全国高考I卷II卷短文改错及答案

2015年全国卷I
第一节短文改错（10分）
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
短文改错：
第一行：think改为thought 第二行：in与countryside中间加the
第二行：or改为and 第三行：on改为with 第四行去掉been
第五行：seriously改为serious airs改为air Much改为Many
第六行：found改为find your改为our/the
2015年全国卷II
四、改错
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
71. parent改为parents
72. on改为in
73. very去掉
74. looks改为looking
75. where改为that
76. begun改为began
77. telling改为told
78. a改为the
79. saw后加his
80. terrible改为terribly
2014年全国卷I
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
2014年全国卷II
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are threezxxk
lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
答案：
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for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
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looks
and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the
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to helpful
teachers but also our friends. zxxk
2013年全国卷I
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错（共10小题。

每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断。

如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)。

如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

We had guests last night who have not stayed 76.
in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast 77.
because that they were going out early in the 78.
morning. They came back lately and had some 79.
tea.I came into the living room and saw one of 80.
them just to through the kitchen door but turn 81.
on the light. He was looking for a glass the 82.
cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was 83.
not for guesls. I just smiled to me and thought, 84.
“What can I do? We are guests after all.” 85.
第四部分：
76．have→had
77. ago→before
78.that去掉
tely→late
80.√
81.but→and
82.glass后加in
83.ideas→idea
84.me→myself
85.We→They
2013年全国卷II
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit
another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
答案：第一行before改成ago。

for去掉；Unfortunate改为Unfortunately
第二行week 改为weeks；第三行so改为but；will改为would；myself改为me
第四行farther改为far。

第五行interested改为interesting。

truth前面加the
2012年全国卷I
第四部分写作(共两节.满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共1t。

小魔:每小题1分，满分10分)(注意:在试卷卷上作答无效)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边板线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。

Every one of us can make a great efforts to 76.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all 77.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving oily 78.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿when we have a real need. That won't be easy, I know. 79.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to 80______________ work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy 81______________ smaller cars that bum less oil. Other way is to watch our 82______________ everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, 83______________ how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the 84______________ lights or television when no one else was there? 85______________ 答案：
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From
less
the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I
toys
was happy when the toys worked, but when things did ︿wrong, I got angry and
went/go
broke it. For a while ︿parents bought me new toys. But before long they began them my
to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my what tore
father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.
for
Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.
could/might
My attitude changed from then on.
2012年全国卷II
第二节短文改错(每小题1. 5分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

先对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该
加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：⒈原行没有错的不要改；
⒉答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76.______
Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 77.______
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78.______
without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79.______
Many countrie s in the world find we don’t have enough water.80.______ To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81.______
out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82.______
drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83.______
ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.______
water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85.______
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you∧opinion about water saving. 76. my
Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 77. animals
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78. nor
without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79. seems
Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. 80. they To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81. the/this/that
out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82. because/since/as drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83. √
ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84. used \ \
water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85. for
Sincerely,
Li Hua
2011年全国卷I
第四部分写作（共两节满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。

并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改
One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76.
Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our home 77.
I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to 78.
school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch 79.
bell finally rang,my friends and I met under a tall tree 80
and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used 81.
to share her Nang with me.Nang is a specially kind of 82.
Cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much. Now Aigulie and 83.
Istudy at different colleges or we can only see each other 84.
during the summer vacation.I think over he ra lot and I miss 85.
the food and the good time we had together.
76.memory-----memories。

77.of---------后加the。

78.hold-------held。

79.since-------when。

80.√。

81.去掉was
82. specially------special。

83.them------it；
84.or------and；
85.over------of\about
2011全国卷II
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________ another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________ work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________ was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______ Yours,
第二节
76. after---since 77.them---us 78. for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day---days 83.fly---flew
84.trip 前a 85.better---more
2010年全国卷I
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
(注意：在试卷卷上作答无效
．．．．．．．．．)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______
was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______
have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_______
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80_______
of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful 81______
help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living 82______
near my house, who was a very much famous writer. 83______
He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84______
advices on how to write like a real writer. 85______
76. 去掉第二个a 77. on改为in 78. or改为and 79. have改为had 80. they前加what 81. were改为was 82. Uncle … 后加a 83. 去掉much
84. reading改为read 85. advices改为advice
2010年全国卷II
第二节短文改错(共10小题：每小题1.5分。

满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，
在答题卡相应的位置上萄一个勾(、／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多—个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线(、)划掉·[来源:学|科|网]
此行缺—个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前(后)词·此行话一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 76
At that time, we often spend time together. 77
Thank to her heap, I made great Progress i n my 78
study. Last year. she decided to study abroad. In 79
other words, we would be separated long time. 80
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81
my best wishes to him. She said it was the beat 82
Gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ ve 83
kept touch with each other through e-mails. I 84
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85
第二节
76.f riend→friends
77.spend→spent
78.Thank→Thanks
79.√
80. for a long
81.去掉off
82.him→her
83.has→had
84. kept in touch
85. see→seeing。