(完整word版)2017英语专四作文讲评及写作指导.docx

TEM4新题型写作

题型变化：

Previously ：陈述观点——论证观点——得出结论

Now：概括材料——提出观点并论证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）

材料作文 Tactics：

1.仔细审题，分析材料（ 2-3mins）

2.列出提纲，确定布局（ 3-4mins）

Para. 1. 引出话题，概括材料（summarize ， paraphrase ）

Para. 2. 提出自身观点，列出理由论证

Para. 3. 重申观点或提出建议

3.正式写作（ 30-35mins）

4.检查并优化（ 2-3mins）

评分标准如何总结材料

第一段：Describe the phenomenon/introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides/summarize or paraphrase the topic sentences in the excerpt.

参考范文

With Intelligent Machines to Do the Thinking, Will Our Brains

Get Lazy?

Nowadays, many aspects of people ’dailys life have undergone

considerable changes because of the recent development in artificial

intelligence. Obviously, artificial intelligence has already completely

renovated people ’lifestyle. On the one hand, the contribution of

artificial i ntelligence to the society is prominent and people’s dependen on it is an irreversible trend. People enjoy the benefits and convenience

brought by intelligent machines. On the other hand, people are still

concerned about its negative impact, for example, whether our brains

will regress with intelligent machines to do the thinking.

第二段：先表明自己观点

Stance: as far as I’ m concerned, as to me, from my perspective, in my

view, personally speaking, from my point of view

再分条论证（灵活运用连接词）

1.First and foremost, besides, last but not least

2.First, second, third

3.In the first place, in the second place, last but not least

4. Initially, besides, furthermore, last but not least

范文： In my opinion , artificial intelligence will enable our brains to get

more creative. Admittedly , a lot of work has been done by intelligent

machines. It seems that the function of people has been weakened and

people ‘brains have been replaced. As a matter of fact, thanks to

intelligent machines, people can expand their creative energy and add

new varieties. Simply speaking, when people are free from tedious,

repetitive, sometimes even dangerous work, work efficiency will

undoubtedly be improved. As a result, people can spare more time to

do what they want and pursue what they dream of, which is the premise

of creativity. Moreover, creativity stems primarily from knowledge and

thinking. Once people have the opportunity to do more thinking and

learning, their intelligence would be enhanced rather than weakened.

第三段： enrich your restatement/express your hopes/give suggestions

All in all, in a nutshell, to sum up, in brief, in short, in summary, in

conclusion⋯

Based on the above exhaustive elaboration, it’ s quite natural to come to the conclusion that⋯

范文： Although artificial intelligence is the exhibition of people’s high degree of creative power, it should be noted that it is like a double-edged

sword. The sensible choice is to embrace its advantages and cope with the problems it has aroused. This is what an advanced and rational society

should be like.