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2012二模前作文辅导专题（五种类型、十个话题）

五种类型：

一、利弊分析（手机的使用、网购、电子课本、网上交友、请家教）

结构：

Part1: As we all know，… is becoming more and more…,different people have different opinions on it/every coin has two sides.

Part2: The advantages of it are(on the one hand)…First of all… what’s more…besides…last but not least….. The disadvantages of it are(on the other hand )…To begin with,…next…finally…

Part3: In my opinion，…= To my mind，…= As far as I am concerned，…= I am of the opinion that in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word,

加分句子：

shopping on the internet is becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.

In my opinion，it’s not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.

二、写人、记事类

结构：

Part1: Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind, …is the most unforgettable one.

Part2: On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was …F irst of all… Then…After that…In the end…

Part3: he/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/experienced, I will remember him/in forever.

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Sth impressed me greatly

What impressed me most is tha t…

I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life.

Developa better relationship between each other.

Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

三、计划类（暑期计划、高中计划）

结构：

Part1: The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself.

Part2: First of all…Then…After that…In the end…I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit.

Part3:I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.

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四、图表类

结构：

Part1: As can be seen from/in the chart/diagram/table/graph.../ It can be seen from the chart/diagram/table/graph/figures/statistics that...

Part2: We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon./I believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon./ To start with,…What's more…Last but not least…In the end…I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit.

Part3: In conclusion/ in short/riefly/ in brief

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From the chart we can see clearly that the average number of hours a student spends on Internet per week has increased from less than two hours in 1998 to nearly four hours in 2000, and then to 20 hours in 2004.

In my mind, the reasons why the overseas students are on the rise are as follows.

it is not difficult to find traveling an effective way to relieve people's stress and get relaxation people prefer to go traveling rather than stay at home during holidays

五、操作性知识（地震、火灾）

使用操作：户外活动受伤，如何急救。

1 首先检查受伤部位是否严重。

2用绷带包扎，尽量别活动。

3 帮助受伤者平躺，尽量放松。

4拨打120 或者999

加分句子：

earthquake, kill, wound（致伤）, relatives, destroy, lonely, homeland, loveliest, whole-heartedly(全心全意地)，donate, overcome (克服), confidence, firm will (坚定的意志)十个话题：

一、环保类（绿色出行/节水）

1. It’s our duty to save water

2 we can’t live without water.

3 The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

4 But some people don’t care about it .

5 Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.

6 If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

7We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

8There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem：the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

9. If everyone does one thing for our school, we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.

10.elieve that by doing all these small things we can improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.