往年高考英语应用文之-建议信

建议信

1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。

2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。

3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

篇章结构及内容：

首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。

结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。

(注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。)

A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1．After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that …

2．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter

3.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----

4. You have asked me for my advice with on…and I’ll try to make some suggestions.

5.I am writing to express my views concerning.....

B. 表达建议（body）

1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could …

2. I would like to suggest/recommend that…

3. If I were you, I wo uld…

4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.

5.I suggest that…

6. You would better do/ not do…

7. You may consider doing…

8. first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．．

C.建议信结尾常用句式

1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.

2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions

practical/useful/helpful.

3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.

模板:

Dear____,

You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here.

In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____.

I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I wou ld be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Good luck with you.

Yours,

XXX

历年考题:

(2017 北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.你建议的线路；

2.你的理由；

3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Jim,

I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

Yours

Li Hua

(2014年浙江卷书面表达)

学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。