【英语】英语书面表达题20套(带答案)及解析(1)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
近几年来，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，但一些游客的不文明行为也成为国内外舆论关注的焦点。

直接影响着中国“礼仪之邦”之形象。

新华旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客应认真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”，请以How to be a qualified tourist 为题目写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

1 、保护环境，不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾。

2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公众场所喧哗，购物时排队。

3 、保护文物古迹，不到处乱涂乱刻，不攀爬触摸文物。

4 、节约用水用电，用餐不浪费。

注意：
1. 文章必须包括提示内容，可以适当扩展，增加细节使行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
4. 参考词汇：文物古迹cultural relics 文物artifacts
How to be a Qualified Tourist
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【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw t he rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】写作分析：
这篇写作需要围绕“如何做一个合格的游客”展开写作，具体的要点已经给出了。

写作的时候可以适当借助祈使句来表示“不应该做…”，需要注意使用恰当的方式引入文章，衔接好每个要点。

写作亮点：
开头应该对写作的背景进行一定的交代。

“bad manners”表示礼貌状况不好，然后讲到了这些行为对中国的名声有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），这里用到了现在完成时，表示伤害已经造成了，产生了不好的影响，时态的妙用是一个亮点。

紧接着发问引入主题。

借助first, second等词串联起自己的观点。

相关短语使用恰当，“are sup posed to”（应该…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四处乱扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保护文化遗产），最后文章有简练的收尾，we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我们会为我们自己和我们的国家赢得尊重），简练，完成了写作任务。

2．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
假设你叫李明，曾荣幸成为天津国际马拉松赛的一名志愿者。

请根据以下要点，用英文写一篇演讲稿，谈谈这一段美好的经历。

（1）年4月国际马拉松赛在天津举行；
（2）作为志愿者，赛前接受了培训；
（3）在闲暇时间里，和运动员用英语交谈，为他们提供帮助；
（4）和许多运动员成为了朋友，也了解了许多不同的文化；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：志愿者 volunteer
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help them.And we are friends with many athletes.At the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.
I think the experience is good for me.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for等。

而Tianjin
International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a training.等被动语态和I think the experience is good for me.宾语从句的运用，使本文内容丰富，语态多样，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达（原创）
今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。

学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自
己的观点。

Grabbing red
packets on line
Agreement
（75%）
1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun
2.bring people closer, make more friends
Disagreement
（25%）
spend too much time.
not have enough communication with family members, feel
lonely
Your opinion
1.
2.
提示词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
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【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them s ay some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely
Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。

题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。

最后还要加上自己的看法。

因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。

写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。

为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。

文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。

第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。

其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。

文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people
in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。

文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。

4．（·宁夏中考模拟）（题文）假如你是李华，作为交换生你去年在美国学习了一学期。

在美期间，你住在Tom家，在这一学期里，你和他及他的家人结下了深厚的友谊。

请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记。

1. 介绍Tom：为人友好，乐于助人，你们相处很融洽；
2. 他在英语学习方面给你的帮助；你了解了美国的文化；
3. 他的父母悉心照顾你的生活，给你做中国菜;
4. ……（自由发挥，至少谈及两项内容）；
5. 希望他和他的家人能来中国。

注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Friday May 27th, Sunny
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【答案】Friday May 27th, Sunny
I’m feeli ng a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will come to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.
【解析】
这是一篇要求介绍自己为交换生你去年在美国学习了一学期。

在美期间，你住在Tom家，在这一学期里，你和他及他的家人结下了深厚的友谊。

请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
某英语教育网站正在举办有关分享的主题征文活动，请你根据图示内容，结合自己的经历写一篇题为“Sharing”的英语短文。

注意：
1.短文需包括图示内容，并适当发挥。

2.词数80左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Sharing
It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other.
【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like QQ or Wechat.
Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot.
In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.
【解析】
此篇书面表达的话题是“分享”。

首先我们根据给出的图表确定要写的内容的提纲，包括：分享什么？为什么分享？怎么分享？然后根据每个提纲给出的一些关键词，列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达，拓展思维，写出自己的看法。

最后，我们还要注意“分享”的情感教育，让我们学有所获。

文章时态要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。

在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。

同时要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

6．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。

请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：
（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exerci se. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。

此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
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All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。

同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意
总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

8．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。

假定你是李明，你最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。

请认真阅读下
面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。

注意事项:
1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear David,
I'm really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful time here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Thomas,
I’m really happy to tell you something interesting a bout China. China is a country with along history.
It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.
“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.
Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。

所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：●What's the season in China now? ●What's the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这几个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。

注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。

句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。

【高分句型二】
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。

you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。

9．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。

你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。

留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
Best wishes!
Wu Hao
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help.
Best wishes!
Wu Hao
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

10．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
下面的图片描述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。

小林和小刚之间的对话，让你想到了什么？请根据你对图片的理解，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

内容包括：1. 完整描述图片内容； 2. 简要阐述你的观点和看法。

写作要求：1. 可以根据图片信息，进行适当的发挥；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

提示词：手提电脑 laptop
【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries
and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。

首先学生们应仔细观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。

审题可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己的观点和看法。

短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当发挥，使文章更加充实、完整。

其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句或复合句结构。

为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。

同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，并对这件事发表了自己的看法。

短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者通过观察图片，正确了解了图片传达的信息，确定了文章的中心。

文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、有层次。

作者观点明确，理由充分。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓语动词的形式，注意了过去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。

最后短文中句式结构文章，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用，文章富有节奏的变化。

短文中还使用了丰富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、
But I think it is not proper to compare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.等。

11．（·云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假, 你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。

请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。

要求：
1. 回信必须包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥, 字数在80字左右, 开头和结尾不计入总字数。

2. 回信中不得出现真实的人名和校名, 否则将以零分计。

3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。

Dear peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文Dear peter ,
Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.
Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After coming back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the coming senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university.
That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours.
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
【详解】
本文分三个自然段。

第一段点出文章主题you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。

第二自然段用Firstly，Then ，After coming back有序列出三个计划。

文章结尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours总结。

另外，文中为第一人称，时态主要为一般将来时will visit my grandparents，I am going to take trip，I will learn senior subjects等。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,
I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon.
We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
➢ recommend two traditional Chinese things
➢ show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意事项：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift
b ecause Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】
【详解】
本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。

第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。

例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。

理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。

文章干净利落，层次分明。

13．（·徐州市西苑中学中考模拟）书面表达
一日之计在于晨。

同学们，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上学路上，当我们有充足的时间安排一天的学习生活时，你会发现每天早起一点点会给我们带来许多好处。

请你以“ It’s good to get up early”为题，写一篇90词左右短文。

要求：
1. 包含所给信息，并适当发挥。