2020高中英语新高考：读后续写高分作文方法指导(以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例)

读后续写高分作文的写作方法指导

（以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例）

2020江苏省丰县中学上课讲义

正文指导

版本一：

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness.Jane looked around blankly,a shiver of alarm going through her.Soon the full moon rose,large,round and clear,shining in the deep blue.

“Why not pick stones from the stream and make them in the form of SOS?”cried Jane excitedly,determined to save herself independently.Having finished it,she felt

so exhausted and slept beside the stones.T omorrow will be another day.

It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Birds were chirping,the branches swaying to the rhythm of the wind,and the leaves fluttering like graceful butterflies.A ray of hope rose naturally in her heart.Suddenly,the buzzing of the helicopter came overhead again.It did

saw her waving yellow blouse and most important the SOS.Upon its landing,so thrilled was she that she threw herself at T om and hugged him tightly,tears of joy welling up in their eyes.

“I miss you so much.Have you found the spot?”

“Yes,in our heart.”

版本二：

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.The trees cracked and groaned in the dark.A thrill of alarm came through Jane.Eventually,she determined on spotting

an open area,awaiting another helicopter.She stumbled her way through the horrible forests and climbed to a high place.No time to waste.After she flagged her yellow blouse,Jane sank to

the ground,anguished and defeated.Gazing at the sky,Jane recalled T om and tears blurred her eyes.T errified as she was,she fell fast asleep in the wild.

It was daybreak when Jane woke up.And,as luck would have it,a helicopter just came by! Jane yelled and skipped,waving her yellow blouse.T o her great joy,the helicopter noticed her

and landed.What astounded her most was that it was T om who sat in the helicopter!Out rushed

T om.A huge smile spread across Jane's face and the couple hugged tightly for a long time.It was the narrow escape that made Jane perceive that love was priceless.Over the next years,a change came over the couple.Reasoned discussion replaced fierce arguments and politeness replaced contrariness.They treasured the life and love more.

结论是：

1.首先要找到conflict在哪里，然后最多五句话说清楚solution。解决方案不包括心情和环境描写。第一篇昨天文章里已经分析过，下面只说第二篇：

Solution:She stumbled her way through the horrible forests and climbed to a high place.

a helicopter just came by.

Out rushed Tom.

看起来就非常简单，无非就是：找空地失败；天亮飞机又来了；夫妇重逢。

2.其次围绕solution，进行心情和环境描写的铺垫，以上两篇都是非常好的例子。第一篇昨天已

经分析过，第二篇的分析：

第一段：

环境描写烘托恐惧：The trees cracked and groaned in the dark.A thrill of alarm came through Jane.

心情描写：Jane sank to the ground,anguished and defeated.Gazing at the sky,Jane recalled T om and tears blurred her eyes.Terrified as she was,she fell fast asleep in the

wild.

第二段：

心情描写：A huge smile spread across Jane's face and the couple hugged tightly for a long time.

但这篇的结尾太多的议论不合适，需要大胆舍弃部分，这样也不会超出太多的字数。

实战：（衡水中学四月联考卷）