英语书面表达之建议信
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书面表达如何写? 书面表达如何写?
三 个 步 骤
Step 1 List the key points
Step 2 Make sentences
Step3. Form a passage and polish
为了迎接即将到来的期末考试,你校要取消所有的体 育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信,建议 不要取消体育课。 注意:1. 词数:120左右; 2. 文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Headmaster, I’m writing to express my views concerning our school’s decision that all physical education should be cancelled.
写作模板
模板一: 模板一: Dear _____, You have asked me for my advice about_____(问题 , and I will 问题), 问题 try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议内容 建议内容). 建议内容 I hope you’ll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to Discuss this matter with you about further details. Good luck with your ____(祝愿 祝愿). 祝愿 Yours sincerely, Li Ming
常用套语
A.建议信开头常用句式
(照应材料 表明写作意图 照应材料,表明写作意图 照应材料 表明写作意图)
1.After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry . to know that … 2.I am very glad to hear that you want to… . 3.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter . 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5. I am writing to share some advice with you. 6. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about English learning.
书面表达( 书面表达(三)
----A letter of giving advice
写作要点: 写作要点: 1.建议信:作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 建议信: 建议信 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象: 对象: 1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点; 2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading 整 体 三 部 分 3. Ending 2. Body
一
4. 注意事项: 注意事项:
1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出 ) 建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力 2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、 ) 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议。 3)符合英文信件的基本格式 )
B. 表达建议(body) 表达建议( )
1.first,firstly,secondly….then,after that,in the end.finally.Meanwhile, what’s more... 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. You may consider doing… 6. I would seem to me that you could… 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
3. 基本框架: 基本框架:
开头( 开头(beginning)---- 开门见山,向对方陈 ) 述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 主体 明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence) 结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头,重申观点(restate 结尾 your opinion.)
模板二: 模板二:
Dear _____(对象 , 对象), 对象 I am writing to express my views concerning ______(问题 问题). 问题 First and for the most _______(建议一 建议一); 建议一 in addition_____(建议二 建议二); 建议二 what’s more _____(建议三 建议三). 建议三 I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
• • • • •
注意衔接词使用: 注意衔接词使用 表先后次序: 表先后次序: First, second, third….Finally Firstly, secondly,…eventually , to begin with/ to start with, at last
• 递进关系: furthermore;moreover; not 递进关系: ; ; only...but also...; not...but...;, besides; in ; ; ; other words;on the one hand...,on the ; , other hand...; meanwhile; at the same ; ; time; ;
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C.建议信结尾常用句式 建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.