2020高中英语读后续写-技巧专题09 高分情绪描写技巧(解析版)

专题09 高分情绪描写技巧
一、情绪描写之笑
smile brightly; grin at sb; laugh; beam; light (sth) up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing；wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile
学一学：
beam: smile very happily
例：获胜者满意地笑了。

译法一：The winner beamed/smiled with satisfaction.
译法二：The winner wore a satisfied smile on his face.
light up: if someone’s face or eyes light up, they show pleasure, excitement etc
light up with：His eyes lit up with laughter.
Her face lit up with pleasure.
light sth up: to make someone’s face or eyes show pleasure or excitement
Suddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes.
练一练：
看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。

【答案一】：At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.
【答案二】：Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.
【答案三】：The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane’s eyes/ face lit up with delight.
【答案四】：The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit up Jane’s face/eyes.
判断正误：Seeing the helicopter, a bright smile lit up her face.
【答案】：错seeing 和a bright smile 逻辑不一致。

二、情绪描写之高兴激动
V.dance; whistle; jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; be overcome with happines/delight/joy/excitement;(one’s eyes) twinkle；(one’s heart) beat/pound wildly
Adj.happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy
练一练：
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。

【答案一】：When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/ thrilled.
【答案二】：When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
【答案三】：When she knew the result of the test, her heart was pounding with wild joy.
【答案四】：When she knew the result of the test, a wild excitement took hold of her.
【答案五】：Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.
【答案六】：Knowing the result of the test, she was overcome with excitement.
三、情绪描写之生气
feel/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off ; storm(say angrily);
sth. makes sb’s blood boil(sth makes sb extremely angry); clasp one’s hands; clench one’s fists/teeth; sp eechless
练一练：
Sam 感到非常生气。

【答案一】：Sam felt very angry.
【答案二】：Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.
【答案三】：Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
【答案四】：Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me.
【答案五】：Filled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word.
四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
sad; bitter; sorrowful; feel a surge of sadness; (sadness) surge within sb; one’s heart ache; be overcome with sadness
练一练：
她伤心不已。

【答案一】：She felt extremely sad.
【答案二】：A sadness came over her.
【答案三】：Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
【答案四】：Numb with grief, she became speechless.
【答案五】：Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn’t help crying bitterly.
【答案六】：Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.
五、情绪描写之哭
cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying; (one’s eyes) brim with/be full of/be filled with tears
练一练：
1.他哽咽欲哭。

【答案】：A lump came to his throat.
2.她的双眼哭得通红
【答案】：Her eyes were red from crying.
3.她的眼里满含泪水。

【答案】：Her eyes brimmed with tears.
4.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
【答案】：Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.
5.Oliver 独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水
【答案】：Alone in the room, Oliver cried bitter, lonely tears．
6.Wilbur哭着直到睡着。

【答案】：Wilbur cried himself to sleep.
六、情绪描写之害怕:
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cold sweat; be full of fear; be filled with terror; be rooted to the spot; freeze; run away; flee; one’s knees feel weak; (hands) sweat;
练一练：
我感到很害怕。

【答案一】：I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
【答案二】：I was in (a) panic/ was full of fear.
【答案三】：I stood rooted to the spot, brimming with fear/filled with fear.
【答案四】：I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
【答案五】：I froze with terror, too scared to move.
【答案六】：I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating.
七、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.
On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:
The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.
Paragraph 2:
The farmer was lucky. A few days later,
【参考范文】
Paragraph 1:
The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.
thinking he would be sentenced to death by killing people. But he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. Helpless, he was eager that someone could come and save him.
Paragraph 2:
The farmer was lucky. A few days later, a young man came to the police station, followed by a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! Seeing the police officer use a knife killing the man late in the evening, he was so frightened that he quickly ran away. The young man
thought the farmer was innocent. So he plucked up enough courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, evidence showed that what the young man had said was true. Consequently, the evil police officer was sent into prison and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.
【点评】文章故事情节紧凑合理，叙述流畅，表达准确。

语言表达形式丰富，能合理使用各种从句、现在分词、过去分词等。

afraid, helpless, eager, frightened 和pluck up enough courage 生动细腻地描写了文中人物的内心活动，使故事内容更加充实动人。