英语作文：军训经历

Our Military Training

高一10班李荷

The day，when military training（军训）begin，finally arrived at last.Different people have different opinions on it. Some of students thinks that it’s unnecessary to be trained like soldiers. But in my opinion, as it does good to（对...有益）us, it is essential(有必要的) .

During the week, we had to learn some new things like military drill（军操）which spent a few hours on that every day and made us really tired. Luckily, our instructor（指导者）gave us help when we made mistakes patiently（耐心地）. In addition, the food there was not very good. What was worse，we had to wash our clothes by ourselves as there was no washing machine. However, all difficulties we have experienced helped us shape ourselves into（使……成为）people that are more independent. And my parents thought I have grown up after that.

Generally（概括地）speaking,military training can not only build

up our body but also strengthen our character（性格）. More importantly,

the training can lets us learn how to face difficulty when we are in trouble. At the same time, we can be taught to take responsibility for（为……负责）what we have done as well.

点评：军训有感，军训生活是每个人一生难忘的经历。这篇作文描写了军训生活，这里有苦涩也有甜味，每一种味道都让作者难忘。本文是一篇叙事类的记叙文，采用了总分总的结构方式，首尾照应，中心突出，截取了几个片段，层次分明，条理清晰，语言通顺流畅，用词准确，紧密联系实际生活，真实可信，表达了小作者的真情实感。