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2020年上海徐汇高三一模作文构思详解

2020年上海徐汇高三一模作文构思详解

2020年上海徐汇高三一模作文构思详解原题如下:丰田旗下的花冠车型各项性能均衡,却被评价为“它的优点是没有缺点,而缺点就是没有优点”。

宝马3系车为充分实现其操控性,放弃了后排乘客的舒适性,却被称为是“每个男人都该拥有”的汽车。

这也可以启发我们去思考自己该如何成长。

审题篇材料讲述了两种车型各自的特点,花冠车型性能均衡,虽然没有缺点,但也毫无优点,宝马三系放弃了一部分舒适性,凸显其操控性。

在最后,材料又给出了导语:思考自己如何成长。

最终我们明白了,原来整个材料是在用车型类比自我的成长。

在审题方面没有任何难度,要求考生在自我成长的语境中,探讨是要选择均衡发展最终变得平凡,还是要选择发扬长处最终赢得声誉。

但是千万不能写二者皆可以做到,这样就回避了矛盾,不能凸显自己的思考,是一种思维的惰性,极易跌入平均分以下。

本题信息语境:自我成长。

矛盾:发扬长处/均衡发展审题难度:★☆☆☆☆构思难度:★★★☆☆素材难度:★★★☆☆构思篇本题的构思可以从三个方向去思考。

第一,发扬长处。

选择这个方向的考生应该是最多的,因为最好写。

但是想要有深刻的观点是不太容易的,可以从社会分工的细化,个人成长的规律方面去着手。

第二,均衡发展。

这个方向不是很讨喜,但毫无疑问的是,当下的素质教育就是一种全面发展的培养方式。

因此,从学习生活和自身经历中提炼出观点,还是大有可为的。

第三,打破类比。

点明车型并不能类比为个人成长的目标,继而写成一篇驳论文,但是这种写法对于绝大部分的考生来说是一件异常艰难的事情,因为语文老师大多不会让学生质疑命题人。

但是,物以稀为贵,能完成合格的驳论文也就意味着能拿到高分。

欢迎关注亮亮老师2020年最新的作文课程,其中包含了驳论文构思的七种方法。

素材篇素材方面也有不少,亮亮老师暂且列出两篇素材文章。

台湾歌唱家的故事现在让我说个故事给你听,当我今年夏天在台湾的时候,有一天看歌唱综艺节目,主持人突发奇想,叫一位以声音高亢著称的名歌星,跟幕后的合音者较量一下谁唱的声音高,结果起初几个音还难分高下,后来在不断加高超音的情况下,合音的女孩子都毫无困难地通过了,名歌星却应付得愈来愈艰苦,结果声嘶力竭地败下阵来。

2020届上海市徐汇区高三二模语文试题(解析版)

2020届上海市徐汇区高三二模语文试题(解析版)

2020届上海市徐汇区高三二模语文试卷2020.5【考生注意】1.本场考试时间150分钟。

试卷满分150分。

试卷共7页,答题纸共2页。

2.所有作答必须填涂或书写在答题纸上与试卷题号对应的区域,不得错位。

3.用2B铅笔作答选择题,用黑色字迹钢笔或水笔作答非选择题。

一积累应用 10分1.按要求填空。

⑴ 由是则生而有不用也,___________________ 。

(《_________·鱼我所欲也》)⑵__________________,似诉平生不得志。

(白居易《琵琶行(并序)》)⑶ 《踏莎行·郴州旅舍》中,“ _________,_________”连用两则关于友人投寄书信的典故,以远方亲友的殷勤致意,引发词人的凄伤哀怨。

【答案】 (1). 由是则可以辟患而有不为也 (2). 孟子 (3). 弦弦掩抑声声思 (4). 驿寄梅花 (5). 鱼传尺素【解析】【详解】本题考查名句的默写能力和文学常识的识记能力。

解答文学常识类题目,需要考生熟记大纲规定的文学常识,平时注意分类整理记忆。

高考所选择的名句大多出自课内所学篇目,只有少数来自课外,字不一定有多复杂,但一定很有迷惑性,默写要注意字形,而字形与字义分不开,学生应借助字义来识记字形。

注意重点字的写法,如“辟”“驿”等,要理解字义去记忆。

学生记忆的时候应该结合诗句的意思。

2.政治老师将以“中国古代文学作品中的哲学思想”为题做一次讲座,以下哪一句是最不可能出现在这次讲座内容中的?()A. 不积跬步,无以至千里,不积小流,无以成江海。

B. 叶上初阳干宿雨,水面清圆,一一风荷举。

C. 子在川上曰:逝者如斯夫,不舍昼夜。

D. 沉舟侧畔千帆过,病树前头万木春。

【答案】B【解析】【详解】本题考查对诗句或古语内容的理解及语言运用综合能力。

解答此类题目,考生要了解诗句的出处及诗句的含义;然后分析题目所给的语境,从内容、对象、感情色彩等角度分析诗句是否符合语境要求,哪些句子不符合语境。

2020高三二模优秀作文汇编(上)黄浦、徐汇、普陀、青浦、金山

2020高三二模优秀作文汇编(上)黄浦、徐汇、普陀、青浦、金山

2020高三二模各区优秀作文汇编(上)(黄浦、徐汇、普陀、青浦、金山----10篇优秀作文)1.黄浦:云来山更佳,云去山如画,山因云晦明,云共山高下。

上述四句话,展现了云与山的关系;也能引发我们对自己与其他人、事、物关系的思考。

请自拟题目,自选角度,写一篇不少于800字的文章。

1.山拥云,云润山(68分)①云来,则山雾飘渺,仙境似幻,云去,则豪华落尽,青山常青。

山影晦明,云同高下间,是山云的羁绊,更是人与世界万物的联系。

(由材料云与山的关系导入)②可以说,我们自身便如这山一般,生命中相逢的人便是这云。

人之一生,来往无数客,有人塑他梁骨,有人改他江河,有人使日月生辉,有人使星辰无色。

不可否认地,每一个人,每一件事都在无时无刻地改变着我们的想法。

万物可为师,无贵无贱,无长无少。

因人自身视角的狭隘,与他人的相交能提供我们更多看待事物的新视角,或是知识的分享,前人的忠告,可使日月增辉。

同时,亦有云来夹杂着恶意的暴雨,使他星辰无色,但须知,山屹立于世间不倒,自有其脊梁与思考。

除却无意义的中伤,应思考背后可取的意见,风雨过后,山如洗而更青。

(阐述带着自己的思考去师万物,可有新的视角---生命中相逢的人便是这云)③而云去之后,山色如画,包含着云的洗礼,更有山自身的常青如画。

立足于世,我们不能总期盼着依靠他人的推力前行,有时历经必须独行的路,是历练如画景色的机会。

只因我们生来是独立于世的山,而非枝蔓相交的藤草。

聚作一团火,散作满天星,山无云时有其傲世筋骨,云无山时亦有绵亘万里之胜景。

山与云,相交时晦明相投,试问,谁能知山未曾对云有所影响呢?只需换位来看,在他人生命中,我们亦为一朵流云,风吹过后的擦肩,相互添彩却又彼此独立。

(自有傲骨,才能互添光彩)④然而,我们却又不完全是这山。

山屹立巍然不动,我们的一生却都在行走。

奔跑在世间的我们与万物相遇、相知、向别,挥手自兹去的同时,难免喟叹一句此生或许再不相见。

山常青,而我们终有一天会老去,死亡。

2019-2020学年上海市徐汇中学西校区高三语文二模试题及答案解析

2019-2020学年上海市徐汇中学西校区高三语文二模试题及答案解析

2019-2020学年上海市徐汇中学西校区高三语文二模试题及答案解析一、现代文阅读(36分)(一)现代文阅读I(9分)阅读下面作品,完成下面小题。

恶不必丑,善不必美孙绍振审美是诗意的,但是,不仅仅是诗意的美的陶冶,而且包含着对恶的审视。

艺术上往往有这样的现象,就是写恶事、恶人,也以一种艺术的眼光去审视,这种恶事、恶人就和丑发生了错位,甚至变得可爱起来。

《三国演义》中写到曹操先误杀了吕伯奢一家八口,后来明知吕伯奢是好心款待他,又把他杀了。

明知错了,一错再错,不仅不忏悔,还要宣言“宁叫我负天下人,不叫天下人负我”,为自己坚决而果断地不道德而自我欣赏。

《三国演义》不但是让读者看到这样的丑恶,而且有一个潜在的眼睛,在引导着读者阅读这样的心理奇观,在字里行间,不动声色地让曹操的行为逻辑与读者的良知背道而驰,这在文艺心理学上叫做“情感逆行”,就是一味和读者的情感作对,让读者的良知受到打击,感到诧异,感到愤怒痛苦。

这就转化为艺术的享受。

洞察人性黑暗,是一种痛快。

因为我们看到的曹操不仅仅是一个坏人,而且是一个主动去暗杀坏人董卓,逃亡路上被捕,又视死如归的热血青年,只因心理不健康——多疑,就转化为杀人不眨眼的血腥屠夫。

艺术表现了这种心理过程,揭示了人性黑暗。

因而,我们的感受才结合着痛感和快感,亚里士多德的《诗学》中叫做“净化”,有人把它翻译成“宣泄”,我看把它理解成“洗礼”也可以的。

这里的奥秘就是情感的全面(如正面、反面)熏陶。

在阅读作品时,面对反面人物,不一定是因为他在道德上很坏,很恶,而是因为其情感空洞。

小孩子看电视往往问大人,某个主人公是好人还是坏人,这类问题有时很好回答,有时不好回答。

越是简单的形象越好回答,越是丰富的形象越不好回答。

这是因为形象越简单,情感价值与道德的善和科学的真之间的“错位”越小;形象越是丰富,意味着情感越是复杂,与善和真之间的“错位”就越大。

情感的丰富和复杂的多方面、多维度的发现,就是美的发现。

上海市徐汇区2020届高三二模语文试题 (含答案)

上海市徐汇区2020届高三二模语文试题 (含答案)

上海市徐汇区2020届高三二模语文试题(含答案)日常概念和科学概念的区别在于前者受限于人们的日常生活,而后者则不受此限制。

例如,在日常生活中,我们认为火热,冰冷,但在科学中,冰也含有热量,这是由分子的运动规定的,而不是由我们的感觉决定的。

此外,在日常语言中,地球是静止的,并以大地为参照系来确定什么是运动的,什么是静止的。

但在科学语言中,这个参照系被废除了。

②自然概念和科学概念之间的差异也表现在它们的表达方式上。

自然概念通常是通过自然语言来表达的,而科学概念则需要使用符号和形式化的语言来表达。

例如,我们可以用自然语言描述一只猫的外貌和行为,但要描述猫的基因结构和遗传信息,则需要使用符号和形式化的语言。

③此外,科学概念的表达还需要考虑到其精确性和一致性。

科学家们需要确保他们的概念能够被准确地定义和测量,以便进行科学实验和研究。

同时,科学概念也需要在不同的领域和文化背景下保持一致性,以便不同的科学家能够理解和交流彼此的研究成果。

④尽管自然概念和科学概念之间存在差异,但它们并不是互相排斥的。

自然概念是我们理解世界的基础,而科学概念则是我们深入探索世界的工具。

通过理解这两种概念之间的关系,我们可以更好地理解世界和科学。

3.自然概念和科学概念的区别表现在哪些方面?(2分)4.科学概念的表达方式有哪些特点?(3分)5.为什么科学概念的表达需要考虑精确性和一致性?(3分)6.自然概念和科学概念之间是互相排斥的吗?为什么?(3分)7.请简述你对本文的理解。

(4分)自然概念是以经验为基础的,而经验是相互交织的。

因此,自然概念也是相互渗透的。

在我们对自然的理解中,圆和圆满、正方和XXX是联系在一起的。

然而,几何学中的圆则是通过定义和其他概念来构成的,这使得圆这个自然概念的内容被洗净了,与圆满、圆滑等概念没有任何关系。

在某个领域中最初发现的重要事实通常不仅仅是新事实,它们还改变了我们对该领域的基本看法和基本概念。

即使我们用既有的语词来描述这些事实,这些语词的意义也不得不悄然改变。

2020年上海徐汇区高三二模语文试卷(答案+解析)

2020年上海徐汇区高三二模语文试卷(答案+解析)

2020年上海徐汇区高三二模语文试卷【考生注意】1.本场考试时间150分钟。

试卷满分150分。

试卷共7页,答题纸共2页。

2.所有作答必须填涂或书写在答题纸上与试卷题号对应的区域,不得错位。

3.用2B铅笔作答选择题,用黑色字迹钢笔或水笔作答非选择题。

一、积累应用(10分)1.按要求填空。

(5分)(1)由是则生而有不用也,_________________。

(《_________________·鱼我所欲也》)(2)_________________,似诉平生不得志。

(白居易《琵琶行(并序)》)(3)《踏莎行·郴州旅舍》中,“_________________,_________________”连用两则关于友人投寄书信的典故,以远方亲友的殷勤致意,引发词人的凄伤哀怨。

2. 按要求选择。

(5分)(1)政治老师将以“中国古代文学作品中的哲学思想”为题做一次讲座,以下哪一句是最不可能出现在这次讲座内容中的?()(2分)A. 不积跬步,无以至千里,不积小流,无以成江海。

B. 叶上初阳干宿雨,水面清圆,一一风荷举。

C. 子在川上曰:逝者如斯夫,不舍昼夜。

D. 沉舟侧畔千帆过,病树前头万木春。

(2)全班同学围绕“传言”这个话题进行了一次课堂讨论,以下是某位同学的笔记:①讨论“传言”应区分“不准确的信息”和故意编造的“误导信息”。

②“传言”是不能尽快得到证实或无法得到证实的信息。

③许多传言是后来被证实或部分证实的。

④那些未能证实的传言也不等于就是无中生有。

⑤传言有时也可能是一种制造舆论的手段。

对这些语句间的逻辑关系,梳理最合理的一项是()。

(3分)A. B.C. D.【答案】1.(5分)(1)由是则可以辟患而有不为也孟子(2)弦弦掩抑声声思(3)驿寄梅花鱼传尺素2.(1)B(2分)(2)C(3分)【解析】1.本题考查的是课内古诗文背诵默写部分,需要学生平时多背诵记忆,并且对于古诗文选自也要记住,需要注意里面的一些字不要写错,如“辟患”、“掩抑”、“驿”等。

2020届上海市徐汇中学高三英语二模试卷及参考答案

2020届上海市徐汇中学高三英语二模试卷及参考答案

2020届上海市徐汇中学高三英语二模试卷及参考答案第一部分阅读(共两节,满分40分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项AExperts say that if food were a country, it would rank second behind theUSas one of the biggest greenhouse gas polluters. The reason is the rising demand for meat. Animal farming is responsible for 14.5 percent of global methane emissions. While cowsare the worst contributors, pigs, sheep, donkeys and other animals play a part as well.Animal agriculture also causes land to become damaged, water to be polluted and forests to get destroyed. With the world population forecast to rise to 9.8 billion by 2050, things are only looking worse for our already decreasing natural resources. While going vegetarian would help, meat consumption is too deep-rooted in most Western diets to allow for such a sharp, permanent change. That is why experts are advocating substituting some of the beef, chicken, or pork with ordinary insects!Insects, which grow into adults within a matter of months, if not weeks, are ready for consumption much faster than domestic animals. They also require much less room, use less water and food, and produce far less greenhouse gas than animals.Of the 1.1 million insect species worldwide, scientists have identified 1,700 as eatable. Among them are ants, grasshoppers, grubs, and earthworms. Just like animals, each insect has a different taste. Tree worms taste just like pork, and grubs are similar to smoked meat.While eating insects might be a new concept for Western people, over 2 billion people worldwide consume insects as a regular part of their diet. Besides being delicious, insects are high in protein, have very few calories, and are free of the saturated fat found in animal meat. Insects can be prepared in many ways. Creative cooks can use them to cook protein-rich soup, make baked treats, and even fry a few with vegetables. So eat insects--- both your body and Mother Earth will thank you for it!1. Which of the following animals contribute the most to global methane emissions?A. Sheep.B. Donkeys.C. Cows.D. Pigs.2. How is the third paragraph developed?A. By making comparisons.B. By providing examples.C. By listing data.D. By asking questions.3. What can be inferred from the last paragraph?A.Few people eat insects regularly.B. Ordinary insects are high in fat.C. Insects contain various vitamins.D. Saturated fat is harmful to health.BWhen a United Kingdomsupermarket chain promised to move its farms to Net Zero by 2030, it made it clear that the effort would require working on many different fronts. From energy consumption and land - use change to methane emissions (甲烷排放), cattle farming comes with environmental challenges. So even if recent studies suggesting it's possible to cut methane emissions 80% do turn out to be accurate, there's still a very long way to go for most cattle farming to get anywhere close to truly net zero.Organic Valley, when producing milk, might be closer to that goal. It made headlines in 2019 by going 100% renewable (可再生的). Now the company is expanding on that tradition by starting a major loan initiative (贷款计划) to help its farm suppliers adopt renewable energy too.Created with Clean Energy Credit Union, the $ 1 million loan fund will deliver loans at below - marketrates. Specifically, the money will be made available to Organic Valley's 1, 700 farmer members, and can be used for a variety of projects.“We are focused on a whole systems approach to renewable energy, and I'm excited to launch this energy loan fund. From the farm to the shelf, I see renewable energy playing a bigger role in organic food,” said Bob Kirchoff, Organic Valley CEO.“Organic Valley is already helping to protect the environment through organic farming practices, and now they re going one step further by supporting the introduction of renewable energy projects for their farmer members,” said Blake Jones, volunteer board chair of Clean Energy Credit Union. “In addition to the environmental benefits, we re eager to help family farmers throughout the world to lower their energy costs.”The world is not short of examples of farmers innovating in the field of renewable energy. What's encouraging about Organic Valley's announcement is the idea of a national brand putting its marketing and financing weight behind such efforts and, hopefully, creating consumer demand that pushes the rest of the industry in this direction too.4. What does paragraph 1 indicate about going net zero for cattle farming?A It is not easy to achieve B. It is common in the UKC. It is an impractical goalD. It meets no challenges5. What is Organic Valley's tradition according to the text?A. Helping farm suppliersB. Using renewable energyC. Having a loan initiativeD. Making headlines annually6. What is Organic Valley's initiative mainly intended to do?A. Reform organic farming practicesB. Make use of environmental benefitsC. Help farmers decrease energy costsD. Shrink the group of farmer members7. What is the author's attitude towards Organic Valley's initiative?A. WorriedB. DoubtfulC. AmbiguousD. PositiveCAs a rider, Anna Kiesenhofe’s Olympics victory might be a surprise. The winner of the road race at the Tokyo Olympics left the sport at the end of 2017 when she found herself out of contract (合同). She came into Tokyo without a professional team and left as an Olympic champion.The 30-year old began her cycling career in 2014 after running injuries that prevented her from continuing her pursuits of triathlon (铁人三项). She later joined a Catalan team and won the Spanish National Cup in 2016.The then-26 year old signedher first professional contract with Lotto Soudal Ladies for the following season. However, she ended her 2017 campaign in April and did not sign a contract for 2018, eventually taking a year off the bike. In 2019, Kiesenhofer came back to the sport as a rider, winning the Austrian national road race. Despite her results, Kiesenhofer sill had no professional contract while going into the Tokyo Olympics.Kiesenhofer was the first rider to attack in the Olympic road race, eventually forming a breakaway along with Carl Oberholzer, Omer Shapira, Vera Looser and Anna Plichta, which went on to reach a gap of 11 minutes. After Looser and Oberholzer were dropped, Kiesnhofer ataced her two remaining breakaway companions.After Shapira and Plichta were caught by the peloton (主车群), the rest of the riders seemed to believe that they were racing among themselves for Gold, not knowing that Remehofere was still in front. While it might be a misjudgment from the rest of the peloton that allowed Kiesenhofer to keep her lead of more than two minutes, other riders’ mistakes should not detract from the Austrian’s efforts.Off the bike the new Olympic Champion has a PhD in mathematics after studying at the Technical University of Vienne as well as at Cambridge University. She currently works at the University of Lausanne.8. Why did Anna give up triathlon?A. She got injured.B. She lost interest in it.C. She had to attend university.D. She never won a medal.9. Which is the right order of the following events?①She ended her campaign.②She took a year off the bike.③She began her cycling career.④She won the Austrian national road race.⑤She won the Spanish National Cup.A. ③④①②⑤.B. ②③④①⑤.C. ③⑤①②④.D. ④②③①⑤.10. What were the riders of the peloton unaware of at the Tokyo Olympics?A. The road race was so difficult.B. Anna was a new rider.C. They had caught up with Anna.D. Anna took the lead of them.11. What is Anna’s present job?A. A cycling coach.B. A university teacher.C A professional rider. D. A college student.DSport is not only physically challenging, but can also be mentally challenging. Criticism from coaches, parents and other teammates, as well as pressure to win can create too much anxiety or stress for young athletes. Stress canbe physical, emotional, or psychological and research has indicated that it can lead to burnout. Burnout has been described as dropping or quitting of an activity that was at one time enjoyable.The early years of development are critical years for learning about oneself. The sport setting is one where valuable experiences can take place. Young athletes can, for example, learn how to cooperate with others, make friends, and gain other social skills that will be used throughout their lives. Coaches and parents should be aware, at all times, that their feedback to youngsters can greatly affect their children. Youngsters may take their parents and coaches’ criticisms to heart and find faults in themselves.Coaches and parents should also pay attention that youth sport participation does not become work for children. The outcome of the game should not be more important than the process of learning the sport and other life lessons. In today’s youth sport setting young athletes may be worrying more about who will win instead of enjoying themselves and the sport. Following a game many parents and coaches focus on the outcome and find faults with youngsters’ performances. Positive support should be provided regardless of the outcome. Researchindicates that positive support motivates and has a greater effect on learning than criticism. Again, criticism can create high levels of stress, which can lead to burnout.12. An effective way to prevent the burnout of young athletes is_____________.A. to make sport less competitiveB. to increase their sense of successC. to reduce their mental stressD. to make sport more challenging13. According to the passage, sport is positive for young people in that_____________.A. it can help them learn more about societyB. it enables them to find faults in themselvesC. it can provide them with valuable experiencesD. it teaches them how to set realistic goals for themselves14. Many coaches and parents are in the habit of criticizing young athletes_____________.A. believing that criticism does good to their early developmentB. without realizing criticism may destroy their self­confidenceC. in order to make them remember life’s lessonsD. so as to put more pressure on them15. According to the passage parents and coaches should_____________.A. pay more attention to letting children enjoy sportB. help children to win every gameC. train children to cope with stressD. enable children to understand the positive aspect of sport第二节(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

2020年上海徐汇区高三二模语文试卷(答案+解析)

2020年上海徐汇区高三二模语文试卷(答案+解析)

2020年上海徐汇区高三二模语文试卷【考生注意】1.本场考试时间150分钟。

试卷满分150分。

试卷共7页,答题纸共2页。

2.所有作答必须填涂或书写在答题纸上与试卷题号对应的区域,不得错位。

3.用2B铅笔作答选择题,用黑色字迹钢笔或水笔作答非选择题。

一、积累应用(10分)1.按要求填空。

(5分)(1)由是则生而有不用也,_________________。

(《_________________·鱼我所欲也》)(2)_________________,似诉平生不得志。

(白居易《琵琶行(并序)》)(3)《踏莎行·郴州旅舍》中,“_________________,_________________”连用两则关于友人投寄书信的典故,以远方亲友的殷勤致意,引发词人的凄伤哀怨。

2. 按要求选择。

(5分)(1)政治老师将以“中国古代文学作品中的哲学思想”为题做一次讲座,以下哪一句是最不可能出现在这次讲座内容中的?()(2分)A. 不积跬步,无以至千里,不积小流,无以成江海。

B. 叶上初阳干宿雨,水面清圆,一一风荷举。

C. 子在川上曰:逝者如斯夫,不舍昼夜。

D. 沉舟侧畔千帆过,病树前头万木春。

(2)全班同学围绕“传言”这个话题进行了一次课堂讨论,以下是某位同学的笔记:①讨论“传言”应区分“不准确的信息”和故意编造的“误导信息”。

②“传言”是不能尽快得到证实或无法得到证实的信息。

③许多传言是后来被证实或部分证实的。

④那些未能证实的传言也不等于就是无中生有。

⑤传言有时也可能是一种制造舆论的手段。

对这些语句间的逻辑关系,梳理最合理的一项是()。

(3分)A. B.C. D.【答案】1.(5分)(1)由是则可以辟患而有不为也孟子(2)弦弦掩抑声声思(3)驿寄梅花鱼传尺素2.(1)B(2分)(2)C(3分)【解析】1.本题考查的是课内古诗文背诵默写部分,需要学生平时多背诵记忆,并且对于古诗文选自也要记住,需要注意里面的一些字不要写错,如“辟患”、“掩抑”、“驿”等。

2023高三二模徐汇作文题解析及范文

2023高三二模徐汇作文题解析及范文

2023高三二模徐汇作文题解析及范文全文共5篇示例,供读者参考语文作文文题最好能新颖生动,既富有诗意,又蕴有趣味,能激发读者美好的遐想。

化实为虚,补出新意。

下面给大家分享一些关于年高三模拟考试语文作文范文5篇,希望能够对大家有所帮助。

高三二模徐汇作文题解析及范文篇1一年又一年,我在慢慢长大,我的童年也在慢慢走远。

站在回忆的港口,吹着细细的晚风,我慢慢将这些回忆拾起。

“小木马摇啊摇,摇到外婆桥。

”小时候,每逢夏日的夜晚,爸爸妈妈总会带着我和弟弟去公园散步。

到了公园一见旋转木马就再也走不动了。

哪个爱做梦的女孩子不喜欢旋转木马呢?我吵着闹着要带弟弟一起玩。

爸爸妈妈总是抵不住我们的哭闹,他们笑着无奈地点头默许。

我便止住眼泪,__颠__颠地拉着弟弟向那一匹匹长着翅膀像有魔力似的小马驹跑去。

灯火阑珊,伴着悦耳的音响,我坐在小马上幻想自己是故事中最幸福的公主,在美丽的城堡中与自己的一只长着独角的飞马嬉戏。

我忘记了时间,忘记了周围的一切,只沉浸在属于自己的虚幻世界里。

我多想再跟爸爸妈妈撒一次娇,多想在我的梦里多玩一会啊。

最开心的是满天繁星下捉蟋蟀。

“小星星,闪啊闪,闪得眼睛亮晶晶。

”奶白的月亮安谧地睡在黑得发紫的夜空中,虚虚实实,假假真真。

看得不真切的夜,仿佛是一场虚幻的,不存在的梦境。

蝉鸣,鸟叫,蟋蟀蹦跳。

那是孩童的天堂!我和弟弟又偷偷跑了出去。

我们姐弟俩一起比赛,看谁捉的蟋蟀多。

大半夜黑灯瞎火的,有两个调皮的小孩一丝不苟地弓着腰,趴在地上寻找一只只蟋蟀,只为证明谁更厉害。

是那样的执着,又是那样的天真!夜更深了,一轮玄月挂在空中。

时间就像旋转木马一样,当音乐停止时,童年也就即逝去了。

曾经的天真亦不复存在,现在真的没有任何理由再去天真一把了。

这样任性地挥霍时光,一生中能只有几年呢?别了,我的旋转木马!别了,我的蟋蟀!童年就像一块洁白无瑕的玉,它永远是我心中最美好的记忆。

前方的梦在召唤着我,我知道,我依旧会时不时一片一片把它们拾起。

2020徐汇高三英语二模作文范文

2020徐汇高三英语二模作文范文

2020徐汇高三英语二模作文范文The year 2020 will forever be etched in our memories as a year of unprecedented challenges and profound changes. As the world grappled with the COVID-19 pandemic, the education system was forced to adapt and evolve in ways we never could have imagined. The Xuhuai High School Grade 12 English Second Model Examination was no exception, serving as a testament to the resilience and adaptability of both students and educators.The examination paper, designed to assess the comprehensive language skills of the students, was a reflection of the dynamic and ever-changing landscape of English education. The essay prompt, in particular, challenged the students to delve deep into their understanding of the world around them and articulate their thoughts and perspectives with clarity and precision.The topic of the essay, "2020 Xuhuai High School Grade 12 English Second Model Examination Essay Sample," was a thought-provoking and multifaceted one. It invited the students to explore the impact of the pandemic on their academic journey, the challenges they faced,and the lessons they learned along the way.As the students sat down to tackle the essay, they were faced with the daunting task of weaving a cohesive narrative that would capture the essence of their experiences and convey their insights to the examiners. The essay required them to demonstrate not only their proficiency in the English language but also their ability to think critically, analyze complex situations, and communicate effectively.The students who excelled in this examination displayed a remarkable depth of understanding and a keen ability to articulate their thoughts with clarity and precision. Their essays were a testament to the resilience and adaptability of the Xuhuai High School community, as they navigated the uncharted waters of remote learning and the uncertainties of the pandemic.One standout essay, in particular, stood out for its eloquence and insightfulness. The student, who shall remain anonymous, crafted a powerful narrative that delved into the emotional and psychological impact of the pandemic on their academic life. They described the initial feelings of uncertainty and anxiety as the world was turned upside down, the challenges of adapting to online learning, and the strategies they employed to maintain their focus and motivation.The essay also explored the broader societal implications of thepandemic, discussing the ways in which it had exacerbated existing inequalities and highlighted the importance of access to quality education for all. The student demonstrated a deep understanding of the complex issues at play and the ability to analyze them from multiple perspectives.What truly set this essay apart, however, was the student's ability to find hope and inspiration amidst the chaos. They spoke of the newfound appreciation for the role of teachers and the importance of community support in times of crisis. They also highlighted the ways in which the pandemic had forced them to develop new skills and adapt to rapidly changing circumstances, ultimately emerging as a more resilient and adaptable learner.The essay was a testament to the power of the human spirit and the transformative potential of education. It was a shining example of the kind of critical thinking and communication skills that the Xuhuai High School English Second Model Examination sought to cultivate in its students.As the world continues to grapple with the aftermath of the pandemic, the lessons learned and the insights gained during this tumultuous period will undoubtedly shape the future of education. The Xuhuai High School community, through the resilience and adaptability displayed by its students, has set a shining example ofwhat can be achieved in the face of adversity.The 2020 Xuhuai High School Grade 12 English Second Model Examination Essay Sample stands as a testament to the enduring power of education and the unwavering spirit of the students who rose to the challenge. It is a testament to the fact that even in the darkest of times, the light of knowledge and understanding can shine through, illuminating the path forward.。

2020年上海市徐汇中学西校区高三英语二模试卷及答案解析

2020年上海市徐汇中学西校区高三英语二模试卷及答案解析

2020年上海市徐汇中学西校区高三英语二模试卷及答案解析第一部分阅读(共两节,满分40分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项ATheatre reflects the values of the civilization out of which it grows. The following are the types of theatre performances an ancient Roman might have witnessed then.Fescennine VerseFescennine Verse was a pioneer of Roman comedy. Ironic and improvisational(即兴的), it was used mainly at festivals or weddings, and as invective. With early native Italian funny dialogues in Latin verse, it was thought to have combined with a tradition of performances by masked dancers and musicians from Etruria.Fabula AtellanaFabula Atellana relied on common characters, masks, direct humor, and simple plots. They were performed by actors improvising. Fabula Atellana came from the Oscan city of Atella. There were 4 main types of characters: the braggart, the greedy blockhead, the clever hunchback and the stupid old man, like modern Punch and Judy shows.Fabula TogataNamed for the clothing symbolic of the Roman people Fabula Togata had various subtypes. One was the Fabula Tabernaria, named for the tavern(酒馆)where the comedy’s preferred characters, lowlifes, might be found. One describing more middle-class types, and continuing the Roman clothing theme, was the Fabula Trabeata.Fabula PraetextaFabula Praetexta is the name for Roman tragedies on Roman themes, Roman history or current politics. Fabula Praetexta was less popular than tragedies on Greek themes. During the Golden Age of drama in the Middle Republic, there were four great Roman writers of tragedy, Naevius, Ennius, Pacuvius, and Accius. Of their surviving tragedies, 90 titles remain.All the performances above began as a translation of Greek forms, even to the extent of their being performed in Greek costume.1.Where might an ancient Roman witness Fescennine Verse?A.At a party.B.At a funeral.C.At a wedding.D.At a concert.2.Which type of performance describes the middle-class life?A.Fabula Atellana.B.Fabula Tabernaria.C.Fabula Trabeata.D.Fabula Praetexta.3.What do the listed types of performances have in common?A.They copy Latin dramas.B.They take on Greek forms.C.They reflect Roman themes.D.They refer to Italian stories.BIf you’ve ever had a dog, you know just how deep a connection you can develop with “man’s best friend”. But a dog has a much shorter life span — about 12 to 15 years long — than humans, which means every dog owner has to go through the heartbreaking moment when their loving pet passes away.Why not make a clone of that dog then? This is the solution offered by a South Korean company, Sooam Biotech Research Foundation. The company has successfully cloned at least 400 dogs, mostly for US customers, ever since it pioneered the technique in 2005. Now, Sooam Biotech is planning to introduce their business toUKdog owners, offering them dogs that look just like their lost ones.Meanwhile, another dog is selected to supply an egg.Researchers then replace the DNA in the egg with that from the skin cell and implant the egg into the womb (子宫) of a female dog. The egg grows into a puppy over the following two months. To clone a dog, researchers first need to take a skin cell from a living dog or one that has just died.The whole process takes less than a day, but it comes at a shockingly high price — around £63,000 (614,000 yuan). But if you can’t afford it now, you can also save the cells in a laboratory and access them at a later date. Just like identical twins of humans, they share the exact same DNA but there will still be small differences between them. “The spots on a Dalmatian clone will be different, for example,” Insung Hwang, head of Sooam Biotech, toldThe Guardian. However, as magical as cloning might sound, there is no guarantee that the cloned dog will be a perfect replica of the original one.Dog owners will also have to accept the fact that personality is not “clone-able”. Apart from genes, personality is also determined by upbringing and environment, which are both “random elements [that] cloning technologies simply cannot overcome”, Professor Tom Kirkwood atNewcastle University,UK, toldThe Telegraph.Perhaps bringing our dogs back with cloning is not the best way to remember them after all.Kirkwood, a dog owner himself, pointed out: “An important aspect of our relationship with them is coming to terms with the pain of letting go.”4. According to the article, Sooam Biotech Research Foundation is ______.A. working on plans to help dog owners enjoy their pets longerB. offering a way to help dogs give birth to more puppiesC. providing a service that will make copies of pet dogsD. introducing a completely new technique to clone dogs5. Which of the following statements about dog cloning is TRUE according to the article?A. Dog cloning technology hadn’t been put into practice until recently.B. Dog cloning is very expensive and usually takes several months to complete.C. Dog cloning is very popular among US andUKpet owners.D. Cloned dogs might develop different habits and characteristics even though they look very similar.6. Which of the following shows the correct order of the dog cloning process?a. an egg is taken from another dogb. a skin cell is taken from the pet dog and saved in a laboratoryc. the egg is placed in the womb of a female dogd. the DNA of the egg is replaced by the DNA from the skin celle. the egg grows into a puppy in two monthsA. acbde.B. adbce.C. bacde.D. badce.7. We can learn from the article thatKirkwood______ dog cloning.A. disapproves ofB. supportsC. is afraid ofD. is curious aboutCWhere doyou usually put your toothbrush?Do you keep it in the bathroom? How’s your toothbrush looking these days? Even if you can’t see it with a naked eye, experts say it may be saturated(使饱和)with millions of toilet germs!Dr. Charles Oerba, a germ expert, is amicrobiology professor at the University of Arizona. He says there are approximately 3 million bacteria per square inch in most toilet bowls, and every time you flush it without closing the lid, those millions of bacteria droplets spray into the air as far as twenty feet away and dirty everything in their path. And a common victim is your poor toothbrush, usually, left out on the bathroom sink, right?So, what do we do? Dr. Gerba says it’s easy. Close the toilet lid before you flush—that’ll greatly cut downthe germs, which will otherwise float in the air. And wash your toothbrush every few days in mouthwash or peroxide to get rid of any germs hiding in it. You can even put it through the dishwasher to sanitize(消毒)it. And alwaysstore your toothbrush in a closed cabinet.Here’s one more tip from Dr. Gerba, who says our kitchen sink is probably dirtier than our toilet. “If an alien came from space and studied the bacterial counts, he probably would conclude he should wash his hands in your toilet and go to the bathroom in your sink.” He says that’s because the kitchen sink is a great place where E. coli(大肠杆菌)to live and grow since it’s wet and damp. Bacteria feed on the food that people put down the drain or—that’s left on dishes in the sink. To reset your sink’s bacteria count back to zero, you’d better regularly wash it with hot water and sanitize yoursink with special chemicals. In fact, you may want to do it every day or before preparing dinner.8. What is the purpose of the text?A. To show how to brush your teeth.B. To tell people the importance of health.C. To warn people of the invisible germs.D. To introduce a microbiology professor.9. What can we learn from Paragraph 2?A. Bathroom sinks are the dirtiest places.B. Bacteria are bad for people’s health.C. Why bacteria spread through the air.D. How bacteria spread in the bathroom.10. What does the underlined word“that”in Paragraph 4 refer to?A. The food.B. The toothbrush.C. The sink.D. The chemical.11. Why does Dr. Gerba mention the example of an alien?A. To tell us a fiction story of an alien studying bacteria.B. To show our kitchen sink may be dirtier than our toilet.C. To teach us how to reset sink’s bacteria count back to zero.D. To prove coli prefers to live in the kitchen and the drain.DIf you have ever been disappointed because you don’t have a good gardener ,the clever robot may one day become the helper of your indoor plantsThe Hexa Plant is a six-legged robot that has been specially made to care for the potted plant that carries ontop of its head .Using light and heats sensors (传感器) the robot has the ability to carry its plant in and out the daylight .If the houseplant needs more sun,the Hexa will walk into the sunlight ;and if the houseplant is getting too hot , the Hexa will go back into the area that blocks direct light The Hexa Plant will even do a little dance when it senses that the plant needs to be watered to warn its owner .The robot was developed by Vincross engineer and founder Sun Tianqi after he saw a dead sunflower sitting in the darkness in a room back in 2014 .” Plants only receive an action without responding ,”SunTianqi wrote in a blog post .” Whether they are being cut ,bitten ,burned or pulled from the earth ,or when they haven’t received enough sunshine ,water ,or are too hot or cold ,they will hold still and take whatever is happening to them .According to Sun Tianqi ,for billions of years ,plants have never experienced movement of any kind ,not even the simplest movement .In their whole lives ,they stick to where they were born .Sun Tianqi continued ,” Do they want break their own settings or have a tendency towards this ?I do not know the answer ,but would love to try to share some of this human tendency and technology with plants With the help of the robot ,plants can experience the move”.The Hexa Plant model robots are not for sale ,though Vincross does sell a Hexa robot model .It is said that in the near future the robots can open up a new market to watch over our household plants12. What can we learn about the Hexa Plant?A. It helps people do some gardening .B. It waters the plants through dancingC. It helps indoor plants get proper sunlightD. It carries the potted plant with its hands13. What does the author try to show through Paragraph 3?A. The way plants spend their whole livesB. The common way people deal with plantsC. The difference between plants and humansD. The cause of making the indoor plants’ helper.14. What does Sun Tianqi try do using this technology?A. To develop gardening skills.B. To draw people’s attention plantsC. make plants experience moveD. study the living conditions of plants15. What can be the best title for the text?A. A New Market for robotsB. An Indoor Plants’ HelperC. An Important Development in GardeningD The Tendency of Gardening in the Future第二节(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

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2020高三二模徐汇作文题解析及范文
(5篇范文得分从62—66分)
原题回放:对某个群体的固有印象,有时会影响我们对这个群体中个体的评价。

请写一篇文章,谈谈你对此有怎样的思考和感悟。

要求……
材料类型:现象类
关键词:固有印象
材料侧重:材料陈述了一种社会现象,且这句话隐含了出题者的观点。

其中“有时”一词,告诉我们带着“固有印象”去评价这个群体中个体是优劣互现。

所以我们要思考:为什么会有固有印象?固有印象对我们评价个体有何影响(主客观、正反面)?我们应该怎样看待固有印象?我们应该怎样去评价个体……然后就能构思成文了。

一.界定概念:
固有印象:也称“刻板印象”或“类属性思维”,是我们对某一类人、事、物形成的固定看法和观念。

是人类正常思维过程的产物,但这种类别化的看法有时会有偏差乃至谬误,所以说以群体标签来进行个体评价是非理性的。

二.为什么会有固有印象?
1.固有印象是人脑的一种心智结构,可帮助我们高效地认识外部世界里的具体个体,即帮助我们推理思考。

2.固有印象的形成,有历史上国家政治和社会文化的原因,也有现实中事实数据统计和媒体故甚其词的因素。

3.有时依赖固有印象,便能一窥个体的价值、立场与思想风貌,能更好地辨别个体、加入群体---大大降低我们评价个体的成本,因而成为生活中的普适现象。

三.为什么固有印象有时会影响我们对群体中个体的评价?
1.借对群体的固有印象来评价个体,是贴标签思维模式的惯性延伸。

2.固有印象的先入为主,有时会使我们难以从根源上客观认识个体。

3.对于个体,我们用群体的眼光来看待,这本身便脱离了评价个体这一要求。

四.我们应该怎样去做?
1.在评价个体时,我们除了借助固有印象,还应多维度、有深度地体察,以期揭开群体之面,发掘个体之矿藏。

2.对于个体评价,应有自己公平的见解,理性看待事物,因人制异,因事制异,坚守原则,清晰认识,才是在客观环境影响下作出正确评价。

3.个体要绽放光芒,凭己之力,粉碎他人的偏见,带领群体,打破固有印象。

4.要用关怀和负责的眼光看待个体,改善个体,从而使群体臻于完善,减弱甚至消除加之群体之上的负面固有印象,形成良性循环。

五.漂亮标题
①属于群体,别于群体②利用印象,个性评价③勿以山岭看孤峰
④打破标签,审视评价⑤群体印象,个体评价⑥在群体中,评价个体
六.积累素材:
1.天上九头鸟,地下湖北佬。

2.北京人自信,上海人精明,广州人开放,成都人休闲,东北人豪爽……
3.2017年5月17日,美团产品运营招聘条件:①不要简历丑的②不要开大众的
③不要信中医的④不要黄泛区和东北人。

七.范文 1.在群体中,评价个体(66分)
①有时,对某个群体的固有印象会影响我们对这个群体中个体的评价。

我们往往默认,位于群体中的个体,势必会烙上群体意志与行为的烙印。

因为群体是个体相同相通特征的集合与放大。

(述材料,析材料)
②而与一个群体接触,并对之形成固有印象的过程中,我们实际上不啻于两种经历:一种是对大量群体中面目不甚分明的个体进行感知体察,从中提炼出群体性的特征;另一种是较为片面地从他人或较有限的接触经历中直接获取群体的固有印象,而这两个环节,其实并没有包含对个体独特的个性化认知,很可能是不全面的、有失偏颇的,甚至可能出现对个体评判的极大误差,应谨慎、辩证地加以对待。

(阐明固有印象产生原因并没包含个性化认知,我们应辩证地对待)
③从主观层面而言,借对群体的固有印象来辅助评价个体的行为,可能是贴标签思维模式的惯性延伸。

通过粗浅地简化概括,以群体的标签覆盖个体。

我们可以降低行为成本,提升行为效率。

譬如,了解到一个个体处于一个我们有负面印象的群体,我们便趋向于矮化此个体评价,避免与之交流接触。

毕竟我们往往认为“物以类聚,人以群分”,个体既会被动地受到群体的耳濡目染的浸润影响,又会主动地推动促进群体的发展方向。

这种合理性及其实际利益,会强化群体印象对我们评估个体的影响。

(阐述借对群体的固有印象来评价个体的行为,会强化对我们评估个体的影响)
④然而,群体固有印象的先入为主,有时会使我们难以从根源上客观认识个体,扭转片面评价。

问题在于,一个个体一般会处于多个群体,对某个群体的固有印象,并不能反映群体之间的交集,甚至有时个体会同处于数个似乎令人印象相悖的群体中。

并且,即便在同一群体中,不同个体对群体特征的表现和支持态度亦有强弱之分,高下之别,个体与群体亦常存在小部分的相斥。

最后,在个体形成群体之时,内部声音的聚拢和传达,有时会形成劣币驱逐良币的趋势,在外体现出"乌合之众"的现象。

属于个体的独特理智,常常会被群体流于表面,因错综复杂形成的失智性隐匿藏蔽。

破开群体固有印象去探寻个体,很可能得到令人震惊的结果。

(阐明群体固有印象会使我们难以从根源上客观认识个体)
⑤诚然,在当今高速发展、节奏迅疾的时代,无需我们穷形尽相地探究他人真相。

有时依赖于群体的固有印象,我们便能一窥个体的价值、立场与思想风貌,使我们更好地辨别个体、加入群体。

但是另一方面,我们也应警惕这种思维模式使我们与"被印象"了的个体产生隔阂疏离,从而在自我的价值固化中树立人与人、群体与群体的铁壁。

(阐明固有印象的优劣)
⑥因此,在评价个体时,我们除了借助对其所在群体的固有印象,还应多维度、有深度地考量体察其根本的内核与独特的风貌,揭开群体之面,发掘个体之矿藏。

(总结全文,明确做法)
2 勿以山岭看孤峰(64分)。

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