例谈英语作文“六步法”

例谈英语作文“六步法”

例一、请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，词数100字左右。

香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为东方明珠。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。现在她已经回到祖国的怀抱，而且前景会更加美好。

1）仔细审题：本文属于说明性文章。

2）理清要点：

（1）位置、面积和人口

（2）鸦片战争后香港的处境

（3）97年后回到祖国怀抱

（4）其前景美好

生词：明珠pearl 鸦片opium

3）译写单句

a) Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1045km2. Her population is more than 6 million.

b) She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.

c)In 1997 she returned to motherland.

d)Her future is very beautiful.

4）连句成篇

Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1045km2 and population is more than 6 million.

She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997 she returned to motherland, and her future is very beautiful.

5）润色成文

Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. She has an area of 1045km2 and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as the Pearl of the East.

In 1842, she was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the Opium War, and the people of Hongkong lived a hard life.

In 1997, she returned to motherland, and the people of Hongkong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful.

6) 定稿誊写

Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. She has an area of 1045km2 and a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as the Pearl of the East.

In 1842 the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hongkong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people of Hongkong suffered a lot.

After the return of Hongkong to China in 1997, the people of Hongkong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.(89 words)

例二、假如你叫张明。从《天津日报》看到某公司（石家庄）招聘一名英语秘书。根据启事请你用英语写封简短的应聘书寄往：石家庄1378信箱，说明你的履历。主要内容如下：姓名张明年龄25岁

学历南开大学毕业

工作经历从教英语3年

爱好和兴趣英语口语、书面语和文秘

通讯处南开大学101信箱

写信时间2002年10月29日

1）仔细审题：本文属于求职书信体

2）理清要点：

（1）贵公司招聘一名英语秘书。

（2）大学毕业后从教三年。

（3）对秘书工作感兴趣。

（4）英语口语、书面语都不错。

（5）希望贵公司能录用。

3）译词单句

a)Your company wants an English secretary.

b)I work as an English teacher after I graduated from the university.

c)I am interested in the job of secretary.

d)I speak and write English very well.

e)I hope your company can employ me.

4)连句成篇

Your company wants an English secretary. I work as an English teacher after I graduated from the university. I am interested in the job of secretary. I speak and write English very well. I hope your company can employ me.

5)润色或文

An English secretary is wanted in your company. I want to take this job. My name is Zhang Ming, a girl of twenty-five. I have been teaching English for 3 years since I graduated from the English Department of Nankai University. I think I will be interested in the job of secretary. I can speak and write English very well.

I hope I want very much to be accepted by your company.

6)定稿誊写

P. O. Box. 101

Tianjin

October 29, 2002

P. O. Box 1378

Shijiazhuang

Dear sir,

I have recently learned from Tianjin Daily that an English secretary is wanted in your company. I beg to take this job. My name is Zhang Ming, a girl of twenty-five. I have been an English teacher for 3 years since I graduated from the English Department of Nankai University. I think I will be interested in the job of secretary. I can speak and write English very well.

It is hoped that I will be accepted by your company. Would you please reply to me