中考英语作文讲解及训练

中考英语作文讲解及训

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Company Document number：WTUT-WT88Y-W8BBGB-BWYTT-19998

东方教育学科教师辅导讲义讲义编号SH2YY000015

Writing (作文): (共20分) （要求：把写作常用句型套入）

1 Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip.

提示：近来“爸爸去哪儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子一起共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至少给出两个理由。

Phrases for reference（以下短语仅供参考）

be located in/on/at famous for

share…with have interest in

（注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）

2 Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所

给情景写一篇不少于60词的短文）

Suppose there is an English Festival in your school every year. Some students think it helpful, but others don’t think so. What do you think, and why（假设你们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你的观点是什么并说明理由。

3 Write at least 60 words about the topic “I believe I can _____________”.(“以我

相信我能____________”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested points:

● What do you believe you can do

● Why do you think you can do that

● How will you do that

四．文章布局及句型选择。

A．开头

议论文开头

一）开头万能公式

1. 开头万能公式一：陈述话题。

把题目要求的话题陈述一遍（可以适当参考题目中引导性的句子），然后提出自己的观点。（1）……已成为人的关注的热门话题. 我认为……

______ has become a hot topic among people，As far as I am concerned,

(2)关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，而我认为……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to pers on. Some people say that

______，but in my opinion…

2．开头万能公式二：名人名言

如果没有相关名言，那就编。我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理！

A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）

更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

常用谚语：

7 抽烟不仅有害健康，而且浪费钱。（not only but also）

二、范文赏析

1.低碳生活：假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack

来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：1.节水节电；2.垃圾分类；3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇：低碳low ；纸巾

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life.

First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.

Best wishes,

Li Bing

三、家庭作业

Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景写一篇不少于60词的短文）

Suppose there is an English Festival in your school every year. Some students think it helpful, but others don’t think so. What do you think, and why（假设你

们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你

的观点是什么并说明理由。）

这里推荐大家采用一种行之有效的练习方法，就是模仿写作。

如果我们每次写作都在同一语言水平写，而不注意随时的积累，提高速度就会比较缓慢。

写作中重要的构成因素，除了语言以外，谋篇布局的逻辑其实是很重要的。如果从投入

产出上比较背诵范文和模仿写作，后者帮助提高的效果应该是更快些。因为后者比前者更

有针对性。你能通过写完之后的比较，更好的发现自己写作中或思维上的问题。但对于