近三年(2017—2019)山东卷中考英语满分作文解析

中考英语满分作文解析：山东卷

2019年

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Write a review（评论）of the following story in about 120 words．The review has to include the following points．（阅读下面的故事，请根据下面的提示，写出一篇约120词的评论）．

（1）The title of your review．（你撰写的评论的标题．）

（2）Your idea（s），examples and the reason（s）for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因．）

（3）Your idea（s）of happiness，examples for happiness in your daily life．（归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明．）

（4）Your conclusion about happiness．（关于幸福的结论．）

（5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的词）be satisfied with（对……满意）desire n．欲望contentment 知足the key（关键）to happiness．

A long time ago，in a rich and beautiful country，there lived an unhappy king．He slept badly and didn't feel like eating．He often cried for no reason．This made the queen and his people worried．So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy．

The prime minister was called to the palace．But when they explained the king's situation to him，he said，"Although I have a lot of power，it doesn't make me happy．I'm always worried about losing my power．"

Then the king's banker came to say，I'm afraid I'm not happy either．I have a lot of wealth，but I'm always worried about losing money．Someone tries to steal my money．Next，the palace singer was called to say，"I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others．I can't be free．"

Finally，the top general was told to go out to find a happy man．He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone．Everyone seemed to have their own problems，and no one was truly happy．Just as he wanted to give up．he saw a poor man on the street．He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself．The general

went to him and said，"What makes you so happy？You have no power，money，or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want．and I don't want what I can't have．So I'm happy，and my song comes from the happiness in my heart．""Can you give your shirt to me，I need it，"said the general．"What shirt？I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man．

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2019年山东枣庄中考英语作文要求根据题目中的小故事写一篇评论，话题涉及现代人们对幸福的理解，体现了关注学生的成长，教育学生树立正确的价值观，符合社会主义价值观的要求，属于当今社会的热点话题之一。本文要求根据小故事写出评论，要求学生能够发表自己的观点，难度要求较高。学生在写作时要阅读所给材料。

My Thoughts about Happiness

Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.

What can always make me happy Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.

All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.