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小作文结构

开头段1-2句转述原题

主体段1 1+X句每个主体段第一句话概括本段，X句介绍数字…

主体段N

结尾段1-2句第一句介绍总数total（如果没有就不写），第二句作结论开头段

时态：一般现在时

替换词

proportion/ percentage information/ data number/ figures family/ household males/ men females/ women influence/ affect(v.) effect(n.) categories/ kinds/ types demand/ need subway/ underground railway store/ shop university/ college

show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate

国家的替换（如美国，英国等）

主体段

时态：由题目的时间决定

1.数据按顺序介绍，不要跳跃

2.4类关键数据：maximum最大值，minimum最小值，trend变化趋势，intersection

交叉点（线图）

3.

第一句，由图可见：

As can be seen from the table that…

It ca n be seen from the table that…

We can see from the table that…

According to the xx chart, …

It is interesting to note that…

Noticeably, (Interestingly)

第二句，具体来说：

To be more specific, … = more specifically

To be more exact, … = more exactly

替换词

上升

increased/ an increase rose/ a rise

急剧上升

rocketed (boomed) a rocket (a boom)

下降

dropped/ a drop decreased/ a decrease reduced / a reduction 急剧下降

slumped a slump

持平

stabilized remained / maintained / stayed stable / constant / steady 波动

fluctuated a fluctuation

最高点

peaked at reached the highest point at (as high as) 最低点

reached the bottom at

速度快/慢

rapid rapidly/ slow slowly

幅度大/小

significant significantly/ gradual gradually/ steady steadily/ slight slightly

大约：about/ around/approximately / just over/ just under

到达某个数量

reached/ stood at / arrived at

预期值（将来时间必须用这个写）

A is expected/ predicted / estimated / projected to reach …

分别respectively

占比accounted for/ made up/ represented the percentage of / was responsible for / provided

一些例句：

As can be see n from the graph, the number of … fluctuated during the period of … . As can be seen from the graph, there was a slight rise in the number of *** from *** to ***

The period between *** and *** experienced a slight rise of …, with the number reaching ***.

It can be seen from the chart that *** accounted for the greatest proportion of ***

As for other categories, …

After that, an opposite trend occurred.

The highest … was A, followed by…

结尾段

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the table that …

流程图

The proc ess diagram illustrates in *** stages how …由图可见

In the first stage(picture, period), … / Initially,

In the next step, …

After that(Next/ Then), …

Finally, … (the whole cycle starts over again.)

追加描述

at this stage/ at this point/ as the diagram shows Ther efore, the process diagram clearly shows that …