【高考冲刺】2020届高考英语全国卷书面表达专项整合--建议信

建议信
一、词汇积累
1.给某人提建议 give sb. some advice（on）
2.如下as follows
3.在做某事时遇到困难have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
4.利用 make use of m
5.向某人征求意见ask sb. for advice
6.制定计划 make a plan
7. 认为……有用 find . . .helpful/useful/beneficial
8. 参加take part in/participate in
9. 听从某人的建议 follow one's advice
10. 把……考虑在内 take sth. into account/consideration
11. 得到改善 get improved
12. 有所好转 change for the better
13. 依我看来 in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view
14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你…… I have received your letter saying that you. . .
15. 我建议…… I would like to suggest that . . . /I would like to make
a recommendation that . . . /I am writing to advise you of . . . /If I were you, I would . . . /May I suggest that . . . /I would like to put forward the suggestion that . . .
二、句式积累
篇首：说明写信目的。

1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble... Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在……方面有困难。

这样的问题是很正常的。

可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。

2.1 have received your letter saying ... Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。

信上说……可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。

3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on …
我给你写信说明一下我对于……的一些想法。

4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to … and I will try to make some suggestions here.
关于……你询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。

5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于……下面是我的一些建议。

6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on...
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。

现在，关于……我写信给你几点建议。

篇中：介绍详情、提出具体建议。

1. I'd like to suggest that…
我想要建议……
2. In my opinion, ...
在我看来
3. If I were you, I would...
如果我是你，我会……
4. You'd better do.../not do...
你最好/最好不……
5. It's necessary for you to …
你有必要做……
6. First of all, … As is known to all, …What's more, … Last but no t least,…
首先，…… 众所周知，…… 还有，……最后但同样重要的是，……
篇尾：提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。

1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。

记住：有志者事竟成。

2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible" (—个决心要成
功的人从来不说"不可能"）.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。

记住：一个决心、要成功的人从来不说"不可能"。

3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。

我会非常高兴看到情况改善。

5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。

无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。

6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more
I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。

如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。

7. I hope you can take good consideration of my advice. I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。

我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。

三、例题练习
1、根据下面提示与要求，请以"Animals in Danger"为题，写一篇100词左右的英文短文。

简单说明原因，并就动物保护措施提出建议。

1.污染使许多动物生存的环境遭到破坏(destroy)。

2.乱砍滥伐(cut down)使许多动物失去家园。

3.许多动物被捕杀(hunt)而濒临灭绝。

4.针对以上的原因提出动物保护措施。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
2、假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Kate 即将完成学业,不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见,请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件:
1.建议他可以来中国工作
2. 阐述你的理由
3. 承诺可提供帮助
注意: 1. 词数100词左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可根据内容要点适当发挥,以使行文连贯。

Dear Kate,
I'm glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.
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3、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。

他向你咨询相关信息。

请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 推荐他上哪所大学;
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意:
1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 4、假如你是黄小明,你的外教Mr. Geller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养,正在书法、剪纸与象棋中选择,写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。

请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐内容及简要原因;
2.切实可行的学习建议;
3.祝福与希望。

注意:
1.词数:100词左右;
2.内容应包括以上要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:书法:calligraphy 剪
纸:paper-cutting 象棋:Chinese chess
Dear Mr. Geller,
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________
5、假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。

请你根据下列要点给他写封建议信:
1.参加中文学习班;
2.看中文书刊、电视节目;
3.学唱中文歌曲;
4.交中国朋友。

注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
_____________________________________________________________________ __________
_____________________________________________________________________ __________
_____________________________________________________________________ __________
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Yours,
Li Hua 6、最近，不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客的事件。

假设你是李华，请你就这一问题给某英文报社写一封建议信。

要点如下：
1. 没有受到威胁，大多数动物不会主动攻击别人；
2. 不要喂食或激怒动物；
3. ……
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:激怒irritate
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to behave themselves there.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
1答案：
Animals in Danger
As we know, a lot of animals are in danger now. Air and water are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live are destroyed. Besides, many trees are being cut down, making many animals lose their homes. What's worse, too many animals are hunted for money and are being killed without mercy so that some of them are in danger of dying out. In my opinion, something must be done now. Firstly, natural reserves should be set up to protect the animals. Secondly, all the illegal hunting should be punished. Thirdly, people should be made aware of the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way can we save the animals. To save the animals is to save ourselves.
2 答案：
Dear Kate,
I'm glad to have received the letter you sent me last week. I have been thinking about the question you asked me. From my point of view, you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies.
For one reason, China's development over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young. What's more, what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays. In fact, many big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you.
For another reason, China is a country with such different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. Why not come and join them? I'm sure you'll adapt to the environment
quickly. If you come, I will do what I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
3答案：
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
4答案：
Dear Mr. Geller,
You can’t imagine how overjoyed I am hearing about your plan! I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
As a big fan of Chinese calligraphy myself, I’ll recommend it without hesitation becau se it’s a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique. In order to learn it well, first and foremost, one
may need to devote himself/ herself to long hours of practice. Second, signing up for a calligraphy course would be a wise choice, which would help her study in a systematic way. Besides, it’d also be beneficial to study and imitate the works of famous calligraphers.
I do hope you’ll find my advice helpful. Best wishes for her future study!
Yours,
Huang Xiaoming
5 答案：
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teachers and practise with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese when possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
6 答案：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to be have themselves there.
Recently, there are often reports in the newspaper that visitors got hurt by the animals in the zoo. As we all know, most animals won’t attack
people unless they feel threatened. In most cases, visitors are hurt by animals when visitors are making some improper behaviour. Ifs obviously wrong that visitors irritate these animals, get too close to them or feed them without permission. Therefore, visitors sometimes should be responsible for these incidents because they don’t know how to get on
with animals.
I do hope visitors can keep in mind that they should obey the rules while in the zoo.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua。