2020年人教版高中英语必修三Unit1 写作指导及范文

2020年精编人教版英语资料

写作指导：Festivals

写作任务：

假如你是校英文杂志的编辑，以“Traditional or Western Festivals”为主题对全校同学进行了调查，调查结果显示：

70%的学生更青睐西方节日，圣诞节、愚人节、万圣节等在校园中都颇受欢迎。但同时，一些中国传统节日像腊八、重阳节及清明节等，在学生中的认同度并不高，甚至有不少学生表示对这些节日感到陌生。

请你根据以上的调查结果，以“Traditional or Western Festivals”为题，写一篇文章介绍调查结果，并谈谈你对此结果的看法，发表在校英文杂志上。词数：100左右。

写作指导：

本次写作任务要求同学们描述关于东西方节日受欢迎程度的一项调查，并就调查结果发表看法，属于议论文写作。文章内容可大致分为三段。

首段，点明本次写作的话题，以引出下文。本篇文章是要讨论学生看待东西方节日的差异，可以这样表达：The school magazine made / ran / did a survey of students’ opinions towards Western festivals and traditional Chinese festivals. / On students’ different attitudes towards Western festivals and traditional Chinese festivals, our school magazine conducted a survey.

文章的第二段应该客观地介绍调查结果。可以先介绍对西方节日的调查结果：According to the result of the survey, Western festivals are warmly welcomed by most students, such as ..., ... and ..., all of which are paid special attention to. / The result of the survey shows that some Western festivals, such as ... and ..., are celebrated by many students.然后介绍对中国节日的调查：Meanwhile, the result of the survey also shows that a large number of students don’t celebrate traditional Chinese festivals, like ... and ... Some students even said they never celebrated such strange festivals. / On the contrary, some traditional Chinese festivals don’t get so much attention. Many students even said they didn’t understand some festivals, such as ... and ...

最后一段，同学们应该就此调查发表看法，可以谈谈你赞成哪种观点，并说明理由：As for me, I like ... festivals because ...可探讨一下学生们青睐西方节日或不喜欢中国传统节日的原因，如受媒体宣传的影响或由于一些西方文化的介入：Why are there so many students who like / dislike ... festivals? In my opinion, that is because ...也可以阐述学生们青睐西方节日可能会带来的后果，如中国的一些传统文化将会慢慢消失：If more and more Chinese people prefer Western festivals, the traditional Chinese festivals may ...

范文一：

Traditional or Western Festivals

On students’ different attitudes towards Western festivals and Chinese festivals, our school magazine conducted a survey.

According to the result of the survey, Western festivals are warmly welcomed by most of the students, such as Christmas Day, April Fool’s Day and Halloween. However, some traditional Chinese festivals are given the cold shoulder. Many students eve n said they didn’t understand some festivals, such as Laba and Qingming Festival.

As for me, I always celebrate traditional Chinese festivals, rather than Western festivals. For one thing, I can learn more stories, legends and customs about China. For another, I do hope that the outstanding culture of China will become more popular.

教师点评：

本篇习作开篇用一句话交代了写作的话题，简明扼要。第二段使用了“according to”,“such as”和“however”作连接词，介绍了调查结果，使文章语句连贯、富有逻辑性。最后一段，文章交代了作者通常会庆祝中国传统节日而非西方节日，并说明这样做的理由，使之更有说服力。

范文二：

Traditional or Western Festivals

Recently, the school magazine conducted a survey of students’ opinions towards Western festivals and traditional Chinese festivals.

The result of the survey shows that some Western festivals, such as Christmas