旅游景点介绍写作指导与范文

常见错误(句子表达) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel.
正确句子：
③(用with结构) With very good weather, Henan is fit for travel. ④(it形式宾语)The good weather there makes it fit for tourists to travel in Henan.
并列结构运用not only..but also倒装
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2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。
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② With the pleasant weather and convenient transportation, you can enjoy a wonderful trip there.
10班佳句欣赏 一. 巧用从句要用对。(6句) 1.The Shaolin Temple is located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, which is situated in Dengfeng city. 2.Many foreigners, who are from all over the world, come to learn Shaolin Kungfu. (有主句才有从句) 3. It is well known for Shaolin Kungfu, which is very popular all over the world.
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假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Tom将 于八月来中国的少林寺旅游，来信向你 了解有关旅游景点的情况。请你用英语 给他写封回信，内容主要包括：
1. 少林寺相关情况: (1)位于河南省登封 市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.) 的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下 2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。
常见错误(句子表达) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel.
病句问题：一个简单句中两个谓语动词，之 间又无连词连接，又不是从句，则为病句。 正确句子：
① (加连词)Henan has very good weather and is fit for travel. ② (变从句)Henan has very good weather, which is fit for travel.
3.表示愿意提供导游服务。
Dear Tom, I am glad to hear that you're coming to China in August. I'm writing to tell you more about Shaolin Temple. Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded by forests and hills, is located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city of Henan province. It is said to have been built
景点介绍类作文 写作指导
介绍旅游景点
1. 整体介绍：地理位置、历史背景、来 此旅游的必要性。 2.介绍地方特色：风景名胜、人文。
3.衣食住行方面的信息。
1. 语言要生动形象
2. 语言表达多样化 3. 时态：一般现在时
1 人口 2 面积 3 气候 4 政治 5 经济 6 文化 7 教育 8 交通 9 自然资源 10 名胜
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1. 少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚 下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 普通版： Shaolin Temple was located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city of Henan province. It was built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty. It was famous for the Shaolin Kung Fu.
(非谓语结构巧结合)
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少林寺(1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚 下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： ② Shaolin temple was built in 495 AD, so it has a long history. ③ Built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty, Shaolin temple has a long history. 丰富内容加从句
10班佳句欣赏 二.思维开阔巧拓展。(6句) 1. Shaolin Temple is one of the best temples in China. 2. Apart from this, it will be convenient to go out because of the smooth transportation. 3. Because of Shaolin Kungfu, Shaolin Temple is becoming more and more popular all over the world.
常见错误(句子表达) 1. Shaolin Temple at the foot of Songshan mountain. 2. Shaolin Temple in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句问题：无谓语动词 正确句子：Shaolin Temple is / is located at _________________at the foot of Songshan mountain.
10班佳句欣赏 三. 学以致用高境界。(3句) 1. You must keep your eyes open if you are want to make your trip to Songshan Mountain enjoyable and worthwhile. 2. It is convenient for you to visit Shaolin Temple. 3. If you want to go, I'll provide guide service for you and give you a warm welcome.
普通版：
① The weather there is pleasant and
the transportation is convenient.
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2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。
升级版：
① Not only is the weather pleasant, but also the transportation is convenient.
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1. 少林寺 (1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚 下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版：
① Located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, Shaolin Temple was famous for its Shanolin Kungfu.
10班佳句欣赏 二.思维开阔巧拓展。(6句) 4. When you get there, you will be greatly impressed by its beautiful view. The weather is fine and the air there is pleasant to breathe. 5. The Shaolin Kungfu is a valuable treasure in our traditional culture. 6. It has a long history, because it was built in the Nothern Wei Dynasty.
10班佳句欣赏 一. 巧用从句要用对。(6句) 4. The reason why it is so popular is that it is famous for Shaolin Kungfu. 5. One of the most important things is that Shaolin Temple is famous for its Shaolin Kungfu. 6. The traffic in Henan is convenient, because you can go wherever you want by bus.
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少林寺(1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚 下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版：
④ What attracts tourists all over the world is Shaolin Kung fu.
丰富表达加从句
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2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。
常见错误(句子表达) 3. Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded with forests and hills. 4. Shaolin Temple, which is located in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句问题：无主句，就无从句。 正确句子：见10班佳句欣赏。
in 495 AD, during the Northern Wei Dynasty. It is well known for shaolin Kungfu, which has become popular all over the world. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I'd like to act as your guide, if you don't mind. I'm sure you will have a good time. Yours,
Li Hua
population 必备 area 词汇 climate politics economy culture education transportation natural resources a place of interest / tourist attractions
必备 scenery 11 景色 词汇 magnificent 12 壮观的 historical treasure 13 历史珍宝 convenient 14 方便的 be located/situated in 15 坐落于 16 因...而闻名 be known/famous for 17 富有/盛产 be rich in 18 具有..的历史have a history of 19 有..的人口 have a population of 20. 占地..的面积 cover an area of...