人教版高中英语必修第二册精品课件 Unit 1 CULTURAL HERITAGE 写作指导

了。你班就此现象进行了一次辩论会。请根据以下辩论结果,写一篇新闻
报道,并谈谈活动的意义。
赞成(15%)
反对(85%) 活动的意义
1.修建公路是社会发展的需要 2.文化遗迹在必要时应给社会发展让路 1.古城墙有极高的历史价值,是城市文明的象征之一 2.文化遗迹有利于我国与世界各国的文化交流 ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
Through this debate,we have realized that we should ask the experts for advice to find a better way to make good use of this cultural relic.
针对训练
据报道,某历史文化名城为了修建公路,将该市一处建于唐朝的古城墙拆除
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇 1.protect v.保存,保护 2.existence n.存在 3.diversity n.多样性 4.civilization n.文明 5.destruction n.破坏 anize/hold v.举行 7.on display/on show 展览 8.the main cause 主要原因 9.an increasing number of... 越来越多的…… 10.further details 进一步的细节
Some people are in favour of the idea.They think the cultural relic is worth exploring,which will make people learn more about the great history of our country.What's more,this cultural relic can attract more visitors to our city,which will improve the tourism of our city.However,others hold an opposite opinion,thinking that we should keep it as it is and protect it properly.Only in this way can the cultural relic not be destroyed by people.
(二)精彩句型 1.Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation. 文化遗产具有极大的价值,保护它能让我们对我们的祖国感到自豪。 2.The intangible cultural heritage plays an important role in the national civilization and sustainable development. 非物质文化遗产在国家的文明和可持续发展中起着重要的作用。 3.The government and schools should teach people more about the protection of cultural relics and people should mind their behaviour when travelling. 政府和学校应该向人们传授更多关于文物保护的知识,同时人们在旅游时 应该注意自己的行为。
We should _p_r_o_t_e_ct__the cultural relic _p_r_o_p_er_l_y_.
⑥遗址不能遭到人们的破坏。 The cultural relic ____ca_n_n_o_t_b_e__d_e_st_r_o_y_e_d_______by people.
(2)句式升级 ⑦用非限制性定语从句改写句①和句② The cultural relic is worth exploring,which will make people learn more about the great history of our country. ⑧用非限制性定语从句改写句③和句④
2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①文化遗址值得开发。
The cultural relic ___is__w_o_r_th__e_x_p_lo_r_in_g________. ②开发利用将会使人们更多地了解我国伟大的历史。
Exploring will make people _le_a_r_n_m__o_re__ab_o_u_t__th_e_g_r_e_a_t_h_i_st_o_r_y_o_f_o_u_r_c_o_u_n_t_ry_. ③这处文化遗址能吸引更多的游客来我市。
This cultural relic can ____a_tt_r_ac_t_m__o_r_e_v_i_si_to_r_s_t_o_o_u_r__ci_t_y________. ④这会提升我市的旅游业。
This will ___i_m_p_r_o_v_e_t_h_e_t_o_u_r_is_m______of our city. ⑤我们应该妥善保护这处文化遗址。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 人称 时态 话题
框架
新闻报道 第三人称 一般现在时为主 是否应当开发唐文化遗址 第一段:用简明文字概括新闻的主要事实——市民举办辩论会的基 本情况及辩论会的目的 第二段:陈述辩论双方的观点,并给出论据 第三段:重申报道的主题——辩论的意义
【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)文化遗址 ___c_u_lt_u_ra_l_r_e_l_ic____ (2)赞成 ___in__fa_v_o_u_r_o_f_____ (3)值得做…… __b_e_w__o_r_th__d_o_in_g___ (4)保持原样 __k_e_e_p_.._.a_s_i_t_w_a_s___ (5)充分利用 _m_a_k_e__g_o_o_d_u_s_e_o_f__
4.History and culture are the soul of a city.We should protect its historical and cultural heritage as we value our own life. 历史和文化是一座城市的灵魂。我们应该像爱惜自己的生命一样保护好 城市的历史和文化遗产。 5.Nowadays,many cultural relics have already been destroyed and hundreds of others are facing the danger of disappearing. 如今,很多文物已经遭到了破坏,还有数以百计的其他文物正面临消失的危 险。 6.With their efforts,more and more people become concerned about protecting cultural relics. 在他们的努力下,越来越多的人关心保护文化遗产。
This cultural relic can attract more visitors to our city,which will improve the tourism of our city. ⑨用only in this way开头的倒装句改写句⑥
Only in this way can the cultural relic not be destroyed by people.
(二)新闻报道的语言特点 1.具体。五个W和一个H(when、where、who、what、why和how)是一则 完整新闻的必备要素,这就需要记叙具体的时间、地点、人物,事件的起因、 经过、结果等。 2.准确。新闻语言不能含糊不清、模棱两可,也不能夸大或缩小事实。 3.简练。新闻语言要简明扼要、直截了当。
2.请在相应位置作答。
It is reported that to build a road,a well-known historical and cultural city has recently torn down one of its ancient city walls,which date back to the Tang Dynasty.Our class have had a debate on this matter. _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
感知文体常识
(一)新闻报道的主体结构 标题(headline):标题是文章的眼睛,浓缩概括全文的中心内容,应简洁、生 动、具有概括性。 导语(lead of introduction):导语是新闻的开头,多为文章的首段,要求用极简 明的文字概括新闻的主要事实。 正文(body):在导语的基础上,正文引入更多与主题相关的事实,使之更加翔 实、具体,并展开评论,进而得出结论。
妙笔成篇 Should Cultural Relics Give Way to Tourism?
Recently,citizens in our city have had a heated debate on whether we should explore the cultural relic discovered in our city.
It is reported that to build a road,a well-known historical and cultural city has recently torn down one of its ancient city walls,which date back to the Tang Dynasty.Our class have had a debate on this matter.
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
最近你市新发现了一处唐文化遗址。关于是否应当开发,人们展开了激烈
的讨论。假如你是一名记者,请就此写一篇报道。对
应保持原样,妥善保护,以免遭受人为破坏
活动的意义 ……
参考词汇:开发explore 旅游业tourism 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.请在相应位置作答。
Should Cultural Relics Give Way to Tourism? Recently,citizens in our city have had a heated debate on whether we should explore the cultural relic discovered in our city. _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________