英语四级正反论证型议论文——一点我为你整理

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CET-4知识点积累
CET-4写作评分标准
写作分值占总分值的15%,阅卷标准分为五等:2分,5分,8分,11分,14分。

2分(49.5):条理不清,语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误,且多为严重错误
5分(58.5):基本切题,表达不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多严重语言错误
8分(72): 基本切题,有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字基本连贯,语言错误较多,其中一些是严重错误
11分(85.5):切题,表达清楚,意思连贯,有少量语言错误
14分(100.5):切题,表达清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本无语言错误,仅有个别小错
CET-4作文高分技巧
1.涵盖所有提示的信息点
2.段落清楚,层次清晰
3.灵活使用过渡词
4.拼写,语法正确
5.句式多样化
6.书写工整,字迹清楚
We can’t ignore the influence.
On no account/ By no means can we ignore the
正反论证型议论文:
观点对比型:
2006.12
1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3.我的看法
2005.12
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2.校园是否对游客开放,人们看法不同
3. 我认为…
2000.6
1.很多人认为有必要举行口语考试,理由是…
2.也有人持不同意见…
3.我的看法和打算
写作思路:
•Part1 引入部分(introduction):引入即将展开的话题,提供话题背景•Part2 观点1:陈述观点1的内容,其产生的原因或后果。

•Part3 观点2:陈述观点2的内容,其产生的原因或后果。

•Part 4 我的观点:陈述自己的观点(或不同于观点1、2的新观点),分析原因或优势
利弊说明型
2011.6
Online shopping
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
2009.6
Free admission to museum
1.越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?
2.也会带来一些问题。

3. 你的看法
2008.6
Recreational activities
1、娱乐活动多种多样
2、娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性
3、作为大学生我的看法
写作思路:
•Part1 提出要议论的事物或观点
•Part2 陈述这一事物的利与弊,或提出人们对该问题的两种不同的看法
•Part3 归纳得出结论
模板一:
第一段:交代问题的背景
There is a general discussion/debate these days over…
There is a growing tendency these days for sb to do sth.
This issue/problem/phenomenon has caused /aroused wide public concern over the recent years.
Never before in histor y has the issue of …been more evident than now.
No issue has received more praise and abuse than…
Although people’s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must admitted that,…is still one of the biggest questions we are facing nowad ays.
第二段:说明一方面的观点
When it comes to…, many people insist/ believe/hold/claim that…. They point out the fact that…(Reason 1), They also argue that…(Reason 2)
第三段:说明另一方面的观点
However / nevertheless, other people hold diametrically opposed points of view/ stand on a different ground/take a different attitude. They maintain that…What’s more, they firmly pointed out that...
第四段:说明自己的立场
A: one-sided---As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, (论据1)……For another,(论据2)……Wh en all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…….
As for me/ For my part/From my point of view, I agree with the opinion of… for the following reasons…
As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.
As for me, I am undoubtedly in favor of the former/latter side/view because…
When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view. There are some reasons behind my belief.
First of all, 论据1.
Next, 论据2.
Eventually, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或From above, we can predict that 预测.
There is some truth in both arguments. To my mind, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages (shortcomings, drawbacks).
B: Balanced---From the above discussion, I have to admit that there are merits to both sides of the issue. However, I would like to take a more neutral position. On the one hand, (针对观点1立场或相关措施及建议)…; on the other hand,(针对观点2立场或相关措施及建议)。

模板二:
There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _________ (主题). Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A的例子).
On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. According to them, ______________ (观点B). The most typical example is that __________ (支持观点B的例子).
Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable to some extent, but the latter is more convincing.
模版三:
Nowadays many people prefer __________ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, ________________ (主题的优点1).Besides, ___________________ (主题的优点2). But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent.
One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.
个人(该事物对人类个人有何好处):细分为两类:即tangible(看得见)的好处和intangible(看不见)的好处;
tangible(看得见)的好处:
A.与身体健康有关:
By taking parting in recreational activities, you can strengthen your body. (remain fit, remain physically healthy, keep slim )
They hold their view for the reason that recreational activities, singing songs or dancing in particular, can help to relax us both mentally and physically.
Chocolates can satisfy hunger and help you gain nourishments necessary to your body.
B.与工作有关。

After taking paring in recreational activates, you will proceed with your work with much higher efficiency..
That will enable you to obtain a well-paid job.
C.与金钱,时间有关
If we cancel the Spring Festival Gala, we will save a lot of money, which we can spend on something more important.
By working part time at summer, we can earn a lot of money to finance our education.
The existence of various recreational activities can contribute a lot to the financial revenue of the government
What’s more, the universities can enhance both their financial income and academic popularity by opening themselves to the tourists.
intangible(看不见)的好处;
A.改善心情,舒缓压力
Recreational activities can make you feel better and release the pressure of work and study.
For those who work under great pressure, recreational activities are their best way to relax themselves.
They will find themselves refreshed, full of vigour and energy.
B.交友
You may make new friends through the activities organized by our club every
week, which will undoubtedly enrich your college life.
Recreational activities may acquaint you with persons from all walks of life.
By so doing, you can smooth over your relationship with others.
C.开阔眼界,增长知识
You can attend the lectures given by some famous professors in English learning so that your horizon will be further broadened.
Some students just want to acquire more knowledge and broaden their horizon, since the information and knowledge learned in regular classes is still far from enough.
They hold their view for the reason that by doing so, high school students and their parents will gain a better knowledge about the universities they want to apply with.
D.增加方便
The use of private car will make our life easier and more convenient.
E。

认识社会,增长人际交往经验
By working part time, you can have a much closer picture of the real society.
You can also enhance your ability to comminute with others.
F。

提高成绩,提高英语水平
You will have more opportunities to practice your oral English by participating in English Corner.
Your English will be improved as long as you work hard enough.
Your vocabulary can be enlarged.
You will make fewer mistakes in your written English.
G.提高在未来求职中的竞争力
On the contrary, other students select electives with a clear purpose in their mind, that is, to learn some practical skills. By doing so, they can make themselves more competitive in future job-hunting when they are to graduate.
H.增强信心
It will help you recover you confidence in yourself.
By doing so, you will restore your self-confidence.
I.增强责任感,增强爱心:
It will restore/strengthen your sense of responsibility.
You will learn to show concern for others.
If we can solve the problem successfully, the whole society will become much more harmonious.
tangible(看得见)的坏处:
A.与身体健康有关:
If you take too much chocolate, you will become fat.
It will do great harm to your health.
What’s worse, even our health is threatened.
Those who frequently use private car are most likely to suffer from health problems due to the lack of exercise.
You will feel pretty tired and exhausted after taking too many recreational activities.
You will find your hair fall off and your eyesight become more and more poor.
B.影响工作。

If you indulge yourself in recreational activates, you will find yourself falling behind in your work.
Some of them spend so much time on video games that they ignore their regular work.
c。

浪费钱和时间
For one thing, they claim that the yearly Gala costs too much money on the part of the government and the people.
It will cost us too much time and money to play video games too often. intangible(看不见)的坏处;
A.心情变糟,压力变大
In the fast-paced modern society, most of us live under great pressure and stress.
They will find life is so boring and meaningless.
They will find the pressure on their shoulders become more and more intense.
It will intensify the pressure on their shoulders.
B.人际关系变差
It is very difficult for them to make friends with others.
There are so many conflicts arising between them.
C.知识面过于狭窄
If you only focus on your books without choosing any elective courses, you can hardly broaden your horizon or enrich your knowledge.
D.生活不便
It is so inconvenient to live in the countryside.
E。

人际交往经验不足
If you simply set your mind on books without working part time,you will become too bookish to know what the real society is.
You will become too immature to know what the real society is.
You will be very poor in communicating with others.
F。

荒废学业或工作
Those people who are addicted to such activities, like video games, are most likely to fall behind in their work or study.
Some of the students spend so much time on video games that they ignore their study.
They will end up failing their t ests.
G.未来求职中没有竞争力
They will be put into a disadvantageous position in future job-hunting when they are to graduate.
H.丧失信心
They will lose their confidence in themselves
I.对什么上瘾,无法自拔。

They are too addicted to internet games.
They are obsessed with internet games.
They indulge themselves in internet games.
J.宏观上的坏处
If we fail to address the problem properly, the whole society will be affected adversely.
表达利弊的句型:
1.It is of great benefit to us./ It is beneficial to us./It brings us a lot of benefits./
It does us a lot of good.
2.It does us much harm./ It is harmful to us./It poses a great threat to…
3.Although… contributes greatly to… they may inevitably bring about many
negative impacts.
4.… is a double-edged sword. /…cuts both ways(有利有弊)/has both
favorable and unfavorable aspects. Under favorable conditions, it helps everyone; under unfavorable conditions, it hurts everyone.
5.…’s promise may exceed its peril.
6.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
As the proverb goes: "every coin has its two sides", ....is no exception.
俗语有云:"万事万物都有两面性。

" ________也不例外。

Every thing has a good side and a bad side, and ....is no exception.
万事万物有其两面性,而________也是如此。

The discussion as to whether the ... is a blessing or a curse arouses most people's interests.
__________是好坏利弊问题引起了很多人的兴趣。

..plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world.
______ 尤为重要而引起当今社会的关注。

There comes a question: is it a blessing or a curse.
问题是:____是福是祸?
There is no denying that every thing has one more face and ... is no exception.
不可否认,每一件事物都有其两面性,其实,______也不例外。

Every thing in the world has its own two sides. Without exception, A has both advantages and disadvantages.
As we know, ... bring many benefits and convenience to people.
众所周知,_______ 为我们的生活带来很多好处。

There are no less than three advantages in .. as rendered below.
如下所示,_______ 至少有三种好处。

Despite the advantages ... has, some people claim, we shall not lose sight of its adverse effects on...
尽管_____有些益处(优势),有些人则认为,我们不能忽略了其对______的负面影响。

However, with the advance of the human civilization, there is an increasing number of people who have raised doubts about whether...
然而,随着人类文明的进步,越来越多的人开始置疑是否__________。

Some people deem it is a dangerous signal and call for public awareness of the negative effects it has brought about.
有些人认为这是一种危险的信号,因此需关注其给社会带来的负面影响。

Despite its merits, it also brings some problems to solve.
尽管其也有很多优点,不过,也给我们带来一些问题。

But its bright side should not keep us from examining its dark side.
但是,我们不能因为这些优点而忽略了其缺点。

From the reasons presented above, I think the pros outweigh the cons.
从以上原因可以看出,其优势胜过劣势(优点多于缺点)。

As far as I am concerned, its disadvantages outweigh its disadvantages.
我认为,其优势胜于劣势。

衔接词:
1. 列举
first(ly), second(ly), third(ly);
To begin/start with, after that/moreover, finally/lastly;
First of all, next, then, eventually;
For one thing…, for another.., last of all;
What comes first is that… Then comes…;
In the first place, in the second place, in the third place
2. 因果
because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result, for this reason, consequently, accordingly, thus, hence, therefore, in this way
3. 比较和对比
unlike, in contrast, on the contrary, on one hand…;and on the other hand, while, whereas, similarly, in the same way, just as
4. 附加和递进
In add ition, additionally, also, besides, furthermore, moreover, what’s more, not only…but also…,
5. 举例
for example, for instance, a case in point, to illustrate, as an illustration, take…for example
6. 让步,转折
though, although, despite, in spite of, regardless of, even though, but, yet, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas
7. 表示关于,至于
as regards, with regard to, concerning, as for, in terms of
8. 表总结
all in all, briefly, in brief, altogether, to conclude, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up, to summarize, on the whole ,in sum,
We can draw the conclusion from what we have talked about…
According to the above analysis, we can arrive at the conclusion that…
参考范文:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the t opic “Study abroad or in China?” You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.很多人认为有志向的学生应当到海外留学,理由是…
2.也有人持不同意见…
3. 我的看法
Study Abroad or in China?
There is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether students should study abroad or not. Some people are of the view that the youths should go overseas for further study if possible, while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that it is of no necessity for students to study in a foreign country.
Those people who maintain that it is good for students to go abroad for further study argue that diverse culture background can broaden students’ horizon. They also claim that overseas study can shape students’ personal ity because they are forced to deal with all kinds of difficulties by themselves.
Nevertheless, the other people who contend that domestic education is good enough for students argue that our educational quality has been greatly improved during the past decade. They also point out that domestic education is convenient and economical.
As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight. For one thing, it can strengthen the learners’ abilities to understand and communicate with people from other cultures. For another, the developed countries still have a lot advanced knowledge which is worth our study. When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that studying abroad is advisable.
Free Admission to Museums
Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as there’s a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only with free access to museums, can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.
However, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly hinders the sustainable development of these organizations. As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control. On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.
As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct. Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some ‘closed’ da ys for museums for regular maintenance. Free admission to museums becomes a long-lasting phenomenon and has sustainable development.
Advantages and disadvantages of private cars
With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.
Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.
However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom is often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have
一点为你整理你的笑容就是我的成功!killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.
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