GRE作文如何准备GRE高分考生告诉你

GRE作文如何准备GRE高分考生告诉你

GRE的高分考生的背后都有着自己的殷勤付出和积累，只有努力才会有回报。两次备考GRE的韩春晓同学有着她独特的来分享给大家。

GRE作文如何准备GRE高分考生告诉你

我也很庆幸遇到了新东方骆彦伟老师，他的课堂节奏快，在课下我整理出了一大本笔记(自己整理笔记为个人习惯，其实老师的讲义就是非常条理清晰的，结构设计得一目了然，上课要及时补充就能快速学习)。按照老师的分类题材，多刷机经，在考场上就不会有陌生的题目。特别说一下小作文，一定要按照老师的方法总结不同类型的逻辑错误及其特征，时间充裕的同学一定确保把题库刷一遍，甚至多遍。大作文我也是刷了一整套题库，不用每篇都写，但是一定要每一篇都有自己的思路和相应素材，然后着重练习新东方点题班上的重点题目。最重要的是提高打字速度，在备考的过程中要多动手，写思路也尽量用电脑打，就可以一举两得。个人认为，要想得高分就一定要有充分的说理和举例。

只要时间久，铁杵磨成针。不论是多难的东西，只要自己下功夫，努力的去学习理解，就可以在最后收获。

GRE高分作文的写作结构

In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports(swimming,boating,and fishing)among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however,and the city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water sports is,therefore,sure to increase.The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year's budget to reverside recreational facilities.

这个题目应该算基础类了，首先找结论，然后依次去看指出原因或者前提，再倒上去分析。

这题作者的结论就是：The city government should for that reason devote more money in

this year's budget to reverside recreational facilities.

得出这个结论是基于这样几个前提：

前提1：居民更喜欢水上运动，证据：Survey

前提2：河水利用率低是由于水质问题，证据：居民的抱怨

前提3：river usage is sure to increase，因为do the river clean up

从新GRE写作满分范文来看，整篇文章结构明朗，每段结构也很清晰。传统的5段式，3个反驳点。

首段：While it may be true that the Mason City government ought to devote more money to riverside recreational facilities, this author's argument does not make a cogent case for increased resources based on river use.指出结论以及作者的文章逻辑证明存在问题，没有其它多余的废话。

第二段:Citing surveys of city residents, the author reports city resident's love of water sports先写作者如何认为，然后写自己的反驳，质疑Survey的准确性，加举例，连用了自己的3个假设进行反驳。最后还加上觉得怎样才算好的论证。

第三段：Additionally, the author implies that residents do not use the river for swimming,boating,and fishing,despite their professed interest,because the water is polluted and smelly.也是先写作者观点(包括他文中的隐含意思或前提);接着自己的反驳+进一步展开;最后能加上认为可行的论证建议是最好的了，这样不会一味批判到底，段内结构更完整。

第四段：Building upon the implication that residents do not use the river due to the quality of the river's water and the smell, the author suggests that a river clean up will result in increased river usage.上一段先批他前提2有问题，再表示即使前提2对，前提3也有问题，这样就是逻辑结构更好。

分了If the river's water quality and smell result from problems which can be cleaned, this may be true和If the quality and aroma results from the natural mineral deposits in the water or surrounding rock,this may not be true.结构相当紧密完整;最后一句再次强调作者的论证问题。

结尾：和开头呼应，强调结论可能正确，作者的论证有问题(paraphrase)

所以，发现结论、前提(包括隐含前提)、证据和理出作者的写作思路很重要很重要，其中隐含的意思也要能够读懂。对主结论的把握、(小)结论的辨识也要弄明白。