【英语】 中考英语书面表达达标检测卷(有答案)1

【英语】中考英语书面表达达标检测卷（有答案）1

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．（题文）书面表达

在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：

1. 定时做饭、洗衣服；

2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；

3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）

假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。

要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；

2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）

3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时

emergency 紧急情况

ccompany sb. 陪伴某人

Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.

I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing e xercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.

I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future 等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的

最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．书面表达

“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所给要点,写

一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；

2.遵守交通规则；

3.公共场合不大声喧哗；

4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）

参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For

example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。

提示：1. 体育锻炼

2. 上下楼梯

3. 交朋结友

4. 食品卫生