英语摘要中的正确用词

搭配不当 原译：Physicians should increase the awareness of diffuse panbronchiolitis so that the disease can be recognized and treated early . 中文：临床医师应提高对弥漫性泛细支气管炎的警 觉，以便对该病能及时识别和进行治疗。 修改： increase the awareness应该为 enhance their awareness . 原译：Objective： To evaluate the diagnostic value of MRI on twins and their abnormalities . 中文：目的：评价 MRI对胎儿双胎和双胎畸形的诊 断价值。 修改： evaluate: calculate the value of To evaluate the value这种同族词的搭配显 得很别扭，应将 To evaluate换成 To assess .
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原译：Reasonable scan and careful
observation are helpful to avoid the missing of lesions and improve the diagnostic accuracy . 中文：合理的扫描方法和细致的观察有助于 减少漏诊，提高诊断的准确性。 修改：Reasonable scan应改为 Reasonable scanning( Scan是抽象名词， 动名词 scanning有扫描操作、 扫描方法之 类的意思 ).
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原译：A model of ischemia reperfusion
with MRI can be set up by using this method. It lays a foundation to further study. 改正： . . . It lays a foundation for further study.
语义不当 原译：Combination of 1H MRS with MRI can make the number of accuracy cases of localization diagnosis improved to 13 .
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中文：1H MRS与 MRI结合可使定位诊断 的准确病例数提高到 13例。 修改： improved to 13应改为 raise to 13 ( improve意为改善、增进，数量的 提高应当用 raise或 increase。 ).
bodies aspiration异物吸入 were examined by using multislice spiral CT . 改正： 33 patients suspected of having foreign bodies aspiration were examined by using multislice spiral CT . 说明：主动句是 The doctor suspected these patients of having foreign bodies aspiration. 被动句These patients were suspected of having foreign bodies aspiration .在此句中 suspect用于过去分词 短语作后置定语，系非谓语形式。
原译：The imaging appearance was
absolutely identical to that seen during operation . 改正：The imaging appearance was absolutely identical with that seen during operation. 说明：汉语里“与. . . 相同或相似 ” 都是“与 ”， 英 语却要用不同的介词，即 identical with， similar to，还有the same as等，这都属英 语的固定搭配。
有时还涉及名词或代词的单复数问题。如：
原译：The rates of bypass grafts旁路搭 桥 itself (proximal，medial and distal) that could be evaluated were 97. 0%，100% and 97. 0%，respectively . 中文：桥血管本身近、中、远三段的可评 价率分别为 97. 0%、 100% 和 97.0%。 修改：bypass grafts itself应改为 bypass grafts themselves(注意 bypass grafts 是复数，反身代词应与之一致 ) .
原译： 17 tumors were round or oval
shape，and 3 were irregular shape . 改正： 17 tumors were round or oval in shape，and 3 were of irregular shape .
原译： 33 patients suspected foreign
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原译：Spine found
in 18 patients，and 12 of 18 cases showed the signs tethered cord syndrome . 中文：18例合并脊髓畸形，其中 12例伴随 脊髓栓系综合征。 修改： of 18 cases与句子前面 18 patients 重复，应将 and 12 of 18 cases改为 12 of which .
英语摘要中的正确用词
词性不当 原译：There exists good correlation in all cases between diagnostic images and clinical finds in all stages of liver transplantation . 中文：所有病例的诊断性影像和临床表现在 肝移植术的各期均高度相关。 修改：clinical finds应改为 clinical findings. Find是动词，形容词后面应当用名词。
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原译： In diagnosing abnormalities of twins，
MRI is not affected by volume of amniotic fluid， maternal somatotype，fetal position，fetal skull and the pelvic skeleton of pregnant women et al . 中文：MRI在诊断双胎畸形时不受羊水量多少、孕 妇体型、胎儿位置、胎儿颅骨及母体骨盆骨 骼等因素影响。 修改：et al系拉丁语，相当于英语的 and others， 意为“ 及其他，等等 ”，一般用于表人。这里 表物，应将et al换成 etc .， and so on或 and the like .
The concert included works by Mozart et al. 音乐会上演奏莫扎特等人的作品。
多余词和缺少词 原译：Objective：To explore the imaging features of sacral骶骨 agenesis发育不 全in children and the role of CT and MRI in diagnosing sacral agenesis . 中文：探讨小儿骶骨发育不全的CT和MRI 表现以及CT和MRI对本病的诊断价值。 修改：句末的 sacral agenesis与句子前面的 sacral agenesis重复，应改为 this disease .