如何写好英语作文(课堂PPT)
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考场作文TIPS
Clear idea
评 分
Correct grammar
原 Complete passage 则
Beautiful language
Beautiful handwriting
5 5
5 5 5
3
Problems in your compositions
王洁
1.词汇量与短语积累过少，很多句子不会表达。 2.考试时间分配不合理，在写作文时时间过少。 3.语法运用不灵活，作文多为简单的句子。
Grade three,studying in Huashan Senior Middle School.
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Organization (组句成篇)
① I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. ② Since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. ③ In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. ④ In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now. ⑤ I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.
张瑶
1、每当写作文时对于句式变化总结不清 2、运用从句时总是表达错误 3、对一些同义词不是很了解 4、有时作文写着写着就跑题了
5
Problems in your compositions
苏一晴
1、平常积累的词汇量不少，写作文的时候用不了好词语 2、许多句型没记住，作文没亮点
高根宝
我觉得自己写的是汉语式英语，不会使用英语句型，如： 倒装，并且没有掌握新颖的英语单词，所用单词太普遍。 积累的词汇量过少。
It is colder than it was yesterday
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2. Sentence lengthening exercise
Come to eat! Come to eat with me! Come to eat with me by the sea! If you are free, come to eat with me by the sea! Do you agree to come to eat with me by the sea? if
moment.
10
4. Sentence lengthening exercises
I am a student. I , Maqiang, am a student. I , Maqiang, am a student,who is in Class One
Grade three. I , Maqiang, am a student,who is in Class One
的两要素； （2）__主__语___在前,__谓__语___在后 （3）_谓___语__有人称，数，时态和语态的变化。
7Biblioteka Baidu
1.Sentence lengthening exercise
It is cold It is cold today It is very cold today It is rather/so cold a day What a cold day it is !
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What 's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations
杨柳
1. 逻辑性不强。 2. 想表达的句子表达不出来。 3. 遇到的陌生单词不会
王鸽
1. 想用一些不同句式表达相同的意思却无法想出来。 2. 某些句子有时不知如何表达。
4
Problems in your compositions
马强
1、做前面题耗时太多，给作文留的时间不足 , 没 时间打草稿，只能想一句写一句。 2、不会使用从句，不会将散句写为整句 3、有的单词写不出来 4、字不够整齐
如何写好英语作文
华山中学
郑锐
1
范文 My opinion on cheating in examination
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
As students ,we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers
you are free,
9
3. Sentence lengthening exercises
He’s swimming. He’s swimming in the river. He’s swimming in the river with Tim. He’s swimming in the river with Tim at the
张成龙
1、不会造句 2、某些单词不会 3、句型不会 4、语法不会
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五个基本句型
1）主语 + 谓语动词 2）主语 + 谓语动词 + 表语 3）主语 + 谓语动词 + 宾语 4）主语 + 谓语动词 + 宾语 + 宾补 5）主语 + 谓语动词 + 间宾 + 直宾 请观察:（1）_主__语__+ 谓__语__是英语句子必不可少
考场作文TIPS
Clear idea
评 分
Correct grammar
原 Complete passage 则
Beautiful language
Beautiful handwriting
5 5
5 5 5
3
Problems in your compositions
王洁
1.词汇量与短语积累过少，很多句子不会表达。 2.考试时间分配不合理，在写作文时时间过少。 3.语法运用不灵活，作文多为简单的句子。
Grade three,studying in Huashan Senior Middle School.
11
Organization (组句成篇)
① I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. ② Since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. ③ In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. ④ In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now. ⑤ I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.
张瑶
1、每当写作文时对于句式变化总结不清 2、运用从句时总是表达错误 3、对一些同义词不是很了解 4、有时作文写着写着就跑题了
5
Problems in your compositions
苏一晴
1、平常积累的词汇量不少，写作文的时候用不了好词语 2、许多句型没记住，作文没亮点
高根宝
我觉得自己写的是汉语式英语，不会使用英语句型，如： 倒装，并且没有掌握新颖的英语单词，所用单词太普遍。 积累的词汇量过少。
It is colder than it was yesterday
8
2. Sentence lengthening exercise
Come to eat! Come to eat with me! Come to eat with me by the sea! If you are free, come to eat with me by the sea! Do you agree to come to eat with me by the sea? if
moment.
10
4. Sentence lengthening exercises
I am a student. I , Maqiang, am a student. I , Maqiang, am a student,who is in Class One
Grade three. I , Maqiang, am a student,who is in Class One
的两要素； （2）__主__语___在前,__谓__语___在后 （3）_谓___语__有人称，数，时态和语态的变化。
7Biblioteka Baidu
1.Sentence lengthening exercise
It is cold It is cold today It is very cold today It is rather/so cold a day What a cold day it is !
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What 's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations
杨柳
1. 逻辑性不强。 2. 想表达的句子表达不出来。 3. 遇到的陌生单词不会
王鸽
1. 想用一些不同句式表达相同的意思却无法想出来。 2. 某些句子有时不知如何表达。
4
Problems in your compositions
马强
1、做前面题耗时太多，给作文留的时间不足 , 没 时间打草稿，只能想一句写一句。 2、不会使用从句，不会将散句写为整句 3、有的单词写不出来 4、字不够整齐
如何写好英语作文
华山中学
郑锐
1
范文 My opinion on cheating in examination
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
As students ,we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers
you are free,
9
3. Sentence lengthening exercises
He’s swimming. He’s swimming in the river. He’s swimming in the river with Tim. He’s swimming in the river with Tim at the
张成龙
1、不会造句 2、某些单词不会 3、句型不会 4、语法不会
6
五个基本句型
1）主语 + 谓语动词 2）主语 + 谓语动词 + 表语 3）主语 + 谓语动词 + 宾语 4）主语 + 谓语动词 + 宾语 + 宾补 5）主语 + 谓语动词 + 间宾 + 直宾 请观察:（1）_主__语__+ 谓__语__是英语句子必不可少