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3.She drinks coffee is four times a week.
is去掉
4.Miss Gao teaches our English.
us
5.She has a short hair and with a glasses.
a去掉 wears (a pair of) glasses
Miss Gao is my math teacher. She’s a little bit thin and tall. She’s beautiful. She has short black hair. She wears glasses. She always wears white T-shirt. She has a healthy lifestyle. She exercises every day. She eats a lot of vegetables and some fruit. She doesn’t like coffee because she thinks it’s not healthy in (good for) her health. She likes to drink milk and drinks it five times a week. She never eats junk food.
Here are some mistakes from your compositions, let’s see who can correct them.(这里有一些来自你们作文
中的错误，看看谁能改正他们。)
1.She always wear a white T-shirt.
wears
2.She eats vegetables and drink milk.
My math teacher is a beautiful woman. She has short straight hair. And she with a funny glasses .She was a beautiful T-shirt and she has a medium build. She is tell. She is a good math teacher. So we math is very good. She lives us, and us live her too. She likes junk food. But she try to eat junk food three times a week. So she has a healthy lifstyle.（此同学 上次大考94分）
9.She don’t like junk food.
She doesn’t like junk food.
10.She always goes skateboard.
She always gLeabharlann Baidues skateboarding.
11.She goes to work never by bus and she by bike.
I have an interesting math teacher. Her name\She is Miss Gao. She is a little bit thin. She has short straight black hair. She wears glasses and a yellow T-shirt. She is very tall. She has a healthy lifestyle. She gets up at 6:00,and she goes to school at 7:00.She eats vegetables and fruit every day. She doesn’t like meat. She sleeps for eight hours every night. Of course, she likes junk food, too. But she eats it only once a month. she is friendly to me\(us).（张铭真93分，4个错 误）
6.She is friendly with us.
to
7.The students very like she.
The students like her very much.
8. She is drinking it once a week.
She drinks it once a week.
She goes to work by bike.\She never goes to work by bus,she always rides a bike.
Here is an original composition from our class，how many
mistakes can you find?And do you know how to correct it?(这里 有一篇来自我们班同学的原创作 文，你能找到多少错误,你知道如 何修改吗？)
My math teacher is a beautiful woman.She has short straight hair.And she wears a pair of funny glasses .She wears a beautiful T-shirt and she has a medium build.She is tall.She is a good math teacher.So our math is very good.She loves us,and we love her, too.She likes junk food.But she tries to eat junk food three times a month.So she has a healthy lifestyle.(修改后)（11个错误）
3.She drinks coffee is four times a week.
is去掉
4.Miss Gao teaches our English.
us
5.She has a short hair and with a glasses.
a去掉 wears (a pair of) glasses
Miss Gao is my math teacher. She’s a little bit thin and tall. She’s beautiful. She has short black hair. She wears glasses. She always wears white T-shirt. She has a healthy lifestyle. She exercises every day. She eats a lot of vegetables and some fruit. She doesn’t like coffee because she thinks it’s not healthy in (good for) her health. She likes to drink milk and drinks it five times a week. She never eats junk food.
Here are some mistakes from your compositions, let’s see who can correct them.(这里有一些来自你们作文
中的错误，看看谁能改正他们。)
1.She always wear a white T-shirt.
wears
2.She eats vegetables and drink milk.
My math teacher is a beautiful woman. She has short straight hair. And she with a funny glasses .She was a beautiful T-shirt and she has a medium build. She is tell. She is a good math teacher. So we math is very good. She lives us, and us live her too. She likes junk food. But she try to eat junk food three times a week. So she has a healthy lifstyle.（此同学 上次大考94分）
9.She don’t like junk food.
She doesn’t like junk food.
10.She always goes skateboard.
She always gLeabharlann Baidues skateboarding.
11.She goes to work never by bus and she by bike.
I have an interesting math teacher. Her name\She is Miss Gao. She is a little bit thin. She has short straight black hair. She wears glasses and a yellow T-shirt. She is very tall. She has a healthy lifestyle. She gets up at 6:00,and she goes to school at 7:00.She eats vegetables and fruit every day. She doesn’t like meat. She sleeps for eight hours every night. Of course, she likes junk food, too. But she eats it only once a month. she is friendly to me\(us).（张铭真93分，4个错 误）
6.She is friendly with us.
to
7.The students very like she.
The students like her very much.
8. She is drinking it once a week.
She drinks it once a week.
She goes to work by bike.\She never goes to work by bus,she always rides a bike.
Here is an original composition from our class，how many
mistakes can you find?And do you know how to correct it?(这里 有一篇来自我们班同学的原创作 文，你能找到多少错误,你知道如 何修改吗？)
My math teacher is a beautiful woman.She has short straight hair.And she wears a pair of funny glasses .She wears a beautiful T-shirt and she has a medium build.She is tall.She is a good math teacher.So our math is very good.She loves us,and we love her, too.She likes junk food.But she tries to eat junk food three times a month.So she has a healthy lifestyle.(修改后)（11个错误）