期末英语漫画类作文讲解

读图
1. 漫画的题目 眼睛
2. 漫画的画面 细节
3. 漫画的文字 观点 4. 漫画的夸张 寓意
• Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.
This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
Part 3 Give your opinions
• • • • I think/believe that As far as I’m concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, • should 2/3 • It is better/advisable to… • I consider it necessary…
To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things.
Followed by many students, she walked out of the room
What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.
谋篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows…
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Describe the picture
We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.
从句
The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.
So curious was the couple about wild 倒装 plants that they decided to travel to the forest. Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.
…Let’s look at the picture above/first.
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Describe the picture
The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”
表示解释、说明关系
such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on
表示结论
in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion
(五／三)
2. To use complicated structures
People suggest that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be 被动语态
put off.
She walked out of the room and many students 非谓语动词 followed her.
My version:
For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear.
表示时间、顺序关系
first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing ... for another, in the end,
表示递进、强调关系
besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all
It was not until in 1920 that regular radio 强调句 broadcasts began.
Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters. 虚拟语气
But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it describes vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are…/…ie is about …
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题目
画面
文字
夸张
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The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education. But they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don’t want to continue their studies.