初三英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)及解析

初三英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)及解析
一、英语书面表达
1．（题文）书面表达
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：
1. 定时做饭、洗衣服；
2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。

要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时
emergency 紧急情况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to intro duce my new invention to all of you.
I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercis e. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future 等。

而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的
最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。

但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。

你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；`
2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life
today.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。

需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then等。

可以适
当使用高分句型。

【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。

I think+宾语从句。

It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。

3．假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。

请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my
dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?
Tell me about your ideal job!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。

【详解】
首先回答职业是教师。

然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。

为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。

最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】
本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

4．人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。

请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。

2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people
think___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。

注意文体、人称和时态。

文章要有层次、流畅。

可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。

Change for a better China
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some peopl e don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also
put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more
healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。

写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。

内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【点睛】
本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。

2. 句式丰富。

表述灵活。

衔接自然，顺畅。

文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

6．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传。

请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右。

Longjing Tea
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea. Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料类介绍型作文，所以我们必须要结合所给材料再适当补充内容。

时态以一般现在时为主。

亮点词汇短语：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea绿茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth对…严格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不仅．．．而且．．．。

亮点句型：
It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龙井茶对人们保持健康有好处。

It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （对某人来说）做某事是怎样的。

Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龙井是我国著名的茶叶，它不仅与龙井的气候、土壤环境有关，而且与龙井的生产工艺有关。

Which引导的限定性定语从句。

Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龙井茶出产的胜地。

Where引导的定语从句。

7．书面表达。

76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。

请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Als o, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.
【解析】
试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。

因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。

注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母；look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。

用了宾语从句，
如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。

考点：材料作文。

8．书面表达
中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。

旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。

请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。

要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由；
2. 结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；
5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting. However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。

旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。

要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

9．书面表达
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）
的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。

食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。

虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。

熟悉英语的表达方式。

避免汉语式英语。

句型不要都用简单句。

另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。

写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。

对于城市A 的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。

对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可
以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。

在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。

在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。

本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。

10．近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。

“扫雪机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。

请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。

要求：
1、词数：60-80词。

2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。

3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
I really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.
In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）” 这一话题展开讨论，并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点，结合此观点阐述自己的看法。

在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后再动笔写作。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，辅以第一人称。

文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因，接下来说明自己的观点，并阐述自己观点的原因。

3.高分亮点：
短语：in one's lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。

句型：
高分句型一：In this case，they think children have a successful life easily．In this case在这样
的情况下；这句话意为：在这样的情况下，他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。

高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble. be in trouble 陷入麻烦，这句话意为：当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。