2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错34

2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中
共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Elli，
I’m a senior s tudent. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me?
My other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
2.
文中共有10处语言错误。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myse lf and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
3.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18
and will have a plenty of time to be together with you .I will meet you at the
airport and then you will take Bus No.8 for my home .You worry about the
weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from
it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with
you . During your stay here , I’ll take you to some places of interests and
you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
John
4.
短文改错
Tom and Jack are next door neighbours who all work 66. _________
in same office, so they often walk together to and from 67.
_________
work. One afternoon, they were walking home together 68. _________
while it started to rain. Tom quickly opened his 69. _________
umbrella and said proud, “My wif e really has great 70. _________
foresight (远见). She said this morning it will rain 71.
_________
and told me carry my umbrella with me.” Jack smiled 72. _________
and walked closely to him under the protection of T om’s 73.
_________
umbrella and said, “My wife has more greater foresight. 74.
_________
He didn’t let me carry mine and told me to use yours.” 75.
_________
5.
短文改错
Dear Hou Ting,
I am sorry that maths disappoint you, bu t you can’t give it up.
66. _____
As you say, it is one of the most important subject and there 67.
_____
is a reason for this. We have to use maths from all the time. 68.
_____
Wherever your career takes you, maths will have to be using. 69.
_____
In fact , most employers and universities will accept people
70. _____
who have failed or given up maths. All you can do is try your
71. _____
best in maths and make the most use of time you had. If you
72. _____
have trouble understand anything, the first person you should 73.
_____
tell is your teacher. That is often surprising how simple things
74. _____
seem when you are explained properly — even maths problems! 75.
_____
6.
短文改错
A few years ago, some tourists pay no attention to
66.____________
environmental protection . They threw waste things about, 67.
_____________
like plastic bags, fruit skins and waste papers. Sometimes 68.
_____________
they broke trees, picked up flowers and killed birds; some 69._____________
even made fires in the woods to cook for picnics. What 70. ___
___
dangerous it was! Fortunately, great changes have been 71. ___
___
taken place here. All the tourists have got used to put their 72. ___
___
rubbish into dustbins. But they are making great efforts to 73. ___
___
protect birds and plants as well. They bring our own meals 74. ___
___
prevent any accidental fire. All these should be appreciated. 75. ___
___
试卷答案
1.
Dear Elli，
I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
friends with everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
disliked She be
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me?
My other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
2.
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧view that senior thr ee students have to make fully use of
the full
every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am
her
allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable t o control myself and forget all about my be
study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.
eyes
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
watching work
Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at
has 删除at
abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
3.
1.exciting改excited
2.free前加be
3.a去掉
4.you改we
5.for改to
6.worry改worried
7.it改that
8.but改so
9.interests改interest
10.greatly改great
4.
Tom and Jack are next door neighbours who all work 66. both
in∧ same office, so they often walk together to and from 67. the work. One afternoon, they were walking home together 68. √
while it started to rain. Tom quickly opened his 69. when umbrella and said proud, “My wife really has great 70. proudly foresight (远见). She said this morning it will rain 71. would and told me ∧carry my umbrella with me.” Jack smiled 72. to
and walked closely to him under the protection of Tom’s 73. close umbrella and said, “My wife has more greater foresight. 74. more He didn’t let me carry mine and told me to use yours.” 75. She
5.
66. disappoint - disappoints 67. subject - subjects 68. 去掉from 69. using - used 70. will后加not或will –won’t 71.正确
72. had - have 73. understand - understanding 74.That - It 75. you - they
6.
66. pay→paid 67.∨ 68. papers→paper 69. 去掉up 70. What→How
71．去掉been 72. put→putting 73. But→And 74. our→their
75. prevent 前加 to。