高考英语概要写作-范文指导(共42张PPT)

Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. characteristics 忽略具体事例 detailed example
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
概要写作难点 1
• How to get the keyБайду номын сангаасpoints quickly and
correctly?
(如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
高考新题型
概要写作
Summary writing
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考 生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容 概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 (3)上下文的连贯性 (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）： contents 1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 (内容) 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 language skills (语言) 3. 完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.
You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. treasure spent much money on treat it kindly use it carefully
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要 结构紧凑 structure (结构)
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? （182W）
概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly? (如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)
近义词替换
1.Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. Some time ago; In the • ___________________,industrial goods past; Decades ago to be used for a long time were made _____________________. to function well for a long time; durable
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
topic sentence Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led characteristics directly to the “throw away society” which is a great result waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! detailed examples 忽略具体事例