2006高考英语满分作文天津卷
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天津卷
[作文真题]
假设你是李华,在出国交流学习期间,到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影,但在观影过程中发现了一些问题,请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。
1.因广告过多,影片放映晚点;
2.影片播放音量过大
3.安全出口标识不明,存在安全隐患;
4.适当结尾。
注意:(1)词数:80~120;(2)可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;(3)信的开头已为你写好(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:安全出口exit 安全隐患poterltial safety hazard
Dear Manager
I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday.I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but
COMPOSITION ONE
Dear Manager,
rm an exchange student from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good,but I found some small problems that took away flrom my enjoyment of the film.
First,there were so many advertisements before the film that the actual film staned quite late. During the film itself,I found that the volume was so loud.it made me un. comfortable,and it became difficult to hear the film clearly.
Lastly,I noticed that the exit sign was not at aIl visible,and I feel this puts eve ryone’s safety at risk by not allowing them to find their way out of the cinema clearly and quickly.Safety should always come first,and I think if you can't correct the other two problems,you should
correct this one.
Thank you for your time,and I hope to see more movies in your cinema in the future,and find more comfort and convenience.
Sincerely,
Li Hua COMPOSITION TWO
Dear Manager,
I'm an exchange student from China,and recently visited your cinema to see a film.The film itself was great,but it seemed there were a few small problems while the film was underway.Although the problems are not big,I do believe that if you can solve them,you may attract a larger audience.
First,I found that there were too many advertisements before the beginning of the film,which delayed the film’s start by a long time.I found these advertisements to be very annoying.
Second,the sound in the film was too loud,and it made it very difficult to hear the film clearly.
Third,the EXIT sign was not clearly visible,and I feel this creates a safety hazard for customers.If anything terrible happened,it might be very difficult for your customers to evacuate.
Although I'm only a visitor to your city,I hope you can consider these problems and find a way to solve them.
Yours truly,
Li Hua COMPOSITION THREE
Dear Manager,
I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday,1 went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I found a few small problems. First and most important,the EXIT sign was not clearly visible.I feel that safety should be the most important,and this small problem could cause some serious problems in the case of an accident.
Second,the film was so loud that we could not hear it clearly.It made it difficuIt to fully enjoy the movie,and there were many things I could not understand because of this.
Last,there were so many advertisements before the movie started that it kept me waiting for 15 minutes.Is it possible to use less advertising so people don,t become impatient before trying to enjoy the film?
After saying all this,I feel I should also say I enjoyed the experience very much.and I thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
Sincerely,
Li Hua COMPOSITON FOUR
Dear Manager,
I'm a Chinese exchange student studying at a local school in your city.I recently went to your cinema to view a film,and although the film was great,I found that there were some points I'd like to share,that could use improving.
First.I found that the sound was much too loud to be able to hear the film clearly.Although my understanding of English is very good.I found it difficult to understand the film because of the volume.
Second,the EXIT sign was not visible,and I feel that a small problem could create a very large disaster in the case of an emergency.This would be a very easy problem to solve.
Last,but not least,I found that the amount of advertising before the film started,was just too much.Fifteen minutes is a long amount of time to sit through advertising.and I could feel everyone around becoming very impatient.
With all this in mind.it would take little thought and a few good measures to create a cinema that will attract many more people.With that said.I must tell you that aside from the above,I enjoyed my experience very much.
Thank you,
Li Hua COMPOSITION FIVE
To Whom It May Concern:
I'm a new exchange student who recently arrived from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to view a film.and I found the film to be great.Although I enjoyed the film.I found there were a few problems that
made me unhappy.
First,the film began quite late because of the number of advertisements before the film had started.Second,the volume was so loud that I couldn’t hear clearly.Tllird,the EXIT sign couldn’t be seen clearly,and may create some hidden danger,that may prevent people from exiting safely.
I hope that you can find some time to try to fix these problems.and I feel that you will attract a much larger audience as a result.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Manager,
I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday.1 went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First,the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning.It was rather annoying.Second.t11e sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly bear it.Third,the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly,which presented potential safety hazards.And if something terrible should happen,it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city,I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema.I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Passage 07(08天津):假设20XX年2月12日是你父亲的生日,下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。
请根据图示,用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事,并谈谈自己的感受。
图一:你在回家的地铁上,设想着父亲看见礼物时的情景图二:到了下一站,一位年长的妇女提着许多东西上了车图三:约一分钟后,你主动给她让座,她说了一句“谢谢”。
February 12th, 2008
How much joy I have received today!
Today is my f ather’s birthday. I got up early and searched stores in the entire town to buy an ideal present for my dear father. Finally, I sat back in a subway train with a beautifully designed tie, almost exhausted but happy and proud. Imaging that father would appreciate it with a big smile, I felt as if I was at the top of the world. At the moment, the train stopped. There came an old woman lifting many things, tired and helpless. I thought as a student, helping the old was my duty. A minute later, I offered my seat to the old woman without hesitation. Her face was lit up with happiness and she said “thank you” to me.
Helping people who was in need of help was everyone’s duty. Only in this way can we set up a move beautiful society. Well goes an old saying,“Where there is a willing hand, there is a warmth.”Sometimes it is just such little things that will make a big difference. So we are supposed to get ready to provide help at any time.。