2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：善举类——帮助从未看过马戏的孩子看马戏 课件
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➢ 由第一段首句内容“看到发生了什么，爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张20美元的钞 票，掉在地上。”可知，第一段可描写作者的父亲告诉这位男士钱是从他口袋里 掉出来的，男士明白发生了什么，非常感激。
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续写思路分析
➢ That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. ➢ 由第二段首句内容“那天，爸爸和我回到车里，没有买到票，开车回家了。”可
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情节构建的重点
点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔 接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔 接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔 接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能 量，揭示和强调主题。
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续写思路分析
➢ Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
知，第二段可描写作者的父亲向作者解释这样做的原因，并对作者进行教育。
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续写思路分析
➢ 续写线索 ➢ 捡起——告知——明白源自—感谢——询问——解释——教育——理解
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续写素材
➢ 可用词汇： ➢ 行为类 ➢ ①掉落：fall/drop ➢ ②乞求：beg for/implore ➢ ③获得：obtain/gain ➢ 情绪类 ➢ ①眼含泪水：with tears in one's eyes/with eyes full of tears ➢ ②感激：appreciate/be grateful for
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money.
The man didn’t have enough money.How could he turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus?
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段首句
Paragraph1: Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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续写原文
It was clear that they had never been to the circus before. The father was at the head of the pack, and the mother was holding her husband’s hand. The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
Paragraph 2: That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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Part 2 题目分析
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续写原文分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候和父亲一起去看马戏，排队买票时 他们前面只有一个家庭，这个家庭有八个孩子，孩子们很兴奋地讨论即将看到的马 戏表演，很明显这一家从未看过马戏。孩子们的父亲在得知他们全家一起看马戏需 要付的票价时尴尬地发现自己没有足够的钱。这时作者的父亲把自己的20美元掏出 来扔在地上告诉这位男士这是他掉出来的。这位男士明白了一切，非常感激。作者 从这次经历中明白我们应该珍惜我们从生活中得到的，抓住每一个机会去帮助别人。
The ticket lady gave that price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped. The father leaned a little closer and asked,“How much did you say?” The ticket lady gave the price again.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night in a low voice.
高考英语读后续写语篇练习
善举类 帮助从未看过马戏的孩子看马戏
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读后续写
题目再现 题目分析 范文呈现 努力方向
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Part 1 题目呈现
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续写原文
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(马戏). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
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续写思路分析
➢ That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. ➢ 由第二段首句内容“那天，爸爸和我回到车里，没有买到票，开车回家了。”可
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情节构建的重点
点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔 接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔 接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔 接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能 量，揭示和强调主题。
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续写思路分析
➢ Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
知，第二段可描写作者的父亲向作者解释这样做的原因，并对作者进行教育。
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续写思路分析
➢ 续写线索 ➢ 捡起——告知——明白源自—感谢——询问——解释——教育——理解
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续写素材
➢ 可用词汇： ➢ 行为类 ➢ ①掉落：fall/drop ➢ ②乞求：beg for/implore ➢ ③获得：obtain/gain ➢ 情绪类 ➢ ①眼含泪水：with tears in one's eyes/with eyes full of tears ➢ ②感激：appreciate/be grateful for
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money.
The man didn’t have enough money.How could he turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus?
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段首句
Paragraph1: Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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续写原文
It was clear that they had never been to the circus before. The father was at the head of the pack, and the mother was holding her husband’s hand. The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
Paragraph 2: That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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Part 2 题目分析
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续写原文分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候和父亲一起去看马戏，排队买票时 他们前面只有一个家庭，这个家庭有八个孩子，孩子们很兴奋地讨论即将看到的马 戏表演，很明显这一家从未看过马戏。孩子们的父亲在得知他们全家一起看马戏需 要付的票价时尴尬地发现自己没有足够的钱。这时作者的父亲把自己的20美元掏出 来扔在地上告诉这位男士这是他掉出来的。这位男士明白了一切，非常感激。作者 从这次经历中明白我们应该珍惜我们从生活中得到的，抓住每一个机会去帮助别人。
The ticket lady gave that price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped. The father leaned a little closer and asked,“How much did you say?” The ticket lady gave the price again.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night in a low voice.
高考英语读后续写语篇练习
善举类 帮助从未看过马戏的孩子看马戏
1
读后续写
题目再现 题目分析 范文呈现 努力方向
2
Part 1 题目呈现
3
续写原文
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(马戏). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.