A birthday party(英语写作)

A birthday party
Today is my birthday. It is the twenty-eighth of July. It is Saturday. I had an English lesson in the afternoon. My foreign teacher, Iryan had a birthday party for me in the lesson.
When I entered the classroom, I saw a big card on the blackboard. It was very beautiful. And everybody blessed me. Oh, our teacher came in and said “Hi, children. Today is Angel’s birthday. Let’s have a birthday party.”“Ok”, we cheered. First, we ate a cake. It was big and nice. There was a Mickey Mouse on the cake. The cake was made by my classmate Steven’s father. He was a baker. We all liked the cake. Then we took some photos. Next, my classmates gave me many presents. I like them very much. And I sent a little present to everyone and thanked them. Oh! It’s time for break.
“Ok, children. Now it is the class time.”Iryan said. On the second class, our teacher asked each of us to make a birthday card. She prepared a lot of materials. There was pleating paper, plastic paper, cloth, two kinds of paperboard, caddice, color pens, glue and scissors. I must make a card for my teacher. We all did very well. Everyone was very happy today.
I like the birthday party. I will remember the fourteenth birthday of mine because of the party.。