高考英语写作辅导

“覆盖了所有的内容要点”，因此找点是写
好短文的第一步。 同时，也要审好人称、时态和文体。
记叙文写作
• 3. 记叙文常包含三个主要部分， 开头段(beginning)：交代时间、地 点、人物、事件等(when, where, who and how)； 主体段(body)：讲述故事的情节 (what) 结尾段(ending)：故事结局 是对全文进行归纳、总结，或思想 提升．
•1.优秀学生，精,泛结合，学习词汇, 理解语法。泛读是扩展词汇最有效的 方法之一 2.在检测题中滚动学习词汇：词形转 换 、词语释意和辨析、英汉互译、 选词填空、书面表达等。
代词
• Jim sold most of his things. He has hardly _____ left in the house.
There are great changes that have happened here. There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side of the road before. But there is a big library now. There are all kinds of books,
某城市街头雕塑
本文的写源自文库特点：
• 1） 由表及里，挖掘主题， • After observing the sculpture carefully, I can see… • From the sculpture, I can see… • 2）立意积极，理由充分。 • 立意角度: I think the sculpture wants to tell us that we should make a good combination of the two cultures . • 3）自圆其说，符合逻辑。 • 能根据自己的理解，阐明主题。
开放作文
The picture above shows a man without ears.
I think ears are important for us to hear. Without ears can’t communicate with others and couldn’t get any advice.
As can be seen in the picture, there is an old lady. But turn the picture upside down, it turns out to be a young princess. What a fantastic picture! So keep an optimistic mood to everything, you’ll find something better and wonderful. For example, if you failed in an exam, don’t be so upset. Try to think about it from another direction. This failure will remind you in next exam so that you won’t make the same mistake. So try to be an optimistic person and think things from different views. Then you’ll find that impossible is nothing. (13分)
I do agree to the plan. I think that with more traditional festivals added to the public holidays list, the awareness of Chinese traditional culture will be raised, especially among the young generation, who knows much about Christmas Day but little about DragonBoat Festival and so on.
问题
• 没有涉及图的内容。
• 说明部分逻辑不清。议论与 说明脱节。 • 没有展开议论，内容欠丰富。
As we can see from the picture. An old man has a big nose and his hair is so long that cover his ear. So he couldn’t hear sound. He must be too poor to cut his hair. If I were you, I would earn money and cut my hair at once.
newspapers and magazines in the library. There is a new playground in the front of the school. There are many trees in and around the school….
• …Quite a few changes have taken place here. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building—our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you’ll come and see it for yourself some day.
Exercise:
---Will $ 200 ______ the cost of the damage?
---I’m afraid not. I need at least 100 more dollars. A. resemble B. include C. cover D. afford
cover:(of money)be enough for sth
• The Chinese government is considering carrying out a new public holiday plan that cancels May Day---golden week holiday and adds three traditional festivals----Tomb-Sweeping Day, Dragon-Boat Festival and the MidAutumn Festival. Do you agree to the plan? State at least two reasons.
• A few days later, while the Johns were working in the field, a strong wind suddenly attacked their cabins. Without the protection of the huge tree, the old cabin was blown down at once. The same went for the other one as soon as a terrible roar went into John’s ears. They were so terrified that they screamed and cried. However， the trunk, which was left beside the two cabins was still standing straight.
• 北京市十一学校学生习作： • Story of a Tree • Once there was a family living in a cabin under a huge tree. There are many strong winds in the area where they lived. However, the huge tree, which almost covered the whole roof, seemed to be a protection of the little cabin. It was a sunny day, John, the host of the cabin, came out with an axe and started to cut down the huge tree in order to build another cabin for themselves. The tree which used to be thick and bushy was cut into parts immediately, some for the frame and others for the roof. With the help of his wife, John finally finished his job. There, a pretty
• 英 语书 面 表 达
高考作文分类

记叙文
提示议论文
•说明文 •应用文
• 写作高分标准： １）覆盖所有内容要点（及格标准）； ２）没有语法错误或少量的语法错误是因 为尝试应用了较高级的语法结构和词汇 ３）有效地使用了过渡连词，使全文结构 紧凑。
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• 高分作文评分标准的第一个要求就是
写作:仔细审题，找出内容要点,
开放作文
（15分）
开放作文
• 人称：第一、第三人称 • 时态：一般现在时 • 文体：说明文 • 要点：１．赞同或反对该计划； • ２．两个理由； ３．结论
学生的开放思维
• • • • 1. observe/celebrate more festivals 2. inherit the traditoin/culture 3. remove the pressure of transportation 4. be refreshed and more energetic after the short breaks • 5. use time wisely
高考英语写作辅导
1.原因表达法
owing to thanks to because of due to on account of
2．例词分析
cover (Unit ９ A Helping Hand)
*This allowance, however, is only enough to cover the most foundamental needs such as food and clothing.
• A. anything B. everything • C. nothing D. something
hardly anything = almost nothing
区分度很好的试题：
１. Some people waste a lot of food _____ others in the world haven’t enough to eat. A. after B. when C. as D. while