【高考】英语读后续写之环境描写共课件完整版

The gurgle of the stream soothed me.
• 3. PITTER-PATTTER! I was disturbed 高考链接--2019年浙江高考题
如：the lofty mountains高耸的山脉
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sound
• 1.声音特效--拟声词 • 2.感官 • 3. 否定描述
一拟声词作动词
1. The frozen snow crunched under our feet. 冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。crunch v&n.嘎吱作响；嘎吱声 2. Birds were chattering/twittering somewhere. 鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。 chatter/twitter/chirp v&n.唧唧叫;叽喳叫 3. Wild animals started to roar/howl. 野生动物开始咆哮。 roar/ howl v&n咆哮 4.The leaves rustled in the wind. 树叶在风中沙沙作响。 rustle v&n 发出沙沙的摩擦声 5. The river gurgled and burbled. 河水汩汩地流淌着。 gurgle v&n 发出潺潺流水声；潺潺声 6. The thunder was rumbling in the distance. 远处雷声隆隆。 rumble v&n 发出隆隆声 ；隆隆声 7. The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild howling wind. 这脆弱的小树啪地一下被狂风吹断了，倒在了地上crack v&n.噼啪作响,折断
6、为什么说维护民族团结,既是国家的事，也是我们应尽的责任和义务? 49、勿问成功的秘诀为何，且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳
• gurgling 潺潺的（流水） 78、什么时候，雨水把眼泪悄悄覆盖，回忆在心里开始残落。
通过了解明朝统一全国和经略边疆的相关举措，认识这一时期包括南海诸岛、台湾及其包括钓鱼岛在内的附属岛屿的统一多民族国家版图奠定的重要意义。 49、知识的价值只有在实践中得到证实。 ：定量实验
• 触觉上 • hard 硬的 soft/gentle 轻柔的 • burning/scorching火辣辣的 icy/freezing冰冷的 • biting刺骨的；bone-chilling刺骨的； warm温暖的；wet/damp潮湿的 • silky 丝滑的 sharp尖锐的 rough 粗糙的 bumpy 崎岖不平的 • shaggy毛茸茸的； wooden木质的
• 如：the deafening applause 震耳欲聋的掌声 • the gurgling stream 潺潺流淌的小溪 • the melodious voice 悦耳的嗓音 • the howling wind怒吼的大风
• 嗅觉上 smelly/foul/stinky臭的;难闻的 fragrant 清香的 fresh 新鲜的 sweet甜的 strong强烈的 choking 让人窒息的
咔嚓一声，狂风把这棵脆弱的小树折成了两半。
• 咔嚓一声，狂风把这棵脆弱的小树折成了两半。 We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
Jane was stuck in the middle of nowhere with no food, no water, no light, and more importantly, no warm hugs of her husband, Tom.
• 2. CRACK! The fragile little tree was broken in two by the wild howling wind. 他们听到远处传来一声低沉的狮子的怒吼。
To tell the reader what is not there is an effect way of showing how unpleasant, comfortless a place is.
• 滴答滴答！这个老式落地钟的声音让我毛骨悚然。
高考链接--2019年浙江高考题
But no more helicopers came and it was getting dark again.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ___ 参考答案：Jane stopped to find a place to rest. But the annoying rustle of the trees in the wind, the low gurgle of the stream and the distant roar of wild animals made it extremely hard for her to fall asleep. 此处运用了拟声词作
• 如：the biting wind 刺骨的狂风
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a little wooden jewelry box 小的木质首饰盒
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the gentle breeze 轻柔的微风
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a bumpy road 一条崎岖不平的小路
• 听觉上
• low小声的 high大声的 • noisy 吵闹的 • deafening 震耳欲聋的 • howling 怒号的；猛烈的 • melodious 悦耳的 61、憎恨别人对自己是一种很大的损失。
一拟声词作名词
• 1. They heard the twitter/chatter of birds among the bushes. • 他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喳喳声。 • 2. The dog gave several fierce barks. • 狗汪汪吠了几声。bark v&n 狗吠 • 3.The wolf's long howl paralyzed Mac. • 狼的长嚎声让他一动也不敢动。 • 4. They heard a deep, distant roar of the lion. • 他们听到远处传来一声低沉的狮子的怒吼。 • 5. They heard a rustle in the bushes. • 他们听到灌木丛中一阵沙沙声。 • 6. The gurgle of the stream soothed me. • 潺潺的流水声让我很放松。 • 7.I heard the rumble of thunder in the distance. • 我听到远处的隆隆雷声。
二.感官——sight/touch/sound/smell
• 视觉上 • enormous /gigantic/immense/vast 巨大的 tiny 极小的 small /little小的 • sparkling/twinkling/glittering 闪闪发光的 dim昏暗的 dark黑暗的 • lofty高耸入云 steep 险峻的 deep深的 narrow狭窄的 winding 蜿蜒的 • feathery鹅毛般的 foggy雾蒙蒙的 misty 有雾的 sunny 有太阳的
这句话通过四个no的排比来体现出这个地方什么都没有，让人十分不舒适。 例3：There was no light, no twitter of the birds and no little naughty stars in the sky. Everything was dead silent. Not a single sound or movement could be heard.
一拟声词作感叹词
• 1. BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having
a terrible thunderstorm. I was very scared. She began to regret fighting with her husband and miss his warm hug.
a bumpy road 一条崎岖不平的小路
• 外面狂风呼啸，我们正经历一场可怕的雷雨，轰隆声不断。 TICK-TACK! the sound of the old clock gave me the creeps.
The leaves rustled in the wind.
the melodious voice 悦耳的嗓音
如：the fragrant flowers 芳香的花朵 the fresh air 清新的空气
高考链接--2019年浙江高考题
But no more helicopers came and it was getting dark again.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ___ 参考答案: Jane sat on the damp潮湿的 grass and stared up at the pale 昏暗的stars in the vast sky, tears streaming down her dirty face. The bone-chilling刺骨的howling怒吼 的 wind forced her to curl up. She began to regret fighting with her husband and miss his warm hug. 此处将触觉、 视觉、听觉结合在了一起。
• 如：the lofty mountains高耸的山脉
the dim light昏暗的灯光
• the sparkling stars 闪闪发光的星星 the dark night 漆黑的夜晚
• the feathery snowflakes 鹅毛般的雪花 one misty morning 一个有雾的早晨
三.否定描述
To tell the reader what is not there is an effect way of showing how unpleasant, comfortless a place is. 通过告知读者“没有”什么来凸显某地是多 么的不舒适，令人不快。
例1：I could see our ship, but it was wrecked and there was nobody near it.All my friends were dead. I was alive but in a strange wild country with no food, no water, and no gun.— ——《鲁滨逊漂流记》 这段文字通过四个否定nobody, no food, no water, no gun 来体现出鲁滨逊漂流在孤岛上 的孤立无援。 例2：There was no cushion, no carpet, no warmth, no light and no comfort.
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the howling wind怒吼的大风
• 淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。 All my friends were dead.
此处可以运用否定描述的写作手法来体现Jane的孤立无援
choking 让人窒息的
• 4. TICK-TACK! the sound of the old clock gave me the creeps.