(英语)初三英语书面表达专题训练答案(1)

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·福建中考模拟)亲爱的初三同学,考试来临,毕业在即,你遇到了人生路上的转折点,你的生活、学习平添了一些烦恼和压力。

当前正确面对烦恼,有效缓解心理压力非常重要。

请以"How to solve our stress"为题写一篇90词左右的短文,谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力,以及要如何面对困难,解决问题的方法。

开头已给出,不计入总词数。

要求:内容完整;书写规范;语法准确;语句通顺连贯。

参考词:stress(压力),nervous,sleep,time,healthy,smile,sports,help
How to solve our stress
The entrance examination is coming. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these
days.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________
【答案】How to solve our stress?
The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?
First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。

And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。

要求以"How to solve our stress"为题写一篇短文,谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力,以及要如何面对困难,解决问题的方法。

本文给出了一些要点,并给出了作文的开头。

根据所给的材料可知本文时态要用一般现在时来写,主语为第一人称,写作时要注意主谓一致的问题。

在写作的时候,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

参考词:stress (压力) , nervous,sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports, help
可以用到的短语有:
take part in 参加;
communicate with sb. 和某人交流;
try one's best to do sth. 尽全力做某事;
too much 太多。

点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,抓住重点,理顺要点。

草拟提纲,分清各要点之间的内在联系,寻求逻辑次序,分出层次,确定如何下手,使表达内容条理清楚。

在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

2.(·湖北中考模拟)书面表达
同学们,三年的初中生活就要结束了,在我们的成长过程中,既有快乐,也有烦恼。

请用英文写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼;
2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程;
3.你的感想。

要求:
1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。

My middle school life is coming to an end .During the three years,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
【答案】My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years,not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day,but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better,even the best in my lessons.
How can I deal with the problem?On the one hand,I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand,I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result,I spent less time on homework,and I wasn't frustrated any more.
As we all know,practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can't help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。

围绕三年的初中生活展开叙述,写作前首先要确定三年中遇到的最大问题或烦恼是什么,一件事情即可,然后围绕这件事情展开叙述,三个写作要点要面面俱到,可适当发挥。

在写作时,人称为第一人称,因为文章涉及的内容是曾经发生过的事情,所以时态应该用一般过去时来描述发,写感想可以用一般现在时态。

【高分句型一】
I did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent minded.我尽可
能快地完成作业,而不是迟钝或心不在焉。

①as…as possible尽可能…
②instead of 代替而不是,后跟动名词。

【高分句型二】
As we know,practice makes perfect我们都知道,熟能生巧。

practice makes perfect熟能生巧,谚语的运用,为文章增添了色彩。

3.(·江苏中考模拟)某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛,请你根据表格中的提示内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。

注意:
1. 词数90左右,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。

2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。

How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
_________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress.A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress,we can think actively and work harder.Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them.So we can pass the exams easily.
However,if we have too heavy stress,we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion,to deal with stress,we'd better plan and prepare well.We should also form some good habits,such as enough exercise and healthy diets.Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.
【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。

在题目中给出了一张表格,需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。

分析表格可以看到,这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面,第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的;第二个是过多的压力对我们有害;最后发表自己的看法,如何来应对压力。

因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写,这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。

在每一段中加上具体的内容,使段落更加充实。

最后还要补充两点自己的观点。

全文需要使用一般现在时态,第一人称来写。

注意多使用一些好的句式、短语,增强文章的表现力。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的范文。

作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来,并加上了自己的看法。

作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分,首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。

这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides,还用到了一些复合句,如条件状语从句等;接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处,段首先用however来进行转折,然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短,但是意思很完整;最后作者发表了自己的观点,用了短语in my opinion,还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。

整篇作文意思连贯,语言流畅,层次分明。

4.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声,你一定既有收获又有不足,也有许多对自己未来的期待。

请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题,根据下面的思维导图,写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。

注意:1.词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所有要点,并补充相关信息,可适当发挥。

语言连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a goo d sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!
【解析】试题分析:本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题,结合本题
所给的写作信息,阐述自己难忘的中学生活。

根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态,注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,要点齐全,语言简练。

文中not only …but also…,help a lot,share happiness and sadness,do well in,give up, besides,so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.,therefore, be proud of等词(组)恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法,使文章增色不少,值得学习。

5.(·湖南中考模拟)暑假即将来临,许多学生喜欢下河游泳。

为预防游泳溺水事故的发生,你们班将举行以“珍爱生命,预防溺水”为主题的班会。

请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈你对安全游泳的建议。

建议内容包括:不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳;不允许擅自结伴游泳;不会游泳,不要下水救人……
要求:1.语言通顺,意思连贯,符合逻辑。

2.内容可适当发挥。

3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

4.词数:70词左右。

参考词汇:alone without permission(未经许可) allow
ask for help cherish(珍爱)
Going Swimming Safely
【答案】Summer vacation is coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permiss ion. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.
We live only once,we must cherish life.
【解析】这是一篇谈谈你对安全游泳的建议。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称,一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。

6.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
根据所给图画和文字提示,用英语写一篇约80词的短文。

要求完整叙述图画内容。

————————————
———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————【答案】After school,Bob ,Mike and Sarah were going home happily.On the way home,they saw a boy fell down on the ground.They asked him,they knew he was a student ,too.He found it was very dirty here.He rode a bike to come here,he wanted to clean it.After they heard this,they
helped the boy stand up.They let him sit on the seat.Then they helped him clean the ground.After they saw it was very clean,they all very happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文。

考生首先要弄清图画内容,把握情节线索,根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事,注意图画中的细节。

然后运用所学的词语,尽量运用熟悉的句型,做适当展开、联想,完整地表达出画面的意思。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;切忌堆砌词语、句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅,连贯。

注意书写的规范:大小写,标点符号等的正确运用;最后注意检查:单词拼写,语法,动词时态,语序,主谓一致等。

7.(·天津中考模拟)作为中学生该怎么度过自己的闲暇时光?你会推荐什么样的放松方式?理由是什么?请根据以下表格中的信息写一篇文章。

参考词汇:增长见识increase one’s knowledge 开阔视野open one’s mind
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。

(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。

Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________
【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to
relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.
I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What's more,we also do
after−class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇议论文。

以第三人称陈述观点,以第一人称提出思考。

主体时态是一般现在时。

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。

在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

8.(·张家港市梁丰初级中学中考模拟)书面表达
假设你校英文社正在调查中学生在学习英语过程中会遇到的问题。

下面表格列举了最普遍的三个问题,请你根据这些问题及给出的合理建议,为报社写一份英文报告。

写作要求:
1. 报告须包含表格中所有信息,并适当增加细节,以使行文流畅、通顺;
2. 表格中省略号处请2-3句话作适当发挥,给出合理的建议;
3. 词数90左右,报告的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:本土人(native speaker)
Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students ar e having problems learning English. Many students _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ______
【答案】Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students are poor at reading skills. Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills. Reading can make you feel confident. Some other students feel difficult to remember new words. The best way to learn new words is through listening. You can listen to English radio programs or TV programs. At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Practice reading and listening as much as possible, and you can be a good learner.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如have problem doing,be poor at,make you feel confident,some other students,the best way,listen to,at the same time,help sb. do,as much as possible等。

同时Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills./ The best way to learn new words is through listening.等非谓语动词结构和At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化。

而三句As a…的运用,使短文很有条理,是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

9.(·山东中考模拟)写作
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活(low-carbon life)”,即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。

低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。

内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语:be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _
【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on
expensive
clothes.
If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文,针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。

根据要表达的内容确定并
准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

10.(·北京初三)题目2:
常言道,“一分耕耘,一分收获”这告诉我们凡事只有付出努力,才能取得成功。

假如你是李华,你校英文杂志正在开展以“付出与收获”为主题的征文活动。

请你用英语
写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你个人的一次经历:你付出了什么努力?取得了什么收获?有何感悟?
提示词语:weak,spend,progress,keep trying
提示问题:— What did you do?
—What did you achieve?
—What did you learn from the experience?
【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇短文关于“付出与收获”,学生可以通过自己的日常经历,来写付出了什么,中间是怎么努力的,以及最后从这段经历中学到了什么。

【详解】
本文写了自己一开始不擅长英语,在自己的努力下,英语成绩取得了进步,每天听英语,阅读英语,也尝试着看一些英文电影,经过几个月的努力,英语成绩有所提升。

通过这件事意识到,只要肯努力,没有什么是做不成的。

【点睛】
首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

11.(·北京中考模拟)年2月20日,中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。

时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。

假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你该怎么做,以及这样做的意义。

提示词语:pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按照应用文格式写,写作时承接短文开头,具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评:例文采用的是一段式,人称用的是第一人称复数形式,时态主要用的是一般现在时,描述具体怎么做时,描写细致,条理清晰。

高分亮点:
短语:protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。

句型:By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

12.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
我的英语学习
初中即将毕业,你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法,请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法,根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包含表格中所有内容,并作适当发挥
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数80-100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,communicate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition,in a word等。

而感叹句How time flies!,倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

13.(·河北育华中学中考模拟)你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括:1.你没完成学习任务的经历(事情,原因及后果);2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求:1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my
study.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如make good use of,last weekend,how to do,play a game,a kind of,spent more time on,forget to do,in the end,be angry with,be going to do,on the paper,put up等。

而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

14.(·天津中考模拟)书面表达
校园安全问题越来越受到重视,为了确保学生的安全,学校制订了一些规章制度。

请根据提示内容,以“School safety”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

提示:
1. 遵守校规,按时到校、离校;
2. 不接受陌生人的物品;
3. 结伴同行,天黑前到家;
4. 遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。

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