中考英语书面表达应对技巧及训练(含解析)经典

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
生活中总有一些事情让人觉得无奈，被人误解、考试失利、遭遇逆境等。

请以“There is always hope ”为题，写一篇你的亲身经历及感受。

What’s your feeling? What did you learn from it?
提示：①词数不少于70词②可适当添加细节使行文更加流畅③文中请勿提及真实的姓名和校名。

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【答案】There is always hope
As middle school students, we have all taken many examinations and experienced failure as well as success. Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams.
Some of us become low in spirits in the face of failure. Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on.
Fortunately, I got the helps of my teachers. They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to become more confident so that I won’t repeat the mistakes in my later examinations.
I believe there is always hope. So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as middle school students，as well as，in the exams，some of，low in spirits，want to do，make further efforts，as a result，go on，spare no effort to do，so that，so long as，find out，make great progress，turn into等。

Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. / They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to become more confident so that I won’t repeat the mistakes in my later
examinations./ So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
保护环境是每一个人的责任。

假设下面是你阅读了有关环保的书之后的变化，请根据表格内所给内容写一篇短文。

要求：1.短文必须包含所给信息，并适当发挥.要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2.表格中最后一栏用2句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。

3.词数在90个左右.文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总同数。

It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot.
【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.
In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket. However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.
I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save
water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我阅读了关于环保的书后的很大变化。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了保护环境是我们的职责，我阅读了关于环保的书后有很大变化，接下来介绍我过去和现在在环保方面有什么样的变化，最后作为中学生我们应如何保护环境。

此处in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．（·广东中考模拟）随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，
经历着巨大的变化。

请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。

内容包括：
1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？
2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。

开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,
【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。

此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion,
try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
随着互联网和手机终端发展，成瘾性网络游戏使一些中学生沉迷其中，影响了学习进步和身心健康。

上周你们学校开展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many computer games ”为主题的专题讨论。

请根据下表中的要点提示，写一篇短文，提出一些意见。

注意 1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数；
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名；
Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many computer games .The students have different opinions.
【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many computer games. The students have different opinions.
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can communicate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.
When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.
As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must come first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文。

给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。

我们只要用英语正确的把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点就行。

动笔前要真人阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当的发挥。

根据题目要求，短文是一篇议论文，时态用一般现在时，人称为第三人称。

写作中要注意适当使用连词，注意上下文紧密联系。

符合逻辑关系。

高分句型【1】
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and
disadvantages of the Internet. 他们认为他们的学校可以开班会，帮助他们认识到互联网的利与弊。

动词不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.用作目的状语。

高分句型【2】
Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，学校应该定期举办有益的校外活动。

此句是含有情态动词的被动语态。

其构成为：情态动词+be+及物动词的过去分词。

高分句型【3】
Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 与学校紧密合
作是家长帮助他们的另一重要途径。

动名词Working closely with schools作主语，视作单数，因此be动词用is。

5．（·全国中考模拟）假如你是Ivy，你们学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动。

请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识，用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿。

提示问题：
（1） Why do you show your kindness to others? （At least one reason）
（2） What do you usually do when someone needs help? （At least two examples）
（3） How do you feel?
写作要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.
【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.
It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.
As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have become close friends.
I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.
【解析】这是一篇关于学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动，谈谈自己的看法；
英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是怎样的；make great progress 取得巨大进步
6．（·山西中考模拟）书面表达请将作文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

在家庭生活中，我们会做很多关于我们青少年的决定，比如该买什么新年衣服，该怎样庆祝生日，该上哪所学校等。

你认为在我们自己的事情上应该自己做决定，还是听从家长的意见？针对这一话题，九年级七班的同学们展开了辩论。

假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自身的亲身经历
．．．．．．．，说出2至3条理由来支持你的观点。

（只能选择一方观点表达。

）
要求：1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

【答案】One possible version：
At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.
After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.
There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇议论文，论点是：在我们自己的事情上，我们应该自己做决定，还是由家长来做决定。

关于这个话题每个人都会有自己的看法，题目要求我们任选一个观点来讲述，并结合自己的亲身经历，给出2到3个理由。

写作之前，我们应先从正方和反方中选择一个，作为自己的观点，然后围绕这一观点阐述自己的理由。

这是一篇话题作文，题目中并没有给我们规定具体的写作内容，我们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自
己的日常生活来组织语言，丰富文章的内容。

写作时还应注意的是语言的表达，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译，而是从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型，多用简单句，如主谓宾、主系表的结构，点缀几个复合句或并列句，调整文章节奏，让文章的句子富于变化，有新鲜感。

高级句型或词汇的使用也可以提升文章的档次，在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意表达连贯、流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整，观点明确，结构合理。

短文作者选择了正方的观点，第一句话先点明自己的观点是什么，接下来围绕这一观点进行阐述，并从自己的经历出发，阐述了自己持有这一观点的理由，充分、合理，有说服力。

最后一段作者重申自己的观点，并进行了总结。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，文章以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。

句式表达符合英语的表达习惯，简单句为主，也使用了较多的复合句和高级句型，如状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等。

有些句子较长，是由于使用高级句型所致，一味使用较长的句子也会导致文章的冗长，让读者感觉比较累，因此要注意调整文章的节奏。

短文中较好的句型和短语有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things.等。

7．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。

请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：
（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,
It’s my great plea sure to receive your e-mail.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。

此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。

你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。

以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。

请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste
of time; cause a lot of stress
要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。

开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
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Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And t hese activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.
Thank you!【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。

另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。

首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。

短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, thes e classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

9．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
南京阳光中学每年要接特来自世界各地的交流学生。

为了让他们更好地在南京学习生活，校学生会面向全体学生招募“阳光志愿者”。

假如你是李明，请根据下面招募广告，用英文写一封自荐信。

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Required Qualifications
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Helpful, patient, outgoing
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Duties
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Working hours
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Contact Info.
Ms. Yang Email: iindayang@
Join us!
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数80左右，自荐信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
Dear Ms. Yang
I would to be a sunshine volunteer. ______________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ I will be very happy if I am chosen .to be a volunteer.. I'm really looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Ms. Yang,
I would like to be sunshine volunteer.First I am good at both English and Chinese.And I am sure I can teach exchange students Chinese well.I am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in need.Besides,I am patient enough everything in detail.i have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of it.I can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing well.I am outgoing and I think it’s easy for me to make friends with them,I am free from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. on Wednesday.I can teach them Chinese during this time.I can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing.
I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteer.Iam really looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是写一封作学校“阳光志愿者”的自荐信。

【详解】
这是篇材料作文。

招募广告即写作的主要内容，考生可从自己是否满足招募要求入手。

在
写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变
化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。

同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的
整体。

10．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做
了一次问卷调查。

下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调
查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占：43%
理由：
1. 强身健体，预防疾病
2. 训练求生技能
3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：
1. 害怕水
2. 有危险性
3. 气温低时容易感冒
你的观点与理由？
要求：
1. 词数80左右。

（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）
2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.
【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in so me schools. Here’s the result from one school.
About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we
face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.
However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.
（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。

文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。

注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

11．（·广东中考模拟）假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。

你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。

请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。

而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

12．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习的最好方式之一。

请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。

注意：
1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；
2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中；
3. 词数：100词左右；
【答案】例文
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。

而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and
make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

13．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题
．．．．，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计入总词数。

所给提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①
假如你是李华，本周六龙湖公园将举办端午节游园活动。

你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter
和你一起参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们见面的时间、地点，在那儿可以做些什么以及他需要做什么准备。

提示词语: meet, take part in, the dragon boat race, make Zongzi, camera…
提示问题:
When and where are you going to meet?
What can you do there?
What do you advise Peter to prepare?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities in Longhu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me.
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
“我们都在努力奔跑, 我们都是追梦人。

”有梦想就有目标, 有希冀才会奋斗。

某英文网站正在开展以“We Are All Dreamers”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈谈你的梦想是什么？你为什么会有这样的梦想？为了实现你的梦想, 你打算怎么做？。