Wechat for?
When people want to see a film , they can use Wechat for _b_o_o_k_in_g__a_t_i_ck_e. t
Write down two sentences on your paper
Tips: send pictures, send videos, talk with friends, look for people around you, learn English, read news, play games, tell people where you are, share what I do with my friends, know more about each other
Homework
1. Correct your writing. 2. Share your writing on moment.
We love, we share, we chat!
Thanks for listening!
•
1.每个词并没有列出全部用法及词义 ，只列 出了初 中阶段 出现并 常用的 用法及 词义。
s_e_n_d__a_n_d_g_e_t_ lucky money
__c_a_ll_f_o_r____ a taxi
__d_o__s_o_m_e___ shopping
Wechat
s_h_a_re__s_o_m_e_t_h_ing on moment
____ta_l_k____ with friends
10 minutes
Check your writing again：
✓ 内容： 要点是否齐全，题材有无适当
发挥 ✓ 准确性：语法（时态语态、三单）、词汇、
大小写、标点符号。 ✓ 流畅性：结构是否完整，有无连接词增加
流畅性。
Enjoy and evaluation
Summary
1. Words and phrases: send and get lucky money, talk with friends share something on moment, send photos book a ticket, call for a taxi, book a ticket… 2. Sentence patterns: ★When I want to see a film, I will use Wechat tobook a ticket on Wechat. ★ We mustn’t use Wechat while we are
Complete the sentences.
We mustn’t ______while we are _______ because _________.
Tip 1: 1. do homework 2. walk … 3. have dinner 4. go across the road 5. stand on the bus …
Lucy
Let’s write
假如你是Jack，请你给Lucy写一封回信，说说 你对微信的看法，告诉她用微信可以做什么（至少 两点），什么时候不可以用微信（至少两点），80 字左右。
Dear Lucy, Don’t worry about it. I think I can help you.
____要__求__:_1_._Y_o_u_r__id_e__a_s_o_n__W__e_c_h__a_t_. ______________________ ___________________________23___..___WW______hh___ea___tn______cc___aa___nn______’sth___s___eh___u___e___su___e___sW___e___We______ce___hc___ah___t___af___to___?r___?(___2(___2点___点___)___)______________________________ _________4_._U__s_e__th__e_l_i_n_k_in__g_w__o_r_d_s_._____________________.
In a word, All in all
Sample
In my opinion, Wechat is very useful and interesting. First, when I feel bored, I will play games on it. Second, when I want to go to a place by plane, I will book a ticket on it. But we can’t use Wechat while we are driving a car because it’s dangerous. What’s more, we can’t use it while we are sleeping in bed because it’s bad for our eyes.
讨论：根据图片 找出在微 something on moment
send and get lucky money
BrainstormWhat can we do on Wechat?
? ? ?
?
?
?
Wechat
?
?
BrainstormWhat can we do on Wechat?
____se_n_d_____ photos
____p_la_y_____ games
Let’s play
play games
book a ticket
lusecnk根 头yd ma据指nodn箭示egey，t do说som出e 相shopping cal应l fo短r a 语taxi
talk with friends
--When can’t people use Wechat?
--While they are __h_a_v_in_g__fa_m__i_ly_d_inners --Why is that?
--Because ___i_t’_s_n_o_t_p_o__li_te_.
People mustn’t __u_s_e__W_e_c_h_a_t____while they are _h_a_v_in_g__fa_m__i_ly_d__in_n_e_r_s__ because _it_’s_n_o__t _p_o_li_t_e.
are __wh_a_av_lki_ni_ng_gc_li_an_st_she_es__st_r_e_e_t_____ because _ii_tt’’_ss_db_aa_nd_g_feo_rr_o_tuh_se_i_r_s_tu__d_y______.
When can’t people use Wechat?
very popular now. But I know little about it. So I really want to know what I can use it for and when I can’t use it. I need help. Who can help me? I hope to get your help as soon as possible.
Tip 2: 1. dangerous 2. not good 3. bad 4. not safe 5. not polite …
Let’s find What does Lucy want to know?
Dear boys and girls, How are you? I am Lucy. I know Wechat is
1 ____b_o__o_k___ 2 a ticket
__c_a_ll_f_o_r____
r_e_a_d____ 9
news
_s_e_n_d__a_n_d_g_e_t 8
lucky money
7
sha_r_e s_o_m_et_h_in_g ___
a taxi
__d_o__s_o_m_e___ shopping
driving cars because it’s dangerous.
3. How to write a good composition
step1: read carefully（审题） step2: draw an outline（列提纲）
step3: write and use linking words（连接词）
•
2.对于一些比较模糊、晦涩的例子， 不必钻 牛角尖 ，中考 考察的 都是用 法及意 义十分 鲜明、 确定的 例子。3. 对于课 文中的 一些特 殊的用 法要牢 记例句 ，做到 一出现 就能明 确辨认 。
But there are something bad happening.
be bad for study
not care for
unhealthy
dangerous
When can’t people use Wechat? People can’t use Wechat while they
Wechat
on moment
6
____ta_l_k____ with friends
3
____se_n_d_____
photos
4
____p_la_y_____
games
5
Let’s read Words and Phrases
___b_o_o_k_____ a ticket
____re_a_d_____ news
In a word, Wechat is always changing our life.
Use linking words (连接词) to put the sentences together. (first, second, but, what’s more…)
Have a try by yourselves! 自己试一试！
step4: write correct and beautiful sentences（润色）
step5: Check your writing again（检查）
Tips: 1. linking words: First, second, but, what’s more… 2. Writing evaluation A. 内容 B.连接词 C.语法
What can she use Wechat for?
Body
When can’t she use Wechat?
first/first of all, second, third
firstly, secondly, finally
first of all ,What’s more
Ending summary
What can we use Wechat for?
When we
feel bored see, a film
we use Wechabtofookr _a_f_ipl_ml_a_y_in_g__ga_m__e.s ticket
Sentence imitation: 句子仿写
★When I _____, I will use Wechat to _____.
About me
Qingcheng Junior High School
reading shopping Wechat
Let’s discuss
Discussion: Find out what you can do on WeChat according to pictures and what you know.
I really hope these can help you know more about Wechat.
Jack
Strategy Use outline to improve our writing
A reply
Beginning
Your opinion
I think; In my opinion….
send photos
share something on moment
发送 买东西 照片
与朋友 谈话
收发红包
发朋 友圈
玩游戏
订机票
打车
Let’s practice
What can people use Wechat for?
When people want to see a film , they can use Wechat for _b_o_o_k_in_g__a_t_i_ck_e. t
Write down two sentences on your paper
Tips: send pictures, send videos, talk with friends, look for people around you, learn English, read news, play games, tell people where you are, share what I do with my friends, know more about each other
Homework
1. Correct your writing. 2. Share your writing on moment.
We love, we share, we chat!
Thanks for listening!
•
1.每个词并没有列出全部用法及词义 ，只列 出了初 中阶段 出现并 常用的 用法及 词义。
s_e_n_d__a_n_d_g_e_t_ lucky money
__c_a_ll_f_o_r____ a taxi
__d_o__s_o_m_e___ shopping
s_h_a_re__s_o_m_e_t_h_ing on moment
____ta_l_k____ with friends
10 minutes
Check your writing again：
✓ 内容： 要点是否齐全，题材有无适当
发挥 ✓ 准确性：语法（时态语态、三单）、词汇、
大小写、标点符号。 ✓ 流畅性：结构是否完整，有无连接词增加
流畅性。
Enjoy and evaluation
Summary
1. Words and phrases: send and get lucky money, talk with friends share something on moment, send photos book a ticket, call for a taxi, book a ticket… 2. Sentence patterns: ★When I want to see a film, I will use Wechat tobook a ticket on Wechat. ★ We mustn’t use Wechat while we are
Complete the sentences.
We mustn’t ______while we are _______ because _________.
Tip 1: 1. do homework 2. walk … 3. have dinner 4. go across the road 5. stand on the bus …
Lucy
Let’s write
假如你是Jack，请你给Lucy写一封回信，说说 你对微信的看法，告诉她用微信可以做什么（至少 两点），什么时候不可以用微信（至少两点），80 字左右。
Dear Lucy, Don’t worry about it. I think I can help you.
____要__求__:_1_._Y_o_u_r__id_e__a_s_o_n__W__e_c_h__a_t_. ______________________ ___________________________23___..___WW______hh___ea___tn______cc___aa___nn______’sth___s___eh___u___e___su___e___sW___e___We______ce___hc___ah___t___af___to___?r___?(___2(___2点___点___)___)______________________________ _________4_._U__s_e__th__e_l_i_n_k_in__g_w__o_r_d_s_._____________________.
In a word, All in all
Sample
In my opinion, Wechat is very useful and interesting. First, when I feel bored, I will play games on it. Second, when I want to go to a place by plane, I will book a ticket on it. But we can’t use Wechat while we are driving a car because it’s dangerous. What’s more, we can’t use it while we are sleeping in bed because it’s bad for our eyes.
讨论：根据图片 找出在微 something on moment
send and get lucky money
BrainstormWhat can we do on Wechat?
? ? ?
?
?
?
?
?
BrainstormWhat can we do on Wechat?
____se_n_d_____ photos
____p_la_y_____ games
Let’s play
play games
book a ticket
lusecnk根 头yd ma据指nodn箭示egey，t do说som出e 相shopping cal应l fo短r a 语taxi
talk with friends
--When can’t people use Wechat?
--While they are __h_a_v_in_g__fa_m__i_ly_d_inners --Why is that?
--Because ___i_t’_s_n_o_t_p_o__li_te_.
People mustn’t __u_s_e__W_e_c_h_a_t____while they are _h_a_v_in_g__fa_m__i_ly_d__in_n_e_r_s__ because _it_’s_n_o__t _p_o_li_t_e.
are __wh_a_av_lki_ni_ng_gc_li_an_st_she_es__st_r_e_e_t_____ because _ii_tt’’_ss_db_aa_nd_g_feo_rr_o_tuh_se_i_r_s_tu__d_y______.
When can’t people use Wechat?
very popular now. But I know little about it. So I really want to know what I can use it for and when I can’t use it. I need help. Who can help me? I hope to get your help as soon as possible.
Tip 2: 1. dangerous 2. not good 3. bad 4. not safe 5. not polite …
Let’s find What does Lucy want to know?
Dear boys and girls, How are you? I am Lucy. I know Wechat is
1 ____b_o__o_k___ 2 a ticket
__c_a_ll_f_o_r____
r_e_a_d____ 9
news
_s_e_n_d__a_n_d_g_e_t 8
lucky money
7
sha_r_e s_o_m_et_h_in_g ___
a taxi
__d_o__s_o_m_e___ shopping
driving cars because it’s dangerous.
3. How to write a good composition
step1: read carefully（审题） step2: draw an outline（列提纲）
step3: write and use linking words（连接词）
•
2.对于一些比较模糊、晦涩的例子， 不必钻 牛角尖 ，中考 考察的 都是用 法及意 义十分 鲜明、 确定的 例子。3. 对于课 文中的 一些特 殊的用 法要牢 记例句 ，做到 一出现 就能明 确辨认 。
But there are something bad happening.
be bad for study
not care for
unhealthy
dangerous
When can’t people use Wechat? People can’t use Wechat while they
on moment
6
____ta_l_k____ with friends
3
____se_n_d_____
photos
4
____p_la_y_____
games
5
Let’s read Words and Phrases
___b_o_o_k_____ a ticket
____re_a_d_____ news
In a word, Wechat is always changing our life.
Use linking words (连接词) to put the sentences together. (first, second, but, what’s more…)
Have a try by yourselves! 自己试一试！
step4: write correct and beautiful sentences（润色）
step5: Check your writing again（检查）
Tips: 1. linking words: First, second, but, what’s more… 2. Writing evaluation A. 内容 B.连接词 C.语法
What can she use Wechat for?
Body
When can’t she use Wechat?
first/first of all, second, third
firstly, secondly, finally
first of all ,What’s more
Ending summary
What can we use Wechat for?
When we
feel bored see, a film
we use Wechabtofookr _a_f_ipl_ml_a_y_in_g__ga_m__e.s ticket
Sentence imitation: 句子仿写
★When I _____, I will use Wechat to _____.