2015高考新课标卷II 短文改错 解析

2015高考新课标卷II 短文改错解析

山东郯城第一中学高级教师徐保国假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, ”How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

第一处：parent改为parents 考查名词。根据下文，Five minutes later. Tony saw parents.可知此句中parent应该用复数形式。

第二处：on改为in考查介词。在商店橱窗里，用介词in。

第三处：删去very。前面有so，不用very，so和that构成固定句式。

第四处：looks改为looking。考查非谓语动词。after是介词，后面应该用动名词作宾语。第五处：where改为that考查宾语从句引导词。that引导宾语从句，在从句中不做成分，也没有意义，而where引导宾语从句时，在从句中作地点状语，有“在哪里”的意思。

第六处：begun改为began考查动词。begin是不及物的，没有被动语态，此处直接用过去式形式和前面的was scared一起做并列谓语。

第七处：telling改为told考查谓语动词。and后tell和saw一起做并列谓语，而并非和crying 并列做宾补。

第八处：a改为the考查冠词。上面已经提到shop，再次提到用定冠词。

第九处：saw后加his。名词parents前缺少限定词。

第十处：terrible改为terribly考查副词。修饰形容词worried，用副词形式。