高中英语议论文概要写作 (优质课)
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高中英语优质课概要写作精品展示课件
The topic-what
The reason-why
The methodhow The solution/conclusion
Four eTlehme etonptsic
The rTehaesomnethod
The result
Paragraph Para. 1 Para. 2 Para. 3
Tip3: Simplify description by using general words简化描述
Tip4: Use words of similar meaning 近义词组替换
Point 3:
概要 He asked for the beachcombers’ help in collecting
Para. 4
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高考英语写作辅导-议论文的概要写作精品ppt课件
What is the claim?
What position or opinion does “The Meatrix” want us to accept?
What is the claim?
The claim of “The Meatrix” is “Don’t support the factory farm machine.” (It is stated near the end of the film.)
What are the reasons?
Why does “The Meatrix” say we should not support factory farming?
What are the reasons?
Because factory farms are …are cruel to animals.
View a short film Identify the argument the film makes Write a summary of the film’s argument
View the film
Click on the link below to view the film “The Meatrix.” Watch the film once, then move on to the next slide.
What are the reasons?
Because factory farms …are cruel to animals. …create antibiotic resistant germs …cause massive pollution …destroy communities
高中英语：概要写作公开课
Tip2: If the topic sentence includes all the key information, it serves as the main point.
Para2
Arnold Glass, a professor in Rutgers University in New Jersey4, and a student researcher investigated the issue of divided student attention. The study involved 118 Rutgers students who were taking the same level college class. The students were permitted to use any electronic device during half of their daily class periods. During the other half, no one was allowed to use any technology.
概 要 写 作指导课 Summary writing
Read for Writing Style
Writing Style
Function
Narration 记叙文
to give an account of an event or series
of events
√ Exposition 说明文
to state the facts
In fact, a special software program has been created. Students can use the program, which engages students more with the class material on their personal devices during a given class. It can also be used to observe student activity and prevent them from opening unrelated pages and programs.
Para2
Arnold Glass, a professor in Rutgers University in New Jersey4, and a student researcher investigated the issue of divided student attention. The study involved 118 Rutgers students who were taking the same level college class. The students were permitted to use any electronic device during half of their daily class periods. During the other half, no one was allowed to use any technology.
概 要 写 作指导课 Summary writing
Read for Writing Style
Writing Style
Function
Narration 记叙文
to give an account of an event or series
of events
√ Exposition 说明文
to state the facts
In fact, a special software program has been created. Students can use the program, which engages students more with the class material on their personal devices during a given class. It can also be used to observe student activity and prevent them from opening unrelated pages and programs.
【高考英语写作】概要写作专题与议论文写作讲解课件
eing a good neighbor old- -fashioned? In 1965, a power cut hit New York City, and thousands of people were left helpless.Suddenly everyone shared the same problem,and the largest city became a group of eight million neighbors.People with cars offered rides to those walking. Other people helped direct traffic.Trapped in elevators,people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirits. In times of trouble, people still depend on one another. As time goes on,people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is important.
要点提炼：邻居在我们的生活中非常重要。
Para.2 In the past,neighbors helped one another build houses and clear fields. They could offer timely help when someone was in trouble.Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment. They shared happiness and sorrow from time to time,which brought a harmonious atmosphere.
要点提炼：邻居在我们的生活中非常重要。
Para.2 In the past,neighbors helped one another build houses and clear fields. They could offer timely help when someone was in trouble.Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment. They shared happiness and sorrow from time to time,which brought a harmonious atmosphere.
高考-概要写作-公开课课件
led directlyst hr -“l odw-away society” which is
gareat waste of the earth’s resources.
Modern industry has convinced us that
products are not permanent.
past; Decades ago
were made to__b_e_us__e_d_f_o_r_a__lo_n_g_t_ime____.
to function well for a long time; durable
Decades ago, industrial goods were made d
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’ t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
gareat waste of the earth’s resources.
Modern industry has convinced us that
products are not permanent.
past; Decades ago
were made to__b_e_us__e_d_f_o_r_a__lo_n_g_t_ime____.
to function well for a long time; durable
Decades ago, industrial goods were made d
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’ t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高考英语-概要写作--公开课课件
Concise !!! 60-70 words
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
高考英语概要写作优质课精品课件
Whose opinion/belief/finding is mentioned?
Focus on the researcher’s findings!
Understanding of Para. 2
Generally, people believe that the hormone oxytocin is let out in our body in various social situations and our body creates a large amount of it during positive social intereaxcpteiornims esnutc1h as falling in love or giving birth. But in a previous experiment Professor Ryan found that the hormone is also let out in our body during negative social interactions such as envy.
Which sentence is the key sentence of Para. 1?
Women are friendly. But men are more competitive. Why? Researchers have found it’s all down to the hormone oxytocin. Although known as the love hormone, it affects the sexes differently. “Women tend to be social in their behavior. They often share with others. But men tend to be competitive. They are trying to improve their social status,” said Professor Ryan.
Focus on the researcher’s findings!
Understanding of Para. 2
Generally, people believe that the hormone oxytocin is let out in our body in various social situations and our body creates a large amount of it during positive social intereaxcpteiornims esnutc1h as falling in love or giving birth. But in a previous experiment Professor Ryan found that the hormone is also let out in our body during negative social interactions such as envy.
Which sentence is the key sentence of Para. 1?
Women are friendly. But men are more competitive. Why? Researchers have found it’s all down to the hormone oxytocin. Although known as the love hormone, it affects the sexes differently. “Women tend to be social in their behavior. They often share with others. But men tend to be competitive. They are trying to improve their social status,” said Professor Ryan.
《英语议论文写作》课件
运用修辞手法，如比喻和夸张， 增加文笔的生动性。
使用逻辑推理来展示清晰而有 条理的思维。
道德考虑
诚信原则
遵守诚实和诚信的写作原则，维护学术道德。
平衡立场
在辩论中保持平衡，充分考虑不同观点。
尊重他人
避免使用冒犯性语言或攻击他人的观点。
成功的议论文范例
1
语言表达
展示一个语言流畅、条理清晰的范例。
2
论点支持
3
推翻错误观点
通过提供更准确的事实和证据来推翻 错误观点。
写作困惑归纳
1 常见错误
避免常见的写作错误， 提高论文质量。
2 争议话题
处理有争议的话题时的 写作技巧和注意事项。
3 引起兴趣
吸引和保持读者的兴趣 的一些技巧。
写作技巧与策略
说服技巧
使用有说服力的词汇和句子结 构来增强论点。
修辞手法
逻辑推理
问答和与讲师讨论
最后的问答环节，参与者可以提问并与讲师及其他学习者进行讨论。
范例中使用了多种支持论点的方法。
3
结构组织
范例展示了正确的论文结构和段落组织。
进一步提高
1 资源推荐
2 自我修正
了解更多关于写作有说服力的论文的资源。
学习自我编辑和修正论文的技巧。
3 写作社区
参与写作社区，和其他学习者交流和分享经验。
总结和回顾
回顾本课程中涵盖的重点内容，并强调写作有说服力的论文的重要性。
《英语议论文写作》PPT 课件
本PPT课件将引导您了解写作有说服力的论文的基本技巧，包括针对不同目 的和受众的写作策略、构建强有力的段落、使用有效的语言、以及应对反驳 等。让我们开始吧！
了解写作有说服力的论文
议论文概要写作课件-高三英语一轮复习课件
Para1 why we give up the rest sentences?
Underline the key points
quotation 引言
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Too much praise can backfire.Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
Let‘s summarize
Rules & Steps for writing a summary
Rules Steps
40~80 words
Step 1 Extracted 提取
Key points
Q1: What ‘s the advice of expert?Q2:What is the character of good praise?
Para3
It should be sincere and focused on effort
quotation 引言
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
Underline the key points
quotation 引言
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Too much praise can backfire.Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
Let‘s summarize
Rules & Steps for writing a summary
Rules Steps
40~80 words
Step 1 Extracted 提取
Key points
Q1: What ‘s the advice of expert?Q2:What is the character of good praise?
Para3
It should be sincere and focused on effort
quotation 引言
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
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1. Brainstorm: What expressions can we use to start a summary of an
argumentative essay? 2. Find out the key information (the most
important nouns, noun phrases and verbs) of the writer’s viewpoint.
……
Step One
Part I. Para. ___1_____
II. Para. __2______
Read the passage and complete the table.
Function
To introduce the topic and the writer’s viewpoint To present the arguments to support the writer’s viewpoint
Read the title and the first paragraph and then answer the
following questions.
Step Two
1.What is the topic of the passage? Many employees want to work a four-day week with less pay. 2. Is the writer for or against the idea? What is
the writer’s viewpoint? For the idea. A four-day workweek with less pay will benefit
the individual companies, the economy as a whole as well as
the employees who decide to take the option.
Step Read paragraphs 2 to 4 and find out
Three
the supporting points.
Supporting point
01 Companies will … company profits.
For the country as a whole, one of … 02
Rules are needed to collect and use facial information properly.(10 words)
Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
unemployment rates.
Supporting point
Supporting point
Employees who can afford a lower
03
salary … their lives.
Write a topic sentence for the summary.
Step Four
Four-day Workweek
In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. If a law required companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent) of their normal pay, it would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
3. Write down your topic sentence for the summary with the key information and proper phrases.
Topic sentence:
_________________________
________________________orting points 1, 2 and 3 on your own and then share
them with others.
Step Six
Add transitional words between sentences and complete the first draft.
议论文概要写作指导
Warming up:
Try to rewrite the following passage in less than ten words.
However, proper rules are needed on who can collect facial information and what constitutes proper use. While it is reasonable for law enforcement purposes, facial features are sensitive personal information, as Guo said, and can jeopardize（危害） consumers' safety if leaked.