2019年高中英语Unit7The-Sea--写作园地-如何写景点观光(报告)北师大版必修3(含答案
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2019年高中英语Unit7The-Sea--写作园地-如何写景点观光(报告)北师大版必修3(含答案)
[范文]
Dear_Sarah,
Thank_you_for_your_letter_asking_abou t_the_rebuilt_Qianmen_Street._Here_is_som ething_about_it.
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years. ①Along this 800meter street, there are more than 300 shops. ②As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian'anmen Square, it's very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17,69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.③Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I'm sure you'll like it.
Yours,
Li_Hua [技法讨论]
景点观光报告的写作可按以下步骤进行:
1.依照报告的题头格式,写出报告的收件人和发件人,报告日期和写作主题。
2.正文一般由以下四部分组成:
①总体介绍该景点的基本情况,如:所处位置以及面积大小等;
②介绍该景点好的方面;
③指出该景点所存在的问题;
④最后得出结论,总结说明该景点哪些地方值得游览,哪些地方不值得游览,并提出注意事项。
[黄金表达]
1. 总体方面
①...is situated/located in/on/at...
②...belongs to the first class
preserved area.
2. 优点方面
①It has convenient transportation and beautiful views.
②...a wonderful and splendid landscape with a cultural heritage.
③...a feast for your eyes and takes your breath away.
3. 存在方面
①...heavy traffic and crowded people in peak season with long queues and little parking lot...
②...restau rant or café offers expensive and terrible food.
4. 总结概括
①It is a great place to go and you are sure to end up enjoying yourself.
②Please go to..., especially to see...;
however don't go to...
[亮点分析]
亮点一:本文作者行文流畅,表达地道,词汇丰富,句式多变,衔接自然,语气亲切可信,语言准确而有依据。
亮点二:本文使用了①there be句型;③定语从句,简单句与复合句交替使用,使文章显得错落有致,这点不仅使文章在形式上增加了美感,而且使文章读起来朗朗上口。
亮点三:本文恰当使用了②in the center of, to the south of, be convenient,③not only...but also, a truly Chinese way of life 等短语,提升了文章档次。
[类文演练]
假设你是一名导游,陪同某外国旅游团参观八达岭长城。
车到达长城脚下,下车前你对大家作必要的介绍和交代。
主要包括:
1.简单介绍八达岭长城(长城已被评选
为世界新七大奇迹之一,八达岭长城是万里长城最著名的一段,已接待中外游人逾千万);
2.在长城逗留两个半小时,17:50离开;
3.车在长城脚下等候,记住车号,准时返回;
4.贵重物品随身携带,下车前关上车窗;
5.祝大家玩得愉快。
注意:1.必须包括以上所有的内容要点,但不要逐句翻译;
2.词数:100个左右。
Here is the Great Wall. ___________________________________
_________________________________________ _________________________________________ ____________________________________
_________________________________________ _________________________________________ ____________________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________ ____________________________________
_________________________________________ _________________________________________ ____________________________________ [联想词汇]
1. 众所周知_________________________________________ __
答案:it is known to us that/as is known to us all
2. 世界新七大奇迹之一_________________________________
答案:one of the New Seven Wonders of the World
3. 到目前为止________________________________________ 答案:so far/up to now
4. 数以百万的_________________________________________ 答案:millions of
5. 两个半小时_________________________________________ 答案:two hours and a half/two and a half hours
6. 也就是说________________________________________ 答案:that is to say/in other words
7. 下车_________________________________________ ____
答案:get off
8. 玩得愉快_________________________________________ 答案:have a good time
[连词成句]
1. 众所周知,八达岭是长城最著名的一段,长城已成为世界新七大奇迹之一。
____________,Badaling is the most famous part of the Great Wall, which has become one of the New Seven Wonders of the World.
____________ Badaling is the most famous part of the Great Wall, which has become one of the New Seven Wonders of the World.
____________ Badaling is the most famous part of the Great Wall, which has become one of the New Seven Wonders of the World.
答案:As is known to us all; It is known to us all that; What is known to us all is that
2. 到目前为止,已经有数百万的游客游览
了长城。
____________,millions of visitors have visited the Great Wall.
____________,tens of thousands of visitors have visited the Great Wall.
答案:So far; Up to now
3. 也就是说,我们要在17:50离开。
____________, we'll leave at 17:50.
____________, we'll leave at 17:50.
答案:That is to say; In other words
4. 请随身携带贵重物品,在下车前关闭所有的窗户。
Please take your valuables with you and ________________.
Please take your valuables with you and ________________.
答案:close all the windows before getting off; make sure all the windows are
closed before you get off
[连句成章]
_____________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _______________________________
_________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _____________
_________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _____________
答案:
Here is the Great Wall.
As is known to us all, Badaling is the most famous part of it, which has become one of the New Seven Wonders of the World. So far, millions of visitors have visited it. We'll stay here for two hours and a half. That is to say, we'll leave at 17:50. The bus will be waiting for us at the foot of the Great Wall. Please remember our bus number and be back on time. Please take your valuables with you and close all the windows before getting off.
Have a good time!。