高考【概要写作话题训练】科技发展

高分范文
The text mainly talks about flying RC model planes(要点 1)What‘s more, trying a battery-operated plane is the first choice to carry out because it is easy to handle(要点 2)When you’re engaged in your test flight, you may ask an experienced friend to accompany you in order to protect the plane better. (要点3)When it comes to some stunts, it's essential to understand that this hobby is exciting enough to delight you.(要点4)(71 words)
语篇解读 本文是一篇说明文。如果你第一次操纵飞机模型,最好用电池驱动的 飞机模型。在操控实践过程中,为避免事故的发生,尽可能邀请有这 方面经验的朋友参加。
难句解读
If you are taking up flying for the first time, it isrecommended that you go in for a battery-operated model 译文:如果你是第一次学着操纵飞行器,建议你选择电池驱动的 飞机模型分析:这是一个主从复合句。if引导条件状语从句,主 句为itisrecommended that'句式,that引导主语从句,该主语 从句中的谓语动词用到了虚拟语气,即“( should+)动词原形” 形
笔前点睛
★审题分析
1审写作要求:概要写作,文章属于说明文; 2.审人称口吻:以第三人称口吻进行概括叙述; 3审时态:以一般现在时为主; 4审写作要点 ①挖掘主题- flying RC model planes ②阐述重点 Carrying out a battery-operated plane is the first choice for people ③说明现象 When you want to join in your test flight, you can invite an experienced friend to go with you. ④现象结论 The purpose of doing this is to protect plane better ⑤要点提升t' s essential to understand that this hobby is exciting enough to delight you
Once you are well skilled in flying battery-operated model planes, you can also graduate to gasoline-powered planes. These planes also can be controlled by remote control and their distinct motor sound gives flying a more realistic touch of being in the early 1900‘ s as compared to an electric motor, which is silent So, whichever plane you fly, it is essential that you get familiar with the remote control to enable your model lane to obey your commands and keep crashes to a minimum. Over time you will be able to make your plane form difficult and death defying stunts without any fear. So, take some action now. Get that RC model air plane and take to the skies with your feet planted firmly on the ground.
高级词块句型
重要短语 talk about讨论,谈论 carry out执行,实行 engaged in从事 When it comes to当提到 delight sb使某人快乐
高级句型1. What's more, trying a battery-operated plane is the first choice to carry out because it is easy to handle( because引 导原因状语从句)2. When you're engaged in your test flight, you may ask an experienced friend to accompany you in order to protect the plane better.(when引导时间状语从句, in order to protect the plane better作目的状语)3. When it comes to some stunts it's essential to understand that this hobby is exciting enough to delight(When引导时间状语从句,that引导宾语从句)
familiar to可表示 “为……所熟悉”,即 well known to sb; often seenor heard 如: English is familiar to me.英语为我所熟悉
文章来源 文章来源本文选自英文网站www.streetdirectory,com,原文标题为 “ Start Flying RC Model Airplanes”《试飞用遥控器操控的飞机 模型》,作者 Genge如语篇解读
Once you have assembled(组装) your model plane, it is time for a test flight You can call an experienced friend who has much flying experience. That would help you in avoiding costly mistakes and your model plane will be saved from the reduced crashing experience. You can take it to your garden or any other empty plot of land for your first flight. If the ground is smooth, you could make it takeoff from there or you can even make it take off with one person holding the plane and then leaving it gently. Once you get the hang of it, you can then proceed to do some stunts(特技) like flying loops, rolls and inverted flight The joy of learning something new will keep your interest alive in this hobby
语言点津: familiar with与 familiar to辨析
familiar with常可表示 1.“熟悉的”,即 having a good knowledge of sth; 2. 友好的,过分亲密的,不拘礼节的”,即 friend and informa am quite familiar with her poetry.我很熟悉她的诗作 | am Don't be too familiar with him he's a dishonestman.别与他 交往过密,他这人不诚实。
语境演练
阅读短文,根据其内容写Hale Waihona Puke Baidu篇60词左右的内容概要
Some experts argue the fact that almost one in four teens is constantly online is a dangerous thing, yet I believe that it's an opportunity Technology brings us closer together and can help us in everyday life rather than replacing friends with screens
【概要写作话题训练1】 科技发展
科技发展
主题语境:科技发展关键词: RC model airplane语篇类型:事物介 绍短文词数:324语篇难度:★★★★建议时间:23mins 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
If you are taking up flying for the first time, it isrecommended that you go in for a battery-operated modelplane Gasoline-powered models require an expert handbattery-powered planes are quite easy to setup and operate. You will need to buy a model plane withits matching remote control(RC)to enable you to start,control and land your model plane
思路点拨
1.从文章第一段第一句 If you are taking up flying for first time, it is recommended that you go in for a battery-operated model plane.可简明扼要地概括全篇所要表达的主题
2.第二、三段是对第一段内容的诠释与阐述,详实补充了主题要点。
First, I believe that technology takes the embarrassment out of face-to-face contact， as talking to someone may make you uncomfortable. You could not say what is on your mind. A much simpler way of communicating is through texts. By texting a person there is no resistance (抵抗)to what you are trying to say. You are able to revise your words before you send them, hopefully not saying something you will later regret or that could hurt someone s feelings. Apart from making friends face-to-face, there are other ways of interaction using technology. Technology can help bond people together by showing similar interests
3根据最后一段的首句So, whichever plane you fly,itisessential that you get familiar with the remote control toenable your model plane to obey your commands andkeep crashes to a minimum.等信息综合分析,全面的概括水到渠成。
精彩点评
1.本篇概要写作逻辑性强,自然流畅,结构清晰,层次分明。 2大胆地使用了一些高级词汇。如 talk about、 carry out、 beengaged in、 accompany、 delight sb等。 3承接词语的使用也极具色彩,如what' s more、 when it comes to等。 4运用了一些让人耳目一新的高级句式使整篇文章生辉增艳。 如 because引导的原因状语从句,when引导的时间状语从句, in order to protect the plane better的目的状语,that引导 的宾语从句等。