中招考试英语作文专项

专项训练一人物介绍类

本文要求写一篇说明文，介绍自己。正文提示可以从爱好；性格；理想等方面写。具体要求不限，学生可以有话说，注意写作时可以使用定语从句。

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Hello ,everyone ! My name is Steve Clark. I'm from Yuying Middle School.

My hobbies are listening to music and reading. I .like pop music best. In my' spare time ,I usually go to the library or listen to music to relax myself. I'm a friendly boy who is always ready to help others. I also like to make friends with others and share different stories with them. That's why I want to be a reporter in the future. ,

I hope we can be familiar with each other very soon and become close friends in the following years.

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I love you, my English teacher

I have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher, Mr. Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him.

Mr. Huang is of medium height..He often wears a pair of glasses. He is outgoing and good at communicating with others. He likes sports and always plays basketball with us together.Mr. Huang loves his work very much. Though he is strict, he cares about every student. He's always ready to help students from poor families when they are in trouble. In class, he always makes it lively and active. So we often have different kinds of colorful activities. After class，he usually the students who have difficulties in leaming English. Thanks to him,our English has improved a lot.

I love you, my English teacher! I will never forget you forever!

我的______________

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点明人物最爱我的并^且尽力帮助我的人是（the per- son who. .. is; try to do sth.)

详细信息年龄、长相、兴趣爱好、工作

举例说明她/他为我做过的事情：

我习惯于打游戏、对学习不感兴趣（used to；be not interested in) 她/他和我一起看书（read books)

我逐渐明白读书的重要性（little by little; know the importance of)

我为她/他要做的事情：

永远不会忘记她/他的关心与爱护（care and love )

取得更大进步（make more progress)

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My mother / father...

The person who loves me and tries to help me is my mother/father..

She/He is 39 years old. She/He is tall and thin.She/He is a doc-tor/driver. In her/his free time,

she/he likes reading. She/He can play the piano.

My mother/ father is like a friend to me. I used to like playing computer games and was not interested in reading, but she/he often read books together with me. Little by little, I knew the importance of reading and loved it.

I'll never forget her/his care and love. I'll try my best to make more progress. I'm sure I'll grow up better with my mother/father.

一封邮件:推荐自己

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开头介绍基本情况我叫李华，一个15岁的男孩（a 15-year-old boy)，写信的目的（ a teaching assistant)

正文?描述个性特点

个性特点：外向（outgoing )、善良 (kind)、

友善（friendly )，善于与他人交流 ( do well

in communicating with others)

爱好:喜欢英语电步与歌曲（like English

movies and songs)

?介绍英语学习

经历及水平

英语水平?( have a good command of

English )，比起其他人能更流利地说英语

(can speak English more fluently than others)

结尾' 选上后的打算若被选上，会尽力帮助你（If 1 am chosen ，I’ll tr y my: best to help you)

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Dear Mike,

I'm Li Hua, a 15-year-old boy. I'm very glad to hear that you are going to choose a teaching assistant.

I'm one of the top students in my class.I'm outgoing, friendly and kind as well, so it's easy to get along with me. Also I do well in communicating with others, which makes me popular among my classmates. I like English movies and songs, so 1 have a good command of English. And I think I can speak English more fluently than others.

If I am chosen, I will try my best to help you and the classmates. I'm sure that I can be a good assistant.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

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From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most.

As a member of the Lions, she has been helping others for many years.At first,She goes to the old people’s home twice a month to cut hair ,wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days, she offers people umbrellas or raincoats.I'm deeply moved by her story. I'm going to start with small things around me. I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages. What's more, I'll ask my parents and more friends to join me.

Small action can make a big difference. Let’s help those who need help! 专项训练二写人叙事类

父亲和我

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开头：引出话题我总是认为父亲不关心我（care for)，一件事改变了我的看法（change one’s mind )

正文：交代事件发生的经过和感受幸#经历：一天，因为英语成绩本并很难过(be-cause of) ; 父亲邀请我爬山（invited me to climb a mountain)，我累了，想放弃（give up );父亲鼓励我，帮助我（gave me a hand)，最后我们到达山顶（got to the top)

我的感受：发现到山顶的路不那么难（not so hard)，我明白了父亲的用意：坚持梦想（stick to your dream)

结尾：表达感激之情父亲节将要到来（Father’s Day)，给父亲最好的祝福（best wishes)

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Father and me

I used to think father didn't care for me. But one thing changed my mind:

One Sunday，I was sad because of another “C” in English. At that time my father invited me to climb a mountain. Soon I felt tired and wanted to give up. My father encouraged me and gave me a hand when necessary.At last, we got to the top. Then I found the way up wasn't so hard. Suddenly, I understood my father： stick to your dream and you can do it.

Father's Day is coming. I want to say, “Thank you and best wishes to you. I love you，father.

三年的学校生活

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开头：引出话题介绍自己是九年级的学生、离校的时间(下月）、此时的心情:紧张与，兴奋（nervous and -excited)

主文：四个方面的回忆?同学与朋友：和睦相处，互相帮助 (get on well with ； help each other)

?老师：友善、帮助（friendly; helpful) ?学科:最喜欢英语与体育，经常课后运动（like English and P. E. best)

?学校活动：每学期郊游（go on a school trip each term)

总结：表达感受表达对初中学校生活的不舍，爱学校与老师，永远不会忘记三年的学校生活（never forget）

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Three Years’ School Life

I'm a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior middle school next month after I finish the exam. I'm feeling a bit nervous and excited.

I study in a middle school. It is big and nice. There are many students and teachers in it. I get on well with my classmates. We often help each other. We study many subjects in school. I like English and P. E. best. We often do sports in the afternoon after class. Of course, we all s pend much time on study. We work very hard. Our teachers are quite friendly to us. They are also helpful. We can ask them for help at any time. We go on a school trip each term and we really enjoy it.

In a few days I have to say “goodbye” to my school. I feel sorry about it. I love my school and all my teachers and classmates. I will never forget my three years' school life.

本篇写作的主题是围绕做一名有文明素养的学生展开陈述。

叙述生活中一件不文明或文明的事（包括财间、.地点、人物和经过，以及你的看法就如何成为一名有文明素养的学生提出自己的建议

做一名有文明素养的学生

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开头：点明主题..已给出'

正文：列举事例陈述事件发生的时间、地点、人物、经过：周六晚，餐馆，不文明行为，制止（Saturday evening， restaurant, talk loudly and smoke, stop)

我的感想:他们的做法使我烦恼，但我的做法使我感到自豪(upset，be proud of)

结尾:提建琢应该在公共场合保持安静，礼貌待人（keep quiet in

public, be polite 1b others)

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Be a student with good manners

It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.

Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. When they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.

In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public.we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be trained to be persons with good behaviors.

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我的业余爱好

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开头:点明爱好我喜欢读书（enjoy reading bpoks) .，因为那很有趣

正文：讲述关于业余爱好的一次经历、小时候认为读书不有趣（didn’t; think reading books was interesting);两年前，收到”本书作为礼物（received a book as the birthday gift);被书吸引，以至于不想放下（so attracted，put it down);从那时起

就迷上了读书（be fond of reading) 结尾：对学

习、生活的影响已经读了很多书（a dozen of books)，带来知识和乐趣（knowledge and fun)

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My Hobby

Each of us may have one or more hobbies. I enjoy reading books very much, because there are lots of interesting things in them.

When I was very young, I didn't think reading books was interesting ,because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games. But two years ago, 1 received a book as the birthday gift. It is a book about the wild lives in the world. I was so attracted by the animals that I didn't want to put it down. Since then I have been fond of reading books.

By now, I have read about a dozen of books. They bring me much knowledge and fun. I will keep on this hobby forever.

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一件感人的事

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1.在一个寒冷的早晨( on a cold morning)，你买早餐

时看到前面的女孩子买了面包和牛奶（in

front of me; bread arid milk)

正文:故事进展2.女孩要离开时（be going to)，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他看上去又冷又俄（looked cold and hungry) 3.女孩走到乞丐旁边（go over)，把食物递给了他、(give. . . to...)

4.乞丐向女孩道别，女孩微笑着离开（go away with

a smile)

结尾我的感受我很感动（be deeply moved)，我认为那是那个寒冷的早晨最温暖的事情

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On a cold morning, while I was buying some food for my breakfast, I saw a girl buying some bread and milk in front of me. When she was going to leave ,she found a beggar under the tree, who looked cold and hungry. Without thinking twice she went over to the beggar and gave the food to him. The beggar was thankful to the girl and kept saying thank you. The girl said nothing and went away with a smile. 1 was deeply moved by that. I thought it was the warmest thing on that cold morning.

专项训练三做法建议类

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给新生的几点建议

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开头：交代主题1. 一名毕业生（a graduating student)

2.分享一些经验（share some experience) J

正文：给出建议第一:初中学〒科目很多，好的学习方法很重要 (the learning method is very important)

第二：锻炼身体，保持健康（do more exercises， keep healthy)

第三:参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富（take part in) 第四：多读书，多交朋友（make friends)

第五:好好地和老师、同学相处（get on well with) 第六:认真计划时间（ plan your time carefully)

'结尾：思结感受希望你喜欢你的新学校生生活（enjoy your new school life)

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Welcome to our school!

As a graduating student, I'd like to share some experience about school life with you.

First, there are more subjects for you to leam in middle school , so the learning method is very important. Second, you'd better do more exercises. If you keep healthy , you can study well. Third, there are different kinds of club activities. You need to take an active part in them and make your school life colorful. Also you can read books and make friends And you should learn to get on well with your teachers and classmates. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. Besides, you should plan your time carefully because you will have much more homework than before.

I hope you will enjoy your new school life.

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怎样成为受欢迎的学生？

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开头：直奔主题我想成为“ 一名受欢迎的学生”（I want to be a popular

student)

正文:提出建议1.衣着整齐，常常微笑（clean and tidy; keep smiling)

2 诚实善良、乐于助人(honest and kind; help )

3懂得与他人分享（ know how to share……with others)

结尾:提出希望希望大家支持我（support )

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How to be a popular student?

Hello,everyone ! I’m Wang Hua. I want to be a popular student. But how can we be popular students? I think we should do the following things at least.

Firstly, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. We should also keep a good mood and keep smiling. Secondly as popular students, we should be honest and kind. We should try our best to help those people who meet troubles. Thirdly, knowing how to share our love, happiness, sadness and other things with others is very important. It can make us know about each other well.

To be a popular student, I will try my best to do all things well.

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怎样度过一个有意义的暑假 t

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开头：引出话题.已给出 1 1 1

正文:提出A议建议1:走亲访友，和家人一起共度美好时光 (visit relatives and friends , spend happy time with our family) 建议2:和好朋友们一起看电影'(see a film)，听

音乐（listen to music ) ’

建议3:假期我们应该加强体育锻炼（take more exercise )，增强体质（keep healthy )

建议4:复习功课（review)

建议5 :帮助父母干家务活（do some housework)

结尾:表达期望希望所有人度过一个愉快的暑假（have a pleasant vacation)

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How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam

It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam. There are kinds of activities for us to take part in.

First, we can visit our relatives and friends or spend happy time with our family. Second, seeing a film, listening to music or hanging out with our friends will also be wonderful. Third, we should take more exercise to keep healthy. What's more, we had better review what we have learned in middle school. Finally, it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot.

Above all，I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.

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与他人和睦相处

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开头：引出话题懂得如何与他人相处非常重要(how to get along with all kinds of people)

首先（First of all )，对朋友要友好（be friendly to)，朋友是我们分享喜悦和悲伤的妤伙伴（share joy and sadness)

正文.?提出建议其次（Besides)，要乐于助人（be ready to help others ) 。比如（ For example )，经常帮助邻居（ help our neighbours )，他们会成为我们的好朋友（be， come our good friends)

而且（What’s more)，多和他人交流（communicate with)。比如（For example )，与父母经常交谈 (talk to )，他们会明白我们爱他们有多深（deeply）

最后但同等重要的是（Last but not least)，应该尊重他人（respect others )，特别是老师和老人（especially our teachers and the old)

结尾：总结全文，呼应主题总之(All in all)，只有这样(only in these ways)，我们才可以与别人融洽相处( get along well with others)

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Getting along well with others

No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to get along with all kinds of people.

First of all, we should be friendly to our friends. They are our good partners who share joy and sadness with us. Besides, we'd better be ready to help others. For example, if we always help our neighbours do some housework, they will become our good friends. What's more, we must communicate with others so that we can understand each other better. For example, if we often talk to our parents , they will know we love them deeply: Last but not least, we are supposed to respect others, especially our teachers and the old.

All in all , only in these ways can we get along well with others.

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怎样才能快乐

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开头：引出话题已给出

正文:提出建议第一:有生活目标，知道.自己要做什么（know what to do)

第二：保持健康，养成良好的生活习惯；做运动(life habits； take exercise)

第三：帮助他人，通过帮助别人获得幸福感（gain happiness； help others)

结尾:感谢倾听已给出

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Good morning everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy” The following are my suggestions.

Firstly, I think we should have life aims .When we have life aims, we will know what to do. For example, I want to be a writer, so I will try to read a lot of books and write more to improve my writing skills. Secondly, we have to keep healthy. Without health, we can't enjoy anything, therefore we should form good life habits, and take exercise every day. Thirdly, we should help others. We can gain happiness by helping others, and we can make new friends in this way.

That’s what I want to share with you. Thank you!

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关于如何做会使家庭更幸福的讨论

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正文:提出建议第一：和家人共度时光( spend more time with family)

第二分享快乐和担忧

第三：记住家人的生日（remem ber family’s birthdays)

结尾：自己的

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向家人表现爱很有必要（show love ；necessary)

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In our English class , we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas. Some say it's better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Family members should share happiness and worries. For example，when they have problems,we should try to cheer them up. Others believe it's important to remember family’s birthdays and give smal l presents to our family on their birthdays.

I think，showing love for family is necessary. If we help with housework, they may feel warmer.Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. Though we are young, we can do much to make a happier home.

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如何保持健康

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正文:异体建议1?锻炼（exercise):每天至少，小时(at least)

2 ?健康饮食（ healthy diet):多吃水果和蔬菜 (fruit and vegetables )，尽量不吃垃圾食品 (junk food) 3?上网（go online):时间不宜太长，对学习和眼睛有害（be bad for)

4.充足的睡眠（enough sleep):早睡，不熬夜（go to bed early; stay up)

5 - *愉快的心情（be happy):随时保持微笑（at any time)

结尾：总结全

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做到这些，就会保持健康（keep healthy )

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How to Keep Healthy

It’s important for us to keep healthy. As a middle school student, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.

First，we should do exercise at least one hour a day，such as running or walking. Second，have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we'd better not spend too much time going online. It’s bad for our study and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don't

stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for our health . Finally, be happy as possible as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.

If we can do , I believe we can keep healthy.

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绿色郑州，健康生活

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开头：引出主题创建绿色郑州是我们的职责（It’s our duty to do sth.)

正文:做法建议骑车出行，减少空气污染（ride bicycles， reduce air pollution)

垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁（rubbish，keep our city clean) 多种树木，保护自然环境（plant more trees， protect the environment)

结尾:你的观点节约用水：洗澡时间短一点（save water) 节约能源：出门关灯（save energy)

总之，每个人都可以做出贡献

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The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Zhengzhou，it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It's better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I'll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly , I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

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我眼中的好朋友

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开头：大众观点1 —些人认为：诚实、开朗（honest; outgoing) 2—些人认为：热爱运动、乐于助人

3其他人认为：努力学习（study hard)、和睦相处 (get on well with)

正文：我的观点及理由最重要的是：诚实守信（honest)

应该交流与合作（communicate，cooperate) 由于我很害羞并且安静，希望朋友有趣、幽默 (funny and humorous) …

结尾:总结感受希望所有人能找到好朋友（wish that all of us can find friends)

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Good Friends in My Eyes

Everyone needs friends. Different people have different ideas about making friends. Some people like the friends who are not only honest, but also outgoing. Some want friends that are good at sports and always ready to help others. Others like friends who study hard and get on well

with others.

In my opinion, 1 think it is important for my friends to be honest. What's more, good friends should communicate and cooperate with each other. At the same time，I am a little shy and quiet. So I expect my friends to be funny and humorous. In this way, I hope my friends can make me laugh.

I wish that all of us can find friends.

中学生在校是否可以使用手机

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开头：表明观点

正文：正反两方面的看法赞成

便于与家长、老师或朋友进行联系

运用手机获取信息，如查询生词、浏览新闻

反对

花费太多时间在QQ和游戏上，浪费时间危害身心健康，如:伤害眼睛，结交坏朋友

结尾：自己的看法和理由我认为，学生不能使用手机，因为对身体健康和学习没有好处(In my opinion; be bad for.)

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Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?

Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.

Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for students to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second，they can search what they need on mobile phones.For example, they can look up new words and look through news.However,some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides, it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.

In my opinion, students can't use mobile phones at school. It’s bad for our health and study.

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十年后的环境:是更好还是更坏？

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乐观者的观点1 越来越多的人将成为环保主义者

2政府将采取更多的措施政善环境（take more meas- ures)

担心者的观点大量的树木仍将被政伐（cut down) 私家车将越来越多(more private cars)

我的观点我对未来感到乐观(feel optimistic about our future ) —些发达国家在环保方面做得很好（some developed countries have already done well in)

我们也能做到（make)

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Our Environment in Ten Years： for Better or Worse?

Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. They think there will be more environmentalists in the future. What's more, our government will take more measures to protect the environment. So they are sure that our future will be better.

However, others are pessimistic. They think trees will still be cut down by people. Besides, with the development of our society, there will be more private cars in our life. Thus the environment will be even worse than it is now.

In my opinion, I feel optimistic about our environment in ten years. Because some developed countries have already do well in the protection of their environment. We can also make it.

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Different students have different opinions for the activity "Soccer Enters School” .

Some students in my class think this activity is good for them. It can make them healthier and stronger. It also makes their spare time rich and colorful. Especially for some students, they may have a chance to become professional soccer players. Other students think this activity will waste their time and get in the way of their study. Sometimes it's dangerous. They may get hurt when they are playing soccer. What's more,it's hard to become a professional soccer player.

In my opinion,I think this activity is good for us. It will make more students love soccer. 【高分范文】

Different Ideas on True Man Shows

Different students have different ideas on true man shows.

Most of them think the shows are relaxing, funny and have a lot of stars. They can not only know more about stars5 daily life but also learn many cool games through the shows. However, a few students hold the opposite view. They think it^s not good for our study and health to spend too much time watching TV. Besides，there’re too many ads in shows，which is a waste of time.

In my opinion, we can choose to watch some good and healthy true man shows, which can make us relaxed and learn something from them, such as teamwork spirit;