高考英语作文指导之应用文求助信

read some English originals and wrote a book review.
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Supporting + Key
❸ help me correct it / make some corrections
I am not sure whether I have got my idea across, so I
Practical Writing (Request)
应用文-求助信 ---刘晓
折衷式 (Semi-Block Style)
Dear Sir or Madam,
…(Para1) …(Para2) …(Para3)
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Yours (sincerely),
Lihua
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பைடு நூலகம்
信件写作流程
1、仔细审题，明确写作要求
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Yours sincerely,
刘晓
Li Hua
4、核查文章，适度修改
Dear Sam, (I am Li Hua, a student from our school.) I am
writing to ask a favor of you.
范文（来不及打了）
I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.
to ask a favor of you.
cohesive and logical
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a
reading activity during the summer vocation, where I
read some English originals and wrote a book review on
some corrections?
Using a question to be polite
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Concession
❹ meet after class on Friday/ spare me some timession
If possible, can I meet you after class On Friday?
on writing. Can you spare me some time and tell me
when so that I can go to meet you?
I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking
forward to your reply.
my favorite book Jane Eyre. But I am not sure whether I
have got my idea across, so I sincerely hope you can help
me to make some corrections and give me some advice
写信目的 求助内容 结束语
1. 简要介绍活动
2. 提出请求
3. 提议见面时间 注意： 1. 词数80次左右
original English books English originals
2.
可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
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2、列出提纲，构建框架结构
Dear …,
根据交流对象 选用称呼和结尾礼语 Dear Sam,
sincerely hope you can help me to correct it and give me
some advice on writing.
Being poor in writing, I am worried there might be
some mistakes.Would you be so kind as to help me make
➢ 一审文体：
格式正确，语言得体；
➢ 二审时态、人称：时态前后照应人称上下一致；
➢ 三审要点：
要点齐全，逻辑清晰
2、列出提纲，构建框架结构
--- 框架
--- 要点分布
--- 逻辑关系
--- 语言（词汇、语法）
（动词、连接成分、可用句型）
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ➢ 紧扣提示，适度发挥， ➢ 扩展成句，连句成文。
尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。 4、核查文章，适度修改。 ➢ 格式正确 ➢ 要点齐全 ➢ 语言准确 ➢ 衔接自然
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求助信
内容要点： ---写信目的
-->说明困难 -->请求帮助 -->感谢并期待答复
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求助信
起首句（the opening sentence）
➢ Hope for an early reply
➢ I would be grateful if you could…
➢ I would appreciate it if you could…
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求助信
表示求助的常用句式 ➢ Would you be so kind as to…? ➢ Is it possible that…? ➢ I sincerely hope that you can…
Concession If you are avialable after class on Friday, please tell
me and I will meet you in your office.
Result
Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you?
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ❺ thanks and expectation
I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your kind reply.
4、核查文章，适度修改 Dear Sam,
格式、要点、语言
(I am Li Hua, a student from our school.) I am writing
…(Para1) 写信目的
Yours respectfully,
…(Para2)
说明困难 ➢ 介绍活动 请求帮助
Yours truly, Yours sincerely,
➢ 提出请求 &约定时间
感谢并期待答复
Yours (sincerely),
Li Hua
2017-9-15
要点罗列
❶ ask you a favor ❷ sign up for a reading activity and write a book review ❸ help me correct it /make some corrections ❹ meet after class on Friday/ spare me some time ❺ thanks and expectations
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Supporting + Key
❷ sign up for a reading activity and write a book review
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for an
English origial reading activity during the summer
vocation. I wrote a book review on my favorite book
Jane Eyre.
non-restrictive clause
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a
reading activity during the summer vocation, where I
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ❶ ask you a favor
highly related
I am writing to ask you a favor. loosely related
I am Li Hua, a student from our school. I am writing to ask you a favor.
➢ I’m writing to ask you a fovor.
➢ Would you do me a favor? 结束语 (the closing sentence)
➢ I sincerely hope you can…
➢ I am looking forward to your early reply.
1、仔细审题，明确写作要求 (1) 文体 求助信
假如你是李华，暑假参加了某 (2) 人称 第一人称
微信公众号（Wechat official account）举行的英语原版书阅读
(3) 时态
一般现在时 一般将来时
活动，并写了一篇书评（a book review）。现你用英语给外教 (4) 要点 Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你当面 批改书评，内容包括：
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
2017-9-15
刘晓
---Thanks---
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