高考英语二轮专题练习(五)改错专项

【二轮专题练】（五）改错专项假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

AHow does the disease present? Well, from what is known so far, there can be the number of symptoms range from mild to severe. There can be fever and respiratory symptoms such as cough and short of breath. In mo re severe case, there’s been pneumonia (肺炎), kidney failure (肾衰竭), and death. The mortality rate (死亡率) was not known yet.How can we tell if someone is infected or not? The infection can be diagnosed (诊断) by a test calling PCR or Polymerase Chain Reaction (聚合酶链反应). This test identifies the virus basing on its genetic fingerprint. There is current no specific medication for the virus and treatment is supportive care. There’s no vaccine (疫苗) to protect the virus. Treatment and vaccines are in development.BSticking to a vegan diet might sound difficult, especial with many popular dishes containing meat or other animal products. Yet in recent years, veganism has become one of the fastest-growing lifestyle trend in the world. According to Huff Post, more than 3 million people inthe United States are vegans. In the UK, about 542,000 people choose veganism over the past decade.What is driving this growth in veganism? One reason may be that people want to protect the environment. Produce meat and dairy products is known to be stressful for the environment. According to a 2013 study by the UN Food and Agriculture Organization, global meat manufacturing causes about 18 percent of the world’s greenhouse gas emissions. This figure is high than all the world’s car s, trains and planes combined. According to BBC News, another reason is why many of today’s young people believe it’s wrong to kill animals for food.For many people, veganism simply means eating no meat, cheese or eggs, and going animal-free also applies to fashion and manufacturing. For example, leather is used to make shoes and clothing. Every year more than a billion animals, from cows to snakes, killed to make leather products from their skins. Now, many brands are looking other materials. So, if you’r e interested in protecting animals and to saving the environment, you might want to give veganism a try.CWhen I was young, I didn’t know what friendship. When I stayed with my friends, a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, they are also happy and shared the happiness with me. When I make progress, they will be very exciting. Instead, when I’m in a difficult situation, they w ill offer help to me. So friendship is never an one-way ticket. If we want to get them, we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to help others, especially that they are in difficult situations.DI can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go nearthe water when I was a child, for my mother had a unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear. The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw a neighbor drowning. After then I have been more frightened.EGet a good education is more important today than ever before. In Canada mostly children attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income. Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rest of Canadian children attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees paying by parents. In law, the children must attend the school from 5 to 16. There is several different levels in the Canadian education system. The first was called Elementary Schools, which include kindergartens through grade 7 or 8.FA few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part at a college course in French. Since I can speak German well in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. In the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him what. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an American speak French with a German accent,” he explained it.GDear Linda,I am very sorry to hear that you are bad ill in hospital. Are you getting better now?P lease don’t worry about my illness. All you should do now is to have good rest and follow the doctor’s a dvices. At present, we are learning some new lessons. They aren’t very difficult, but you don’t need to worry about you r study. When you got back to school, we are all willingly to help you with those missing lessons at the weekend. You will not miss on the final exam. Our head teacher, together with our class, are going to the hospital to seeing you next Wednesday.I hope you will recover soon. Best regards.Yours,Li HuaHI live in a typical Chinese family of four generations lived together under same roof. Everyone has funs with each other here. Every night, we will have dinner together, talking or laughing around the dinner table so that all the worries of the day will be swept away. At weekends, Dad will take Grandpa, that likes outdoor activities a lot, to the countryside to fish. Mom and Grandma will cook delicious food for ourselves. When the weather is fine, I will push my 95-year-old great grandmother in a wheelchair to sunbathe in the yard. My family is such harmonious that I have been grown up into a person with love and responsibility. 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