2021年德国留学申请书准备指南

关键点

1、你大学读这个专业为什么选择目前申请专业？

2、你父母做什么工作对你申请专业有什么影响？

3、你对目前申请专业领域的问题如何看待，比如申请金融，现在国家允许银行倒闭的问题你如何看待？

4、你有什么和招生办公室老师们分享的事情吗？

5、你有什么团队协助的案例吗？

6、你是怎么样计划到这个国家或者地区度过1-2年的研究生生活？

7、你毕业后的2-3年计划到什么样的单位做什么样的工作呢？

8、你为什么选择这个国家而不是其它国家呢？

9、你为什么选择这个国家的这个大学的这个专业而不是其它专业呢？

写作技巧

一、突出重点，主线明确

清楚有力地表达您的求学动机，和学习学术能力。在国内有一种错误的观点，要“煽情”才能有效果。有的留学申请人就通过描述不相干活动展示“独特”的性格，或是学术上感觉没有什么可写的，就写自己考试时克服了重重困难，如何考取了好成绩！这是根本不着边际的写法，会让录取者发掘不到你的特点。要知道，你是要在很短的时间内，清楚地用几百字告诉招生教授你是入学（奖学金）非常合格的人选，盲目“煽情”完全不需要。

二、结构简单，衔接紧密

留学文书其实是你个人的广告！要重点突出，形象鲜明。仔细想想，留下深刻印象的广告哪个不是简明而富有创意的？许多申请人往往想把自己的全部优点都写出来告诉教授，觉得这样才能全面的展现自己。但是：“Simple is the best ”，试想一下，招生教授天天都要做大量的教学工作，还要抽出时间阅读数量可观的留学申请资料，只有那种简单有力的文章才能HIT THE TARGET，让人印象深刻！我们的理念是简明而富有创意的！

三、符合西方思维习惯

文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。我们在以往的经历中发现，有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点，反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见；而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的，认为这些能表现出申请人布满个性。所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材，把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来，在适当地篇幅里展示出来。

英文范文

Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more companies built，management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning field in China， so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England.

The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. My mother was also involved in business as an accountant，helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I， also， would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

With the time of growing up， I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

As a high school student in China， I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination （CEE）， even so， books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June， 2001，I was so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in the department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms， I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment， I lost my direction and objectives.

My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact， I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American，and some books about management by Peter ker. I began to notice something